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February 27, 2021 at 10:16 am #94305
https://docs.google.com/document/d/19XKDhEmp6wnPD6cg-6mgxf8Oz60T1zrP6mDi5nnV2wE/edit?usp=drivesdk
Thank you to everyone who took the time to read over my prologue!! Here’s the next piece <3
@abigail-m @devastate-lasting @gracie-j- This topic was modified 3 years, 9 months ago by Daisy Torres.
"It's easy to be caught up in stardust and whispers when reality is so dark and loud."
February 27, 2021 at 12:52 pm #94322@daisy-torres Cool I’ll try to get to this today!
Lately, it's been on my brain
Would you mind letting me know
If hours don't turn into daysFebruary 27, 2021 at 1:34 pm #94327That was really good and super suspenseful!!! I love Tessa’s personality and internal monologue, too, lol!! You HAVE to post more—please!!!!!! 😃
what we do in life echoes in eternity
-gladiator, 2000February 27, 2021 at 1:45 pm #94329@daisy-torres I’ve left some comments! Thank you so much for sharing!
Lately, it's been on my brain
Would you mind letting me know
If hours don't turn into daysFebruary 27, 2021 at 1:56 pm #94330Anonymous- Rank: Eccentric Mentor
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@daisy-torres Amazing job! I love this already!
February 27, 2021 at 4:42 pm #94337@nova21 Yayy!! Thank you so much!! I’ll try to! I have a few chapters in progress rn, so maybe I’ll get them out before too long!
"It's easy to be caught up in stardust and whispers when reality is so dark and loud."
February 27, 2021 at 4:42 pm #94338@devastate-lasting Thank you so much for reading!! I really appreciate all your comments!
"It's easy to be caught up in stardust and whispers when reality is so dark and loud."
February 27, 2021 at 4:44 pm #94339@gracie-j Aww thank you so much!! That makes my heart happy!
"It's easy to be caught up in stardust and whispers when reality is so dark and loud."
February 27, 2021 at 4:46 pm #94340@daisy-torres of course! Anytime!
Lately, it's been on my brain
Would you mind letting me know
If hours don't turn into daysFebruary 27, 2021 at 8:44 pm #94355This sounds awesome! (I’m a slow reader however XD ). I’ll let you know when I finish though:)
February 28, 2021 at 12:02 am #94392@abigail-m Oh yay, awesome!! (Same XD You’re fine.) No rush <3
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"It's easy to be caught up in stardust and whispers when reality is so dark and loud."
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