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    Snapper
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      @seekjustice Hey, no problem. I do have like 5 other people reading it. XD But yeah, the general stuff is just as important as the normal stuff, so if you are willing to do that, it would be amazing!

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      #65869
      SeekJustice
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        @dragon-snapper

        I’m super sorry that I never got around to critiquing your novel at all, it was bad form of me 🙁 I hope you got some helpful responses, and I’m sorry again that I didn’t end up having as much time as I thought I was going to.

        If you ever need beta readers in the future though, certainly let me know! (Sorry) (I feel the obsessive need to say sorry a lot) (you are a talented writer though, and definitely keep writing!) (just a quick question: have you taken Daeus’ show don’t tell course? One small thing I did pick up in your writing is that you do overuse telling) (if you haven’t, definitely consider it!) Okay, I need to stop now 😀

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        #66026
        Snapper
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          @seekjustice I can see there’s only one thing to be done here.

          *melts chair*

          *grins* Thanks for giving me the excuse. I haven’t melted one of those in a while.

           

          Aaaanyway, that is all right. I totally understand when life hits you hard–happened to me recently. If you want, you could probably be a charlie/delta reader for the later drafts of this book. It won’t be as intense beta-reading, so it might be lighter. But hey, that’s the future.

          *smeagol voice*  And we can’t decide the future now can we precious?

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          #66079
          WarrenLuther04
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            @dragon-snapper

            OOH! BETA-READING! *bounces up and down* *waves*

            Could I? *jumps up and down excitedly* Your synopsis/summary sounds awesome!

            May I? But wait…how are you doing it? Is it on Google (the only form of beta-reading-stuff that I am familiar with) or do we do something else?

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            #66080
            WarrenLuther04
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              GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!

              As always, I’m late to all the good forums and miss everything! 😩😫 Is there still a reader slot open? 🙏🙏🙏 *jumps on top of computer desk and waves to the computer monitor* I hope that there is … your story sounds awesome!

              🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 (😅😂)

              Oh, @dragon-snapper

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              #66284
              Snapper
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                @warrenluther04 Lol. *pats shoulder* There there. You’re only ah… two months late.

                LOL Yes you can read it. BUT, you’ll probably have to wait a bit until I’m done with this round of edits. Then, I’ll ask for another round of beta-readers (charlie-readers). But I will need that kind of people, so I’ll be sure to tag you if you’re available then. Does that work?

                I do it over Word. However, I’m considering changing it to Google so you don’t have to worry about that.

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                #66286
                Joy
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                  @dragon-snapper  Alpha? Beta? Charlie?! How many types of proofreading are there?!

                  You can pronounce it however you want.

                  #66287
                  Snapper
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                    @dekreel Alpha – 1st readers of unedited work.
                    Beta – 2nd readers of 1st edits
                    Charlie – 3rd readers of 2nd edits.
                    Delta – 4th readers of 3rd edits.
                    Echo – 5th readers of 4th edits.
                    And so forth. I don’t know if this actually exists.

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                    #66288
                    Joy
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                      @dragon-snapper Ahhh, interesting! 🙂

                      Why aren’t they called Gamma and Epsilon? (Honestly Charlie and Echo are awesome names, it’s just…)

                      You can pronounce it however you want.

                      #66289
                      Snapper
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                        @dekreel Well, I was going by the military version. Gamma an Epsilon… I think those are Greek? Or some other version.

                        I don’t know. That’s just what I’m calling them.

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                        #66291
                        Joy
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                          @dragon-snapper  Ohhhh, I see

                          Yup. Gamma and epsilon are Greek.

                          You can pronounce it however you want.

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                          WarrenLuther04
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                            @dragon-snapper Ohh……

                            Thanks! Okay, I will be a Charlie-reader! *strides forth determinedly* I’ll just try to be on KP more so I actually get all of my notifications… 😅

                            I could probably do Word. I have a Mac, but I have Word on here so I could be able to do it. I’ll do whatever is sent to me! 😀 😀

                            But yeah, Google would probably be easier. Thanks for putting me on a list for potential charlie-readers! 🙂

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                            ENFJ-T ... I think (haven't taken the quiz in awhile)

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