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@mariposa Good suggestion! I like it. 🙂
@Sam-kowal I was wondering if that was too disconnected. I may indeed have to change it up. Thanks 🙂
@Ethryndal Haha, I’m glad. Ah, I was wondering if that would be confusing. Thanks for mentioning it. 🙂
Thanks again guys! 🙂
@winter-rose First, I think the blurb is very interesting. I agree with some of the others; it might be a tad long. And it might add a little something if there was some backstory to Rook’s avoidance of girls. Other than that, I think it’s great!
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