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    Hope Ann
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      Thanks, @daeus

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      #16326
      Anna Brie
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        I think the shortened version is probably just short enough. Have you ever tried writing a log-line or elevator pitch for it? What the book is about in one or two sentences?

        Also I remember you had been thiunking of looking for a publisher. Is that still your intention or are you doing it yourself? A publisher would probably re-write the blurb to what ever they thought would sell it best.

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        #17136
        Hope Ann
        @hope
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          @anna-brie Sorry, I just realized I never replied to you. *sheepish grin* I’m hoping to traditionally published…hopefully at Enclave. Though if that doesn’t work, I will publish myself. But even if a publisher does write a blurb for me (which I’d love) I like to have my own for blog work and stuff.

          INTJ - Inhumane. No-feelings. Terrible. Judgment and doom on everyone.

          #17137
          Hope Ann
          @hope
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            Also, for those of you who expressed interest in Fidelyon (@dragon-snapper, @daeus …@anyoneelse) I am excited to announce that I’m opening the novella for beta reading. If you’d like to see my ‘final’ blurb (thanks again everyone for your help) and are interest in details or in beta reading the novel, you can check it out and sign-up on my blog here! 😀

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            #17138
            Daeus
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              @hope Yeah, send it to me.

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              #17139
              Hope Ann
              @hope
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                @daeus will do. 😉 I’ll be sending the first part out next Monday, I think.

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