Punctuation Question

[Daeus]

Hi everyone,

I got a punctuation question for any punctuation geniuses. How do you punctuate dialogue that’s in the middle of a sentence without any direct attribution? I’ve always done not punctuation, but I’m not sure if that’s right. Here’s an example.

Mrs. Fletcher gave a touching “Well now…” when she saw him that sounded almost like a purr.

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[Kate Flournoy]

*is suddenly smitten with doubt in everything she’s ever learned as she realizes she doesn’t know*

INFP. kateeverythingwriting.wordpress.com

[Snapper]

@daeus I looked up in this super awesome grammar book I have… you are correct. YAYAYAY! I don’t think that the Well is capitalized, however.

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[Louise Fowler]

@daeus @dragon-snapper, yes, having no punctuation there looks right, but, not to question you or anything, Snapper, I think that the “Well” would be capitalised seeing as it’s the beginning of a sentence of dialogue for the character. I could be wrong, but there’s my two cents 😉 😛

Currently reading Les Miserables

[Ingrid]

@daeus
I believe you have it written correctly. This has always been a point of confusion for me too, but I’m fairly certain that the dialogue should be capitalized and surrounded with quotations. 🙂

A dreamer who believes in the impossible...and dragons. (INFJ-T)

[Snapper]

@perfectfifths @daeus @ingridrd This is what grammarbook.com says. Exact quote:

Rule 2b. Do not capitalize quoted material that continues a sentence.
Example: Lamarr said that the case was “far from over” and that “we will win.”

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[Daeus]

Ah. Well then. There you have it.

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[Louise Fowler]

@dragon-snapper Yeah, I kinda figured I was wrong 😛 Thanks for the clarification – this will be handy for all of us to know! 😀

Currently reading Les Miserables

[Snapper]

@perfectfifths Well, I didn’t know either, so yeah…thanks google. 😛

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