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  • #12544
    Kate Flournoy
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      *urgggggghhhh* *facepalm*
      Either you deliberately misconstrue my words, or my computer does.

      No prizes for guessing which. πŸ˜‰

      β€˜I hammered into Google
      β€˜Christian writing teens’;
      It brought me to this awesome siteβ€”
      The website of my dreams.

      Excitedly I clicked the link,
      And had a look around.
      I eagerly perused the forum
      And squealed at what I found.

      I made myself a member
      Without a second thought
      Sometimes that ends in trouble
      But this time it did not…’

      I like that. @bluejay, you have anything to add? Where did you want to take this?

      Kate Flournoy
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        Daeus
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          @kate-flournoy

          First we ate ice cream
          Then cookies then candy
          Now we eat mangos
          Oh, boy! They are dandy

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          #12548
          Kate Flournoy
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            @Daeus

            And then we have knightings,
            And sparrings with words,
            Though sometimes those sparrings
            Grow rather absurd.


            @bluejay
            get over here, we’re ruining your topic. πŸ˜€

            Kate Flournoy
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              I just realized we both switched meter in those last two verses… It’s neat how we do that without even realizing, isn’t it?

              Daeus
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                @kate-flournoy Quite neat. It’s like blind dancing, only without the feet.

                We’re so Brittish we use meters instead.

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                #12551
                Kate Flournoy
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                  @Daeus… what?

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                  Daeus
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                    @kate-flournoy

                    dancing=cordination
                    blind=without thought
                    Ya ain’t got feet, you’re gonna trip and fall
                    So we use metres instead of feet (Brittish thing to do)
                    Meter=rythme – what you were talking about

                    Heh

                    Heh heh

                    humph

                    … yeah *groans*

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                    #12554
                    Kate Flournoy
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                      @Daeus oh! Now I get it— very clever. πŸ˜€

                      No, really.

                      My fault I didn’t get it at first. πŸ˜‰ My head must be screwed on front-ways for once, making my brain very sluggish. *chuckles*

                      • This reply was modified 8 years, 6 months ago by Kate Flournoy.
                      Faith Kindred
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                        As I read through lots of forums,
                        A clear thought came to me.
                        Everyone on this here site
                        Is all good friends, you see.

                        With talk of things like dragons,
                        And how Kate became one,
                        I laughed and cried and laughed again.
                        Boy, this place is fun!

                        And now we all are writing
                        A special poem here
                        About how awesome this place is.
                        We’ll stay all through the year!

                        There. I added a few stanzas πŸ˜‰ (@kate-flournoy, you’re right. Poetry is really fun!)

                        #12576
                        BlueJay
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                          This is AWESOME. You guys have done so much since I was gone. It’s looking great. *Stares into the distance and dreams of mango*

                          @daeus
                          @faithdk @kate-flournoy

                          #12602
                          BlueJay
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                            β€˜I hammered into Google
                            β€˜Christian writing teens’;
                            It brought me to this awesome siteβ€”
                            The website of my dreams.

                            Excitedly I clicked the link,
                            And had a look around.
                            I eagerly perused the forum
                            And squealed at what I found.

                            I made myself a member
                            Without a second thought
                            Sometimes that ends in trouble
                            But this time it did not…’

                            First we ate ice cream
                            Then cookies then candy
                            Now we eat mangos
                            Oh, boy! They are dandy

                            And then we have knightings,
                            And sparrings with words,
                            Though sometimes those sparrings
                            Grow rather absurd.

                            As I read through lots of forums,
                            A clear thought came to me.
                            Everyone on this here site
                            Is all good friends, you see.

                            With talk of things like dragons,
                            And how Kate became one,
                            I laughed and cried and laughed again.
                            Boy, this place is fun!

                            And now we all are writing
                            A special poem here
                            About how awesome this place is.
                            We’ll stay all through the year!

                            Right, this is what we’ve got. It looks awesome. Someone else what to suggest a topic and we can do the same thing again??? (I love your verse @faithdk about writing this poem. That was clever.) πŸ™‚

                            @daeus
                            @kate-flournoy @overcomer @gretald @ingridrd

                            #12613
                            Greta
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                              Ooo, I like it. πŸ™‚

                              #12637
                              Faith Kindred
                              @faithdk
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                                Thanks @bluejay! This poem looks great guys πŸ˜‰

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