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May 5, 2016 at 9:23 pm #12544
*urgggggghhhh* *facepalm*
Either you deliberately misconstrue my words, or my computer does.No prizes for guessing which. π
βI hammered into Google
βChristian writing teens’;
It brought me to this awesome siteβ
The website of my dreams.Excitedly I clicked the link,
And had a look around.
I eagerly perused the forum
And squealed at what I found.I made myself a member
Without a second thought
Sometimes that ends in trouble
But this time it did not…’I like that. @bluejay, you have anything to add? Where did you want to take this?
May 5, 2016 at 9:23 pm #12545May 5, 2016 at 9:34 pm #12546First we ate ice cream
Then cookies then candy
Now we eat mangos
Oh, boy! They are dandyπ’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’
May 5, 2016 at 9:44 pm #12548And then we have knightings,
And sparrings with words,
Though sometimes those sparrings
Grow rather absurd.
@bluejay get over here, we’re ruining your topic. πMay 5, 2016 at 9:46 pm #12549I just realized we both switched meter in those last two verses… It’s neat how we do that without even realizing, isn’t it?
May 5, 2016 at 10:00 pm #12550@kate-flournoy Quite neat. It’s like blind dancing, only without the feet.
We’re so Brittish we use meters instead.
π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’
May 6, 2016 at 7:21 am #12551@Daeus… what?
- This reply was modified 8 years, 6 months ago by Kate Flournoy.
May 6, 2016 at 7:34 am #12553dancing=cordination
blind=without thought
Ya ain’t got feet, you’re gonna trip and fall
So we use metres instead of feet (Brittish thing to do)
Meter=rythme – what you were talking aboutHeh
Heh heh
humph
… yeah *groans*
π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’
May 6, 2016 at 8:10 am #12554@Daeus oh! Now I get it— very clever. π
No, really.
My fault I didn’t get it at first. π My head must be screwed on front-ways for once, making my brain very sluggish. *chuckles*
- This reply was modified 8 years, 6 months ago by Kate Flournoy.
May 6, 2016 at 12:10 pm #12560As I read through lots of forums,
A clear thought came to me.
Everyone on this here site
Is all good friends, you see.With talk of things like dragons,
And how Kate became one,
I laughed and cried and laughed again.
Boy, this place is fun!And now we all are writing
A special poem here
About how awesome this place is.
We’ll stay all through the year!There. I added a few stanzas π (@kate-flournoy, you’re right. Poetry is really fun!)
May 6, 2016 at 10:43 pm #12576This is AWESOME. You guys have done so much since I was gone. It’s looking great. *Stares into the distance and dreams of mango*
@daeus @faithdk @kate-flournoyMay 7, 2016 at 6:12 pm #12602βI hammered into Google
βChristian writing teens’;
It brought me to this awesome siteβ
The website of my dreams.Excitedly I clicked the link,
And had a look around.
I eagerly perused the forum
And squealed at what I found.I made myself a member
Without a second thought
Sometimes that ends in trouble
But this time it did notβ¦βFirst we ate ice cream
Then cookies then candy
Now we eat mangos
Oh, boy! They are dandyAnd then we have knightings,
And sparrings with words,
Though sometimes those sparrings
Grow rather absurd.As I read through lots of forums,
A clear thought came to me.
Everyone on this here site
Is all good friends, you see.With talk of things like dragons,
And how Kate became one,
I laughed and cried and laughed again.
Boy, this place is fun!And now we all are writing
A special poem here
About how awesome this place is.
Weβll stay all through the year!Right, this is what we’ve got. It looks awesome. Someone else what to suggest a topic and we can do the same thing again??? (I love your verse @faithdk about writing this poem. That was clever.) π
@daeus @kate-flournoy @overcomer @gretald @ingridrdMay 7, 2016 at 7:21 pm #12613Ooo, I like it. π
May 8, 2016 at 12:30 pm #12637Thanks @bluejay! This poem looks great guys π
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