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April 13, 2023 at 9:38 am #139938Anonymous
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So, you’ve heard my characters a lot I’m sure but you have no idea what the series is. Well, I’m finally revealing my story little by little. Also, keep your eyes open for my critique requests. I’ll be sharing bits here but only when I want to share without getting critiques. I’m doing my 1st rewrite so I’ll be needing advice on how to go about that too. Sorry if it seems like I’m copying you @godlyfantasy12 but you had a great idea and I’m giving you full credit for it. 😉 Lol
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Please tag whoever you think might like this. I’ll be posting more later today.
April 13, 2023 at 10:08 am #139942@sarafini ur good gurl! If others wanna do this that’s fine too!
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#ProtectSebApril 13, 2023 at 12:20 pm #139951Anonymous- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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It would be great if y’all subscribed like on godly’s post. That way I don’t have to tag anyone. Cookies and popcorn are provided on the table. Waves her magic author wand so a table crammed with snacks appears. They are allergy free btw. comfortable seating is also provided. Cozy chairs and couches with pillows appears. Might as well make this fun right? Lol
April 13, 2023 at 2:07 pm #139954@sarafini
Oooh! Awesome!! 😄
*plops into cozy chair with a cookie in one hand and popcorn in the other*
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
April 13, 2023 at 2:53 pm #139967Anonymous- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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*plops into cozy chair with a cookie in one hand and popcorn in the other*
Welcome @esther-c
I forgot to subscribe to this myself. Lol I’ll be sharing sneak peeks pretty soon but I’m going to wait until a few more people show up. 😉
Forgot to invite you. If you scroll up a little you can see what this thread is all about although I think the title speaks for itself. 😉
April 13, 2023 at 4:29 pm #140028@sarafini Ooh! Cool! Can’t wait to see it.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
April 13, 2023 at 6:41 pm #140044The title is very intriguing…
*Stuffs a donut into mouth and settles next to Esther*
“Everything is a mountain”
April 13, 2023 at 8:08 pm #140056@sarafini
Thanks for the snacks! They’re really good! 😉 Can’t wait to hear more about your WIP!
He must increase, but I must decrease.
April 15, 2023 at 3:14 pm #140206@sarafini
OOo yay! *enjoys snacks* *and spy stories* *is very excited*
"...I did not say to the seed of Jacob, 'Seek Me in vain..."
(Part of) Isaiah 45:19April 17, 2023 at 8:49 am #140269Anonymous- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Wow! I counted 5 or 6 of you! Yay! This is so exciting. Ok I guess I should start with the cast of characters. Today I’ll post the MC’s then tomorrow or Wednesday I’ll post the antagonists. The side characters aren’t super prominent in book 1 but I have a few surprises with them in book 3. Book 2 will probably be the least character heavy (I think that’s the phrase I’m looking for)
Kyle Smith (last name is in the works): a 15 year old (his age was changed to 15 because many people told me they thought he was in his mid-teens when I mentioned his age), a quiet boy, autistic, 5 foot exactly but he’s starting his growing. By book 2 it’ll be mentioned that he grew 6 inches in about 4-6 months, he has brown short hair, small round glasses, wears casual sweats or jeans and T-shirts, he’s very much an INFJ personality and only socializes with people he knows well. Book 1 revolves around him and his POV.
I’m going to stop there and post the other 2 MC’s later.
April 17, 2023 at 8:52 am #140270Anonymous- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Side characters will be talked about after the antagonists. I have 6 that will come into play throughout my story and really throw tension in throughout the trilogy. Oh yeah, I forgot to mention this is a trilogy. I’ll be talking plot and setting next week or at least after the characters are done.
April 17, 2023 at 5:35 pm #140335@sarafini
Wow! I counted 5 or 6 of you! Yay! This is so exciting. Ok I guess I should start with the cast of characters. Today I’ll post the MC’s then tomorrow or Wednesday I’ll post the antagonists. The side characters aren’t super prominent in book 1 but I have a few surprises with them in book 3. Book 2 will probably be the least character heavy (I think that’s the phrase I’m looking for)
Sounds good!
Kyle Smith (last name is in the works): a 15 year old (his age was changed to 15 because many people told me they thought he was in his mid-teens when I mentioned his age), a quiet boy, autistic, 5 foot exactly but he’s starting his growing. By book 2 it’ll be mentioned that he grew 6 inches in about 4-6 months, he has brown short hair, small round glasses, wears casual sweats or jeans and T-shirts, he’s very much an INFJ personality and only socializes with people he knows well. Book 1 revolves around him and his POV.
I can very much relate with the INF personalities. 😉 Can’t wait to meet the other MCs!
Side characters will be talked about after the antagonists. I have 6 that will come into play throughout my story and really throw tension in throughout the trilogy. Oh yeah, I forgot to mention this is a trilogy. I’ll be talking plot and setting next week or at least after the characters are done.
Wonderful!
He must increase, but I must decrease.
April 17, 2023 at 5:53 pm #140339@sarafini Awesome MC! And hey, I’m autistic too, and I wear glasses, so I always love characters like me.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
April 22, 2023 at 5:03 pm #140931Anonymous- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Whoops! Guess I didn’t post the other 2 MCs. Sorry. My week has been hectic!
Jessica (she’s gone through 3 name changes [poor girl XD] Cynthia, Susan and now Jessica or Jessi or Jess depending on who’s calling her lol) She’s very much a bookworm and loves journaling/drawing. Her dad’s an FBI agent and her mom basically hates her (hopefully some of you were able to read my Jessica’s Last Christmas short story. I’ll post that if you haven’t. It’ll give you a great glimpse into her family life, her friends and her personality. book 2 and the prequel short story will revolve around her mainly. She’s 13 and prone to wear jeans and blouses. All my characters go to school btw. Idk why I don’t have homeschoolers in my stories but that’ll change hopefully. Lol There will also be conflict between her and Kyle throughout the series and especially in book 3/the sequel series
Alec: Picture a mini Kyle. Only more extroverted and more leader-driven, 16 and book 3 will mainly revolve around him. There will be a little bit of tension between him and Kyle.
You can probably understand why the tension since Jessica is a cute teenager plus Kyle and Alec are both older than her which makes for the perfect romantic tension in the series (more on that later).
April 22, 2023 at 5:05 pm #140932Anonymous- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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He’s 16 years old I mean. I just realized that it might not have made sense.
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