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  • #81527
    Alien and Sojourner in a Foreign Land
    @william-starkey
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      @selah-chelyah Gee, thanks. *sniff* XN XN XN Gosh, I’ve got a faucet for a nose. To bad it’s bleeding now. I can’t see anything. Of course, I’m hanging upside down, but that doesn’t really matter.

      #81536
      Selah CJW
      @selah-chelyah
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        @leon-fleming

        Wow, maybe you do deserve to be a professor. I mean, I can’t hang upside down and type at the same time. Come to think of it, perhaps I could…I just haven’t tried it before. Never thought of trying, for some reason. XD Sorry about the nosebleed… I hope your computer isn’t getting the worst of it.

        Prendre garde ~ I bleed ink

        #81538
        Alien and Sojourner in a Foreign Land
        @william-starkey
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          @selah-chelyah Oh, well, naturally since I’m Spider-man there are added benefits to the stick-business. not to mention the super-strength. I could’ve used that years ago.

          Yeah, old Jonesy’s just fine. He might even be better since he’s above me and all. XD

          #81545
          Selah CJW
          @selah-chelyah
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            @leon-fleming

            Wow, how come I never knew about that before now? To think I knew you before I knew who you were… *shakes head in awe*

            XD

            Prendre garde ~ I bleed ink

            #81548
            Alien and Sojourner in a Foreign Land
            @william-starkey
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              @selah-chelyah Oh, darn. I gave up my identity. So hard to hide that. Oh, well. Who cares anyway? I need to make a new suit…

              #81554
              Selah CJW
              @selah-chelyah
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                @leon-fleming

                Especially hard to “hide” when you just tell people outright, I’d think! XD

                As to the suit, I’m a seamstress…

                Prendre garde ~ I bleed ink

                #81559
                Alien and Sojourner in a Foreign Land
                @william-starkey
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                  @selah-chelyah About that…

                  Oh, good! I’ll send it to you then. I’m terrible at sewing.

                  #81564
                  Selah CJW
                  @selah-chelyah
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                    @leon-fleming

                    XD I didn’t say I’d do it, just that I was a seamstress… and since I don’t believe in superheroes, with or without suits, that poses an issue.

                    Prendre garde ~ I bleed ink

                    #81567
                    Alien and Sojourner in a Foreign Land
                    @william-starkey
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                      @selah-chelyah Oh, darn. That’s just too hard. I — POOF!! (you made me disappear…indefinitely) But I’m definitely still here.

                      #81571
                      Selah CJW
                      @selah-chelyah
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                        @leon-fleming

                        XD Have you read The Screwtape Letters where he gets so mad he accidentally turns himself into a centipede? Lol!

                        Prendre garde ~ I bleed ink

                        #81573
                        Alien and Sojourner in a Foreign Land
                        @william-starkey
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                          @selah-chelyah Nope, but that’s on my WANT TO READ list on Goodreads.

                          #81574
                          Alien and Sojourner in a Foreign Land
                          @william-starkey
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                            Hey, can you go to Poetry Critiques on this thing and check out the latest post and tell me who posted it? My computer’s wigging out, and I want to make sure that I posted something there.

                            #81579
                            Selah CJW
                            @selah-chelyah
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                              @leon-fleming

                              XD Ah, too bad. That’s a good book! 🙂

                              Return to being an Earthling, you mean? Lol. Sure.

                              Prendre garde ~ I bleed ink

                              #81582
                              Selah CJW
                              @selah-chelyah
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                                @leon-fleming

                                Sorry to inform you that the last topic within Poetry Critique was not posted by you- and it was over a year ago. Hm.

                                Prendre garde ~ I bleed ink

                                #81584
                                Alien and Sojourner in a Foreign Land
                                @william-starkey
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                                  @selah-chelyah Oh, darn. I worked a long time on that. Oh well. I’ll just have to do it again I suppose. Here goes.

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