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@Alia did it? How so?
@kate-flournoy, well, the way I read it K became M, but then he didn’t.
I’m trying to not give spoilers in my reason, so sorry if its confusing
WIP - Decisions
Kapeefer til we're old and grey
XD Okay… lemme see if I understand you here. You thought that K became ‘evil’ like M, but then K wasn’t evil? And it confused you?
@kate-flournoy, yeah, pretty much
WIP - Decisions
Kapeefer til we're old and grey
@Emily its fine if you can’t do it! I’m currently having trouble finding time to edit it myself anyway at the moment! 😀
INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.
@seekjustice Glad I’m not the only one with an insane schedule. 😉
@Alia hmmm… interesting. Okay. Thank you for pointing that out; I’ll have to look at it again.
@kate-flournoy I’m so sorry that I never got around to reading your novella, December ended up so much crazier than I thought it was going to be, and I just forgot. I’m really sorry about that, but I wish you the best of luck in the contest!
INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.
@seekjustice you’re totally fine. 😉 Thanks for the good wishes. 🙂