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    Kate Flournoy
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      @Shannon @Emily @Alia sure! By all means, be my guest. πŸ˜‰


      @Aislinn-Mollisong
      … are you… okay? πŸ˜› What’s a Vytanni?

      SeekJustice
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        @kate-flournoy may I please read it too? *looks up pleadingly*

        INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.

        #53426
        Kate Flournoy
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          Joy
          @dekreel
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            @kate-flournoy Ooh, awesome! I’ll read it this weekend at the very least. Thank you! πŸ˜‰

            You can pronounce it however you want.

            #53498
            NC Stokes
            @daughteroftheking
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              @kate-flournoy STEEEEEEAMPUUUUUUNK!!!!! *shatters all windows with screech* *ahem* *begins sweeping up glass* I really, really want to read it. But… life. πŸ™

              Blog: https://weridasusual.home.blog/

              #53503
              Kate Flournoy
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                Aislinn Mollisong
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                  @kate-flournoy Oh, Vytanni Throttlenight is one of our friends on Aetherlight. She has a nasty habit of fainting whenever she sees something epic. It’s kind of turned into a thing, and has been termed “pulling a Vytanni”.

                  ENTP, Aether-borg Hero with cape obsession and fascination with swords.
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                  #53511
                  Kate Flournoy
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                    @Aislinn-Mollisong aha, I see. πŸ˜› *belatedly revives you*

                    So, was there anything that confused you about the story? How well were you able to connect to the characters and their motivations? Was it difficult to piece together the backstory?

                    Alia
                    @alia
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                      @kate-flournoy, I’ll get started on it tomorrow. today is hectic in my household…

                      WIP - Decisions
                      Kapeefer til we're old and grey

                      #53579
                      Lady Iliara
                      @lady-iliara
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                        What’s a Vytanni?

                        HAAAA that is too funny! Really…she is a very unique character…being a noun suits her. ☺️

                        πŸ‘°πŸ»πŸ¦ŠπŸ’₯
                        ENFJ-T. Arbitrary. Greet at your own risk. *trips on a rock*

                        #53715
                        Sam Kowal
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                          @kate-flournoy πŸ˜€ I finished it.

                          It’s amazing:D

                          The doc won’t let me make any comments though

                          *Giarstanornarak tries to melt chair*
                          Also, Daeus has 22 turtles in his signature.

                          #53718
                          Anonymous
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                            @kate-flournoy So it looks like I’m not gonna be able to finish reading your story. The part that I read was really good. But you know, school, music, co-op…too much stuff constantly gets in my way.


                            @seekjustice
                            For now it doesn’t seem like I’m going to be able to beta read your project after all. Last time I checked, it seemed like you had plenty of beta readers, though. I hope that it works out well for you.

                            I’m really sorry about this girls. I’m sure that y’all will get along just fine without me, though. 😜 At least I hope so… Anyway, happy getting-your-projects-beta-read. πŸ˜€

                            *dives into school books* πŸ“šπŸ“–

                            #53719
                            Kate Flournoy
                            @kate-flournoy
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                              @Sam-Kowal thank you. I granted you access. πŸ™‚

                              @Emily it’s no worry. πŸ™‚ I understand.

                              Anonymous
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                                @kate-flournoy Ok good. Thanks!

                                #53794
                                Alia
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                                  @kate-flournoy, amazing story! The ending confused me a little bit though.

                                  WIP - Decisions
                                  Kapeefer til we're old and grey

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