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November 15, 2017 at 7:02 pm #53424
@Shannon @Emily @Alia sure! By all means, be my guest. π
@Aislinn-Mollisong… are you… okay? π What’s a Vytanni?November 15, 2017 at 7:40 pm #53425@kate-flournoy may I please read it too? *looks up pleadingly*
INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.
November 15, 2017 at 7:56 pm #53426@Seekjustice please do. π
November 16, 2017 at 12:27 am #53462@kate-flournoy Ooh, awesome! I’ll read it this weekend at the very least. Thank you! π
You can pronounce it however you want.
November 16, 2017 at 11:38 am #53498@kate-flournoy STEEEEEEAMPUUUUUUNK!!!!! *shatters all windows with screech* *ahem* *begins sweeping up glass* I really, really want to read it. But… life. π
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November 16, 2017 at 11:46 am #53503November 16, 2017 at 11:47 am #53505@kate-flournoy Oh, Vytanni Throttlenight is one of our friends on Aetherlight. She has a nasty habit of fainting whenever she sees something epic. It’s kind of turned into a thing, and has been termed “pulling a Vytanni”.
ENTP, Aether-borg Hero with cape obsession and fascination with swords.
https://forums.theaetherliNovember 16, 2017 at 12:18 pm #53511@Aislinn-Mollisong aha, I see. π *belatedly revives you*
So, was there anything that confused you about the story? How well were you able to connect to the characters and their motivations? Was it difficult to piece together the backstory?
November 16, 2017 at 12:31 pm #53513@kate-flournoy, I’ll get started on it tomorrow. today is hectic in my household…
WIP - Decisions
Kapeefer til we're old and greyNovember 16, 2017 at 7:51 pm #53579Whatβs a Vytanni?
HAAAA that is too funny! Really…she is a very unique character…being a noun suits her. βΊοΈ
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ENFJ-T. Arbitrary. Greet at your own risk. *trips on a rock*November 17, 2017 at 6:18 pm #53715@kate-flournoy π I finished it.
It’s amazing:D
The doc won’t let me make any comments though
*Giarstanornarak tries to melt chair*
Also, Daeus has 22 turtles in his signature.November 17, 2017 at 6:51 pm #53718Anonymous- Rank: Eccentric Mentor
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@kate-flournoy So it looks like I’m not gonna be able to finish reading your story. The part that I read was really good. But you know, school, music, co-op…too much stuff constantly gets in my way.
@seekjustice For now it doesn’t seem like I’m going to be able to beta read your project after all. Last time I checked, it seemed like you had plenty of beta readers, though. I hope that it works out well for you.I’m really sorry about this girls. I’m sure that y’all will get along just fine without me, though. π At least I hope so… Anyway, happy getting-your-projects-beta-read. π
*dives into school books* ππ
November 17, 2017 at 7:20 pm #53719@Sam-Kowal thank you. I granted you access. π
@Emily it’s no worry. π I understand.
November 17, 2017 at 8:20 pm #53731Anonymous- Rank: Eccentric Mentor
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@kate-flournoy Ok good. Thanks!
November 18, 2017 at 9:51 am #53794@kate-flournoy, amazing story! The ending confused me a little bit though.
WIP - Decisions
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