Need Help on Dialogue

[Anika123]

1) What can i do to make my dialogue better and less choppy to read and flow better ?

2) How do I show two characters aged between 11-12 who are friend talk informally ?

Hope someone can answer these questions

[Evelyn]

@anika123

Hey, Anika! I was actually just listening to your podcast when I saw this, it’s really interesting. 😀

1. I think one of the best ways to make dialogue less choppy is by developing your characters’ individual voices. Consider character ages, personalities, ethnicities, religions, etc. All of these factors contribute to character voice. One thing that I find to be the most helpful when developing character voice is listening to other people speak and listening to their tone, diction, accent, speech patterns/habits, etc.

2. How two characters talk really depends on the individual characters, but typically 11-12 year olds are casual and shy with everyone except their friends. (Along with being adorably awkward, in my opinion!) But they’re pretty open with their close friends.

I hope this helps! 🙂

If you ask me about my book, I will talk for hours. Have a nice day!😊

[Anika123]

@iluvhim18

 

Thanks for the feedback

I will work on that

Thanks again

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