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July 25, 2017 at 10:49 am #38090Anonymous
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@daeus There are a few British people on YWW if you’d like to ask if they could help you out.
*Wanders over to the Scratching quill to turn in my email*
July 25, 2017 at 11:21 am #38091@daeus I have sent it to you. Be brutal. Fight hard against poor literature. 😉 May the force be with you.
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July 25, 2017 at 12:09 pm #38096@Daeus I’m pretty sure I could reasonably manage it. Send it on. 😀
If only I did know some British people. That’d be real fun.
July 25, 2017 at 2:47 pm #38115DAAAARRRRRRRGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! *rushes in and falls on the floor in a weepy mess* HOW DID I MISS THIS??? Is it still open? Can I still reserve a slot? Please??? *begs you from her knees*
July 25, 2017 at 2:56 pm #38118@kate-flournoy, you’ve… lost your mind. *shakes head* Well, what do I say? I’ll add you to Emma’s doc.
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July 25, 2017 at 3:04 pm #38121It’s been missing for a while, actually. 😛
Thanks. Really have no idea how I missed this.
July 25, 2017 at 4:54 pm #38151@daeus Maybe I could send you the chapter-by-chapter synopsis and the first two or three chapters of my WIP? Then you can just give me an idea of whether or not it’s structured and all that jazz.
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Find me at hisinstrumentblog.wordpress.comJuly 25, 2017 at 5:11 pm #38158@his-instrument You can give me a synopsis of all the chapters. A google doc would be best.
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August 3, 2017 at 1:58 pm #38812@winter-rose @graciegirl @dragon-snapper @his-instrument I sent you separate docs you can read the book on. 🙂
@that-writer-girl-99 Did you still want to do this? No pressure to. If you’re wanting to get started though, just send me your email.
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August 3, 2017 at 2:11 pm #38813Ooops. @That_writer_girl_99
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August 3, 2017 at 3:05 pm #38814Don’t you have my email already? From the google doc? @daeus
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August 3, 2017 at 3:34 pm #38815@that_writer_girl_99 Ah, yes. You’re good.
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August 4, 2017 at 12:26 pm #38865Anonymous- Rank: Eccentric Mentor
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@daeus Hey, would it totally mess your system up if I downloaded the doc, left my comments, and then uploaded it to google docs and shared it with you when I’m done? I don’t like finalizing all my comments until I finish the book. 🙂
August 4, 2017 at 1:22 pm #38868@winter-rose That would be fine. I would, however, ask that if you do that, please let me know right away if you think there’s anything major that needs fixed (i.e. a character isn’t coming across right, a scene should be structured differently, I have a consistently recurring stylistic problem etc). I’d like to be able to get to major problems right away.
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August 9, 2017 at 11:57 am #39467Anonymous- Rank: Eccentric Mentor
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@daeus Sounds good! Also another question, how many chapters are in it?
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