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February 13, 2016 at 4:25 am #9181
Hey you helpful wonderful guys out there on the Internet!
Let’s start this off with some backstory. This year I have two writing goals. I’ve failed the first already (that was an attempt to write ‘something’ every day) but here’s the second: I’ve determined to complete one short story every two months. And yes, my Jan-Feb short story has been written! (Passive voice there but who cares I’m happy)
I was wondering if you wonderful Internet dudes and dudettes would care to critique this story for me. It’s barely over 8000 words, but I don’t really want to paste the entire text out here. So…I was also thinking about a good way to do this thing. What about entering your email here, and to prevent spam and robots and whatever other email seeking aliens from crashing your account, put it in this format:
faith hope love 0522 [at] gmail [dot] [com]
Will that work? (That’s my real email by the way so if you put your email then you’ll get my story from that email.) If anyone has a cooler and more efficient idea please inform.
Looking forward to your critiques (if any ha)!
February 13, 2016 at 8:53 am #9183Why don’t you just contact me through my contact form. You can’t attach the file, but I’ll reply to your message and then you’ll have my email address and can contact me directly.
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February 13, 2016 at 9:35 am #9185Same here…you can just contact me through my contact form of my website and we can go from there, if that’s not to much trouble. 😉
http://writinginthelightpublishing.com/
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February 13, 2016 at 9:57 am #9187Anonymous- Rank: Loyal Sidekick
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February 14, 2016 at 12:36 am #9203February 15, 2016 at 7:16 am #9210@the-happy-bookaholic Did you contact me through my blog? Because if you did I didn’t get it…which means my contact form isn’t working again. Which is strange, because I did test it…but I might need to go fix or change it.
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January 9, 2017 at 11:08 pm #23997book worm (dot) ace (at) gmail (dot) com
yeah, I’m late i know
WIP - Decisions
Kapeefer til we're old and greyJanuary 11, 2017 at 2:10 am #24137@the-happy-bookaholic You have a new volunteer. 🙂
January 11, 2017 at 2:22 am #24143Email please? @sarah-h
January 11, 2017 at 3:02 am #24153mark (dot) kamibaya (at) gmail (dot) com
I blog on story and spiritual things at mkami.weebly.com
January 12, 2017 at 2:37 am #24185@the-happy-bookaholic Oh, sorry. I meant that Alia was volunteering, but she forgot to tag you. But, actually, I would really like to volunteer as well, so here is my email:
Sarah (_) h (742) (at) icloud (dot) com. I hope I did that correctly. 🙂 It’s been a whole year since this topic started; are you still open for beta readers, or am I too late? -
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