Music critic and ideas for next verses

[Folith-Feolin]

I couldn’t decide if this went in music or poetry critics so I put it in both

I like listening to lyrical fantasy music mostly Clamavi de Profundis and Peter Hollens. It occasionally has inspired me to try to write my own song or two for my fictional world of Kavaria. I recently (literally during an earthquake and evacuation drill wrote this Anim Travelling song today. I would like to know if you guys have any critics or ideas for future verses (I’m thinking it will have 32 – 64 lines that way it takes me around 1.8 – 3.5 minutes to sing the whole thing). I can also explain any lore about the song if that is needed Here is the song

 

Anim Traveling Song

1. Gather your lamp
2. Grab your sword
3. Through the Warhlam
4. Start we ford 
5. Leave now this place
6. By which
7. We used to live
8. To live 
9. Follow the path
10. Through mighty gale
11. Sit by the fire
12. Tell stories and Ale 
13. Strike up a a song
14. To push back the
15. Coldness of night
16. Of night

 

I will give you updates if I do any more work on it or come up with any other songs. I might also attach an audio file of me trying to sing it. But I have to do work now Flat Fredrick William I here I come!

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