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Ooh, hold on, this is fantasy, right? Or is it contemporary?
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C. S.
So, I have a question: does the world in your WIP use guns? Swords? What kind of military is this?
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C. S.
Yes, they use guns when battling their enemies. Their military is made up of lots of different warrior teams. Each team trains separately under a trainer/mentor, but they all work to defend the country collectively.
If you pluck them, they explode. Goro.
Oh, okay! Here it is so far, let me know what you think I should change:
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C. S.
Aughh, I don’t think images are working! I’ll send you the link on Canva
https ://www.canva.com/design/DAFyww-Q7QI/Hv81tt-pOwDGANl-Kf0o1w/edit?utm_content=DAFyww-Q7QI&utm_campaign=designshare&utm_medium=link2&utm_source=sharebutton
Just remove the space from the beginning, and it should work!
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C. S.
Really? I’m so glad! I think it should let you edit it, so feel free to make any changes!
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C. S.
I kind of made guesses with the quotes, because I didn’t really know much about the character, so some of that stuff could be totally off XD
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C. S.
Oops, lag lol. You’re so welcome! I’m glad you like it!
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C. S.
lol 😊
I kind of made guesses with the quotes, because I didn’t really know much about the character, so some of that stuff could be totally off XD
No, it’s perfect!! I actually like it how it is, so I won’t change it.
If you pluck them, they explode. Goro.
Okay, it’s up to you!! I’m glad you do, lol, since I was just picking ones I thought might go.
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C. S.
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@hybridlore would u like to make one for me? 😊 I’d like to see how you’d make one for Riker.
Do u want any reference pics?
If your not busy, could you make one for my character Paxton Dale? If you go onto Pintrest, under my profile there’s a board called, “My novel” with an insane amount of sections 😀 and a section is called ‘Paxton’ (for reference pictures) I can give you quotes and things if you need them, and if you don’t feel like making one, that’s totally OK too 🙂
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