Landing Page Critique?

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November 9, 2017 at 8:18 pm #52311
Daeus
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Yikes! These tags aren’t working. Let me try again. @shannon @emily @winter-rose.

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November 9, 2017 at 8:34 pm #52313
katie
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@daeus – so I definitely like the color better! 😀😀 the only thing is, Is there a way to make the text a little bigger, so it’s more readable and “eye-catching”?
November 9, 2017 at 9:10 pm #52318
Daeus
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@lifeofkatie On the button?

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November 9, 2017 at 9:19 pm #52319
Daeus
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@lifeofkatie I think I’ve got it fixed.

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November 9, 2017 at 9:29 pm #52321
Anonymous
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@daeus, that looks way more professional. I like it a lot!
November 9, 2017 at 9:42 pm #52324
Anonymous
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@daeus The tags worked for me. I got an email for both.
November 9, 2017 at 9:42 pm #52325
katie
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@daeus – it looks fantastic! Great job!! 😀😀 ice cream: 🍨🍨🍨
November 9, 2017 at 9:42 pm #52326
Anonymous
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@daeus Oh and it looks much better now. Looks good!
November 10, 2017 at 12:20 am #52350
Jane Maree
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@Daeus much better! I haven’t got anything else to note about that. 😀 *thumbs up*

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November 10, 2017 at 9:14 am #52358
Ingrid
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@daeus Ah, there we go. Nice job. 🙂

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November 10, 2017 at 1:35 pm #52380
Kate Flournoy
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@Daeus once again I’m late to the party… everything looks great. Very professional. Nothing to criticize; good work. 😉

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November 15, 2017 at 11:28 am #53298
Anonymous
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@daeus Sorry this is delayed, but the new button looks great!
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