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December 6, 2025 at 7:31 pm #208937
My hand is fine now. I was rather miffed because I burnt my hand yesterday too, pulling steak out of the oven. It’s never bad burn, just painful for ten minutes or so.
Baking is indeed fun and time-consuming
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December 6, 2025 at 8:13 pm #208938Okay, glad you’re alright.
Also, I like the poem
The Protector — Gabriel Mai
As Lucy read the poem, the voices grew louder, hissing their jargon in his mind. He wanted to shout at them to stop, but kept his voice silent, not wishing to disturb Lucy.
“That’s alright, thank you. You read much better than I.” Gabriel tried to keep his voice light, but his mind was plunged into the dark depths of thought. Whoever had brought them there knew about everyone of them, he recognized the references to his previous companions, the ones who had mysteriously vanished after Barnes. The line about himself “Inner thoughts to fight” made him wonder if the person who had written the poem was the cause of those gargled voices in his head. At very least, he took comfort that whoever wrote the poem didn’t know his real name.
“I’ll take the book with us, it might be of use.” He pulled the decorative cloth cover off the top of the dresser, using it as a type of sash to carry the book. “You grab a couple candles as light.” He kept his hands on his blades, suspecting the owner of the labyrinth might be in the house.
Confuzzled, RAE
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Lucy did as she was told and more; she slid every candle into her trouser belt and pockets. The flames flickered around her waist like a burner under a pan and she hissed with restrained laughter.
The poem didn’t make much sense. Was it about people who had already escaped? Had they died? She recognized Gabriel’s title, but the rest of the page had nothing to do with him.
“Gabriel… Are there other people ‘round here? Have you seen any of them?”
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December 6, 2025 at 9:31 pm #208940suspecting the owner of the labyrinth might be in the house.
Not that your characters would know this, but, just clarifying, the labyrinth doesn’t have an owner. It’s sort of sentient on its own, kinda, and more like a force of nature than anything else.
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December 6, 2025 at 9:52 pm #208941@whalekeeper i love that poem hehe
I think I can pick out Huntress and Sniper plus Kefa’s removed characters. Who are the rest?
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December 6, 2025 at 9:55 pm #208942It’s like a Wings of Fire prophecy. I kinda want to draw a thing for it, kinda like this:

(Not my art)
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
December 6, 2025 at 9:55 pm #208943The way I’ve imagined it, the labyrinth is really good at acting like it has a mastermind. It’s not a person and doesn’t have a person behind it, but it can mechanically detect, reflect and manipulate real people’s thoughts. No one within the story wrote the poem; it just spontaneously manifested because of how the labyrinth operates.
Hopefully that fits your vision for what the labyrinth is
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December 6, 2025 at 9:57 pm #208944@keilah-h I know these ones I think
stanza 1- Felicity. Cuz the white hair
3- Mel
9- the Protector/ Gabriel
10- Lucy/Barnes
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December 6, 2025 at 10:00 pm #208945Oh yeah that totally works. None of what you guys have written has gone against what I imagined at all so far. I just wanted to say something just in case.
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December 6, 2025 at 10:02 pm #208946December 6, 2025 at 10:03 pm #208947I kinda want to pull my characters and just occasionally write things for the labyrinth’s inhabitants. I keep getting more fun ideas for more creatures and side characters for this. But I’d also feel bad for pulling characters so idk
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December 6, 2025 at 10:04 pm #208948@keilah-h WoF is so nostalgic for me ❤️ I love that
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December 6, 2025 at 10:06 pm #208949You can always make them lose their way and come back to them another time. The mist could warp time and they’d wander around without doing anything significant for days on end. So you can do something else in the meantime.
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December 6, 2025 at 10:14 pm #208950so we got:
1: Felicity
2: Kefa’s cat prince
3: Mel
4: Kefa’s split personality character
5: Not sure who this is
6: Huntress
7: Sniper
8: Soldier?
9: Gabriel
10: Barnes
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
December 6, 2025 at 10:15 pm #208951Can you guys describe your characters? I’m only gonna draw silhouettes or closeups of eyes or hands or feet or whatever’s important to the character’s arc in this rp, but I still would like details.
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