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General impressions: I really liked it, and find the premise/laws of fate to be very intriguing.
Some things I would expect or be interested in seeing moving forward:
– Juqing and Wanyu meeting
– The relationship between Wanyu and her father or Wanyu and her teacher/his family and the other students (how do they react to finding out she’s “responsible” for the Emperor closing their school?)
– More about the laws of Fate and Juqing’s Father’s beliefs about Epic Love Stories
– More about what Juqing and what Wanyu believe about these things
This is just a thought to get some ideas growing, but I think it would be interesting to see the Emperor believing it Fate that Juqing and Wanyu have an Epic Love Story, whilst Wanyu perhaps believes it all to be nonsense? Whether or not it is, or what Juqing would think, I can’t say. But I can see the Emperor and Wanyu having an interesting dynamic going forward.
@valtmy Let me know if you ever need more feedback on this project. I’d love to read more. 🙂And he said unto her, Daughter, thy faith hath made thee whole; go in peace.
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