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    Sara
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      @whalekeeper

      Girlll for a second I was scared you were gonna talk about my story and I was scared XD

      yeah that’s hard.

      I would just encourage her to talk to her parents about it. Maybe just gently talk to her about your concerns? She might (and will probably) get defensive, but still it’s worth a shot if you care about her that much.

      I’m not the best at giving advice, sorry! But I’ll pray for you and for her <3

       

      Lukas&Livia
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      #182722
      Sara
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        Okay but actually….any of you guys that have read my book…

        is it too dark??

        I’m being legit…cuz now I’m scared…

        not to take the focus off Whaley but all these concerns about stories being dark has got me paranoid

        Lukas&Livia
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        #182725
        whaley
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          @theshadow

          Thanks for the support XD


          @savannah_grace2009

          Girlll for a second I was scared you were gonna talk about my story and I was scared XD

          Look girl, you stay confident and keep writing, okay? 😊 Once upon a time, each of us probably had a dark phase, and may still be going through it. Maybe your story started that way, but now, you seem very self-aware of how your story might be perceived. You’re thinking carefully about everything you add.

          I believe Sara can write about anything well, if she gives herself the chance.

          “Everything is a mountain”

          #182734
          Sara
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            @whalekeeper

            Thanks girl, that makes me feel a lot better 💗💗💗

            You’re the best Whaley!!! <3

            You literally ALWAYS know what to say!!! (:

            Lukas&Livia
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            whaley
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              @savannah_grace2009

              Aw now my cheeks hurt from grinning like a cat 😊🤣

              “Everything is a mountain”

              #182745
              Sara
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                @whalekeeper

                Hahaha 🤣🤣🤣

                Lukas&Livia
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                #182837
                Keilah H.
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                  @savannah_grace2009 I don’t think your story is too dark. I think it’s just fine so long as you have stuff like trigger warnings.

                  Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.

                  #182845
                  Sara
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                    @keilah-h

                    That’s good…

                    I just feel bad because I’m 14 and idk what’s wrong with me…like why am I thinking of all these dark things?!?

                    I know I always come across as more mature, most people think I’m at least 16…and I don’t mentally feel 14.

                    But still…no matter how I feel my age doesn’t change…

                    I’m having a mental crisis *sobbing*

                    Lukas&Livia
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                    #182910
                    Keilah H.
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                      @savannah_grace2009 I don’t think anything’s wrong with you that isn’t wrong with the rest of us lol

                       

                      I mean, I’ve had my charries go through some violent things. I always joked that if I used a character from an estalished story for a fanfic, he would end up with some missing limb or horrific scar that he didn’t have in canon by the end of it (and looking back on most of my borrowed MCs so far, it’s a disturbing amount of true XD)

                      Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.

                      #182940
                      Sara
                      @savannah_grace2009
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                        @keilah-h

                        I guess that’s just a writer thing *shrugs*

                        lol

                        Lukas&Livia
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