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AHH it happened again 🤦♀️
Sorry in advance for all the times I’m going to spam you with my tags before my screen loads 🤣🤣
I just started a new fantasy world with my brother (who should be starting here in KP shortly!!!🎉🎉🎉) and we’re hoping to make it a trilogy.
That’s awesome!!! 😉 And the story sounds really interesting!! Can’t wait to meet her 😁
Andd now I really should go finish language arts . . . I’ll be back in a bit guys!! Sorry 😅
"Be careful, for writing books is endless, and much study wears you out." Eccl. 12:12
Haha Yeah I’ll probably add way more Avengers XD
but I’ll add in characters from Tomorrow’s War
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-Thorne@hybridlore Alright! @keilah-h @smiley @wow-i-almost-tagged-myself…
I can go, if that’s okay! (My brother will be here whenever he’s let into the forum)
Freya
Freya stared at the large building in front of her. It was massive, and extremely beautiful, more so than any she had seen before. Tentatively she walked towards the hotel. There were no kind of guards at the entrance.
Strange, she thought, glancing around. Surely there’s some kind of trap for invaders. It can’t be this simple.
Letting her emerald green eyes wander back to the doors, she leapt forward and in a few bounds was standing before the door. She opened it with a paw and, stepping in, closed it gently behind her with her tail.
There were already a few people standing in the room before her. Humans, which she hadn’t seen much of before. She walked forward and a girl, perhaps a teenager, turned around to look at her.
Freya quickly gave a small bow. “I assume you’re here for the wedding as well?”
Follow your heart, but take your brain with you.
Logan
Freya quickly gave a small bow. “I assume you’re here for the wedding as well?”
I saw Falon’s face, she didn’t trust people, especially complete strangers. the girl wasn’t human but that didn’t come as a surprise, especially to me. After all, I had flown the galaxy with a raccoon and a tree.
“Uh yeah, we are,” I shook the girl’s hand. “It’s nice to meet you, I’m Logan.”
“Yeah, it’s nice to meet you,” Falon shook her hand. “And I’m Falon.”
I turned to introduce Steve but he was gone.
“What’s your name?” I asked as I glanced around for Steve but he must have gone somewhere else. I’ll find him later.
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-ThorneI’m back!! 😁
Does anyone care if I use first person? Or would it be easier to use third??
"Be careful, for writing books is endless, and much study wears you out." Eccl. 12:12
@hybridlore @smiley @kyronthearcanin
Hmmm….
I’ll get to it in a couple minutes if I have time! I might choose a charrie you’ve probably seen before, but he’ll be different this time.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
@hybridlore I might use first person, so it should be fine.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
I did first too so feel free to use anyone you want XD
Sounds good
That’s cool that your brother will be here
My brother would never do it XD
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-ThorneYeah, you’re fine! I think most of us besides me are lol
@smiley Yeah my brother has just recently showed interest in writing. I was super excited XD.Freya
“What’s your name?” Logan asked.
She smiled. “I’m Freya.” She glanced behind her. “I usually don’t travel alone. My friend, Klayden, should be here- but I’m not sure when.” She glanced around at the room of humans. “He doesn’t have a very normal appearance, either. But you’ll see him soon enough.”
XD I’m not sure what happens next. My brain is void of ideas at the moment.
Follow your heart, but take your brain with you.
Logan
She smiled. “I’m Freya.” She glanced behind her. “I usually don’t travel alone. My friend, Klayden, should be here- but I’m not sure when.” She glanced around at the room of humans. “He doesn’t have a very normal appearance, either. But you’ll see him soon enough.”
“Nice I’ll be happy to meet him,” I shared a look with Falon, we were both introverted, but I didn’t want to be rude. “Where are you from?”
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-Thorne“Nice, I’ll be happy to meet him,” Logan said, glancing at Falon. “Where are you from?”
“Yurbril’s Canopy,” Freya replied. “A large forest. I’m sure it’s a long way from here… We live on a continent called the Zutora Spiral. Klayden is originally from the Minolen Marsh.” She cocked her head. “What about you?”
Follow your heart, but take your brain with you.
Falon
“Yurbril’s Canopy,” Freya replied. “A large forest. I’m sure it’s a long way from here… We live on a continent called the Zutora Spiral. Klayden is originally from the Minolen Marsh.” She cocked her head. “What about you?”
“We are from…” Logan was about to say we were Avengers but I elbowed him.
“We’re from New York,” I said cutting him off. I didn’t want people to know about that, at least not yet.
“That’s right… we’re from New York.” Logan hesitated.
He’s such a guy sometimes,
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-Thorne“That’s right… we’re from New York,” Logan said, after Falon interrupted him.
Freya cocked her head and gave a small laugh. “Alright. New York sounds like a nice place to live.” She studied the two for a moment. “Do you know who else is coming? I wasn’t informed who the wedding was for.”
That’s all for now because I have to leave, but I’ll be back either tonight or tomorrow. 🙂
Follow your heart, but take your brain with you.
@keilah-h @smiley @kyronthearcanin
Ok, I just went with third person . . . lol don’t really know why it sounded better 😅
Anika
She stepped into the entrance and stood frozen –the hotel was by far, the biggest building she’d ever seen, and nicer than anything she could’ve imagined. Everything was so bright . . . and tall . . . and clean . . .
Why was she even here again? Anika felt self-conscious standing there staring. It was so clear she didn’t belong there.
She noticed a few people around her age standing nearby and . . . a . . . cat?
(Haha @kyronthearcanin you wanna go?)
"Be careful, for writing books is endless, and much study wears you out." Eccl. 12:12
@kyronthearcanin Nice character design!! And your world sounds awesome too! My brother doesn’t like writing but he does enjoy worldbuilding.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
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