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    hybridlore
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      @rae

      Probably Mandin. I love how much he cares for Nahim like an older brother.

      Awesome!

      "Be careful, for writing books is endless, and much study wears you out." Eccl. 12:12

      #184962
      RAE
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        @hybridlore

        Chapters 9 and 10 should now be on the docs.

        Just note I really do not like chapter 9, and I’m just bearing with it right now cuz I’m not sure exactly how I want to change it.

        "You need French Toast."

        #184966
        Keilah H.
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          @rae ahh makes sense. I mean, I don’t think I have a noticeable accent but I chop off the g’s and whatnot when talking sometimes, so I think I’d type my own speech pattern like that too.

           

          ooh interesting! I like that idea, it’s unique. I think it’d be a cool idea that if you’re planning to publish this book/series, to include a guidebook with maps of planets/galaxies, descriptions and pictures of major characters/creatures (both sentient and not) and objects like weapons and spaceships, glossaries of all the words/phrases you have in your created languages, etc. That’d be really cool, and I always love reading those when I find them for a fandom I enjoy.

          Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.

          #185007
          hybridlore
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            @rae

            Okay, thank you! Yay, Mandin is back 😂 That’s totally fine! As long as you can keep writing from that point, you can always come back and change it once you’re done.

            "Be careful, for writing books is endless, and much study wears you out." Eccl. 12:12

            #185021
            RAE
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              @hybridlore

              Yay, Mandin is back 😂

              Did you really miss him that much!? he was only gone for…three and a half chapters!

              He’ll be sticking around a while until something happens…oh man I just realized how much you’re gonna hate me XD

              "You need French Toast."

              #185022
              RAE
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                You’ll find out chapter 20 or so.

                "You need French Toast."

                #185078
                hybridlore
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                  @rae

                  AHEM… Does this mean what I think it does?? 😭

                  Yes, because I wasn’t sure when he would be back in the story xD.

                  Side note: I was listening to this song last night and it reminded me of your story, it’s called Lean on Me. I’m not sure who was singing it. ☺️

                  "Be careful, for writing books is endless, and much study wears you out." Eccl. 12:12

                  #185154
                  RAE
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                    @hybridlore

                    AHEM… Does this mean what I think it does?? 😭

                    Umm…no comment

                    Oh, and I looked up that song and it totally fits. Thanks for the suggestion!

                    I’m not sure when I’ll have chapter 11 for you. I’m kinda stumped right now. As soon as I finish I’ll post 11, don’t worry.

                    "You need French Toast."

                    #186725
                    RAE
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                      @hybridlore

                      Chapter 11 is out!

                      "You need French Toast."

                      #186783
                      Andrew McLaurin
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                        Oh boy, I have a lot of reading to do…

                        I go by many names, Andrew, Andy, Mandrew, but you may call me... BATMAN!!!

                        #188465
                        hybridlore
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                          @rae

                          So sorry I missed that! I’ll check back up on it and give you some feedback asap.

                          "Be careful, for writing books is endless, and much study wears you out." Eccl. 12:12

                          #188473
                          hybridlore
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                            @rae

                            Ok, Chapter 11. It was good. I liked seeing Nahim with the guys and Mandin haha. There was a lot of unconsciousness and Nahim not responding to people, but I get that (a) they’re fighting spiders that make you fall asleep and (b) Nahim has some issues with talking to other people. Those were my main thoughts. Overall, great job!

                            "Be careful, for writing books is endless, and much study wears you out." Eccl. 12:12

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