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Probably Mandin. I love how much he cares for Nahim like an older brother.
Awesome!
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C. S.
Chapters 9 and 10 should now be on the docs.
Just note I really do not like chapter 9, and I’m just bearing with it right now cuz I’m not sure exactly how I want to change it.
Goat babysitter atm 🐐💤
#AnduthForever (💕)@rae ahh makes sense. I mean, I don’t think I have a noticeable accent but I chop off the g’s and whatnot when talking sometimes, so I think I’d type my own speech pattern like that too.
ooh interesting! I like that idea, it’s unique. I think it’d be a cool idea that if you’re planning to publish this book/series, to include a guidebook with maps of planets/galaxies, descriptions and pictures of major characters/creatures (both sentient and not) and objects like weapons and spaceships, glossaries of all the words/phrases you have in your created languages, etc. That’d be really cool, and I always love reading those when I find them for a fandom I enjoy.
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
Okay, thank you! Yay, Mandin is back 😂 That’s totally fine! As long as you can keep writing from that point, you can always come back and change it once you’re done.
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C. S.
Yay, Mandin is back 😂
Did you really miss him that much!? he was only gone for…three and a half chapters!
He’ll be sticking around a while until something happens…oh man I just realized how much you’re gonna hate me XD
Goat babysitter atm 🐐💤
#AnduthForever (💕)You’ll find out chapter 20 or so.
Goat babysitter atm 🐐💤
#AnduthForever (💕)AHEM… Does this mean what I think it does?? 😭
Yes, because I wasn’t sure when he would be back in the story xD.
Side note: I was listening to this song last night and it reminded me of your story, it’s called Lean on Me. I’m not sure who was singing it. ☺️
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C. S.
AHEM… Does this mean what I think it does?? 😭
Umm…no comment
Oh, and I looked up that song and it totally fits. Thanks for the suggestion!
I’m not sure when I’ll have chapter 11 for you. I’m kinda stumped right now. As soon as I finish I’ll post 11, don’t worry.
Goat babysitter atm 🐐💤
#AnduthForever (💕)Oh boy, I have a lot of reading to do…
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#AnduthForever (Lord Willing)So sorry I missed that! I’ll check back up on it and give you some feedback asap.
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C. S.
Ok, Chapter 11. It was good. I liked seeing Nahim with the guys and Mandin haha. There was a lot of unconsciousness and Nahim not responding to people, but I get that (a) they’re fighting spiders that make you fall asleep and (b) Nahim has some issues with talking to other people. Those were my main thoughts. Overall, great job!
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C. S.
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