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October 31, 2017 at 10:54 pm #50753
Has anybody ever written a haiku?? I’ve written a few…
Stars dotting the sky
Moonlight shining down at me
Shooting stars fly by (My very first haiku π )Mom bought me white shoes
I wore them to summer camp
They ainβt white no moreDreary, long-drawn rain
Whispering its secrets to
The listening earthHere is my Haiku
Wait, that wasnβt the first line!
Let me start overFor those of you who don’t know, a haiku is a three-line poem with five syllables on the first line, seven on the second line, then five again on the third line
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November 1, 2017 at 10:20 am #50779@dekreel Hey, not bad! I’m not sure I have ever written one, but they sure look fun to experiment with. π
A dreamer who believes in the impossible...and dragons. (INFJ-T)
November 1, 2017 at 11:03 am #50781You all will like this one. π
Cream of cow enchanted
Snowy ball made in realms above
Ice cream of joy!(This is a 6,8,4 haiku)
π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’
November 1, 2017 at 11:09 am #50783I’ve never really written haikus outside of what was required for my writing class last semester…I had to submit a few for peer review and I got an A on that assignment, so I guess that’s good?
Writer. Dreamer. Sometimes blogger. MBTI mess. Lover of Jesus and books.
November 1, 2017 at 11:17 am #50785@catwing Kicking myself because I can’t find the book I had written haikus in and can’t remember them
I love Haikus. They’re so fun! The last one is hilarious! π
Bonus points to anyone who knows where the following one is from:
Oooh, my aching back
Might as well call workman’s comp
It’s thrown out again.I also love limericks. π
Currently reading Les Miserables
November 1, 2017 at 11:18 am #50786@dekreel Kicking myself because I can’t find the book I had written haikus in and can’t remember them
I love Haikus. They’re so fun! The last one is hilarious! π
Bonus points to anyone who knows where the following one is from:
Oooh, my aching back
Might as well call workman’s comp
It’s thrown out again.I also love limericks. π
Currently reading Les Miserables
November 1, 2017 at 12:16 pm #50792For all you Eagle fans…
βSwef, swef, my brothers!β
Sweeping, soaring, flying now:
One thought? No. One soul.π°π»π¦π₯
ENFJ-T. Arbitrary. Greet at your own risk. *trips on a rock*November 1, 2017 at 12:26 pm #50793Dreams like a podcast
Downloading truth in my ears,
They tell me cool stuff.
(Anyone know what this is from??)A dreamer who believes in the impossible...and dragons. (INFJ-T)
November 1, 2017 at 12:42 pm #50795@daeus nice, you forgot to add chocolate or raspberries to it π does everyone round here really like raspberries or is it an inside joke I’ve yet to catch on to?
~I donβt know what Iβm doing~
November 1, 2017 at 1:04 pm #50798I’m on a hiatus yes…but I just had to say it– @perfectfifths It’s from Sumo of the Opera, Veggietales-the Potato said it.
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November 1, 2017 at 2:24 pm #50803@ingridrd That sounds like something Apollo would say. Is it from Trials of Apollo?
Writer. Dreamer. Sometimes blogger. MBTI mess. Lover of Jesus and books.
November 1, 2017 at 2:47 pm #50812@that_writer_girl_99 Close…it’s from Percy Jackson and the Olympians.
A dreamer who believes in the impossible...and dragons. (INFJ-T)
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@dekreel Awesome! Those are great. Nice that they don’t have to rhyme. π
@salome01w4g I love raspberries! And ice cream and chocolate and, sorry everyone, coffee. Are there any other coffee traitors on here? ‘Fess up!November 1, 2017 at 3:09 pm #50823@emily … *sheepishly raises hand* I’m a traitor for loving coffee????
~I donβt know what Iβm doing~
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