Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come

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    Koshka
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      @ellette-giselle

      Hopefully not? But right now…maybe.

      *Deep sigh of weariness*

      Life is nuts right now. So yeah, it might take something kinda out there to stop my in my hamster wheel of days.

      I should be back to something like normal in…two weeks?

      A cup of tea is cheaper than therapy.

      #202188
      Ellette Giselle
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        @koshka

        well then, prepare for impact. 🤣

         

        Collage I’m guessing? Or is your semester over already?

        No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.

        #202198
        Koshka
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          @ellette-giselle

          O.O

          Yeah, entering finals and graduation, then transferring to a university for next fall.

          A cup of tea is cheaper than therapy.

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          hybridlore
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            @ellette-giselle

            Wow. That was rough.

            Poor Aelic. 😭

            (I’m wondering what’s happening to Aiden now that Martin believed and died too. It would have been tough to see his brother and his cousin killed like that.)

            "Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C. S.

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            Ellette Giselle
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              @koshka

              Ooo yay! Graduation!

               

              oh! So are you leaving home, or is it close enough to access?

               

               

               

              No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.

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              Koshka
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                @ellette-giselle

                It’s close enough to commute, about 40 minutes one way (so not amazing, but not bad).

                A cup of tea is cheaper than therapy.

                #202212
                Ellette Giselle
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                  @hybridlore

                  I know poor Aelic. This is my fourth time though that scene as a draft, (read it several times just for fun) and it still gets me. Ugh.

                   

                  (I’m wondering what’s happening to Aiden now that Martin believed and died too. It would have been tough to see his brother and his cousin killed like that.)

                  I know!!! The poor kid! 😱

                  Guess we’ll never know. Hopefully God used it to reach out to him and open his eyes.

                   

                  At least Martin made the right choice. Now THAT would be terrifying. He’s literally going to die the minute he chooses to believe, and he’s got to decide to take the plunge and trust that God is real. I would argue his death scene was the most frightening one I’ve written.

                  No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.

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                  Ellette Giselle
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                    @koshka

                    Ooo! Yay!

                    Is your sister going with you?

                    No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.

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                    hybridlore
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                      @ellette-giselle

                      I’m not surprised.

                      Yeah, I hope so. Oh my goodness, yes, Martin was so brave.

                      "Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C. S.

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                      Koshka
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                        @ellette-giselle

                        My older sister is a graduate student there, so yes, but no, my twin is going somewhere else.

                        *Mournful sigh*

                        A cup of tea is cheaper than therapy.

                        #202218
                        Ellette Giselle
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                          @koshka

                          Nooooo! The twins have separated!!!  😱

                           

                           

                           

                           

                          No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.

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                          Keilah H.
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                            @ellette-giselle wow….interesting section! I feel a bit bad for the one who believed right before the priest slashed his throat. But I agree with Leon, the sadness is tempered by the fact that they are in the presence of God Himself now.

                            "When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

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                            Ellette Giselle
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                              @keilah-h

                              Yes! Agreed.

                               

                              At least Martin made the right choice. I would argue his death scene was the most frightening one I’ve written.

                              No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.

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                              Keilah H.
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                                @ellette-giselle I can see that.

                                "When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

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                                Koshka
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                                  @ellette-giselle

                                  I knooowwwwwwww!!! 😭

                                  We’re both still at home though, so there’s that.

                                  A cup of tea is cheaper than therapy.

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