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For the reason Leon mentioned. Reflexes happening faster than recognition.
Aha. Makes sense.
From this description, first the yelling and banging, then coming down to see everyone else only just standing there, I thought there was a riot outside. So I was surprised to learn that it was only snow and that there had been no one outside. Maybe mention that it was quiet when Julian got downstairs?
Oh! Well, it was Martin being annoyed because he couldn’t get the door open.
My mind went there as well.
Good!
Point of view violation. If your point of view characters didn’t notice this, neither did we.
🙄 Ugh.
But why? 😭
I wanna do whatever I want. I is the author.
Okay fine.
Julian, no boasting. (James 4: 13-17) You should know better than this. You’ve been in other tight situations and have gotten away. Just because you are currently captured does not mean you are about to die.
Lololol. Not sure if you’re talking to me or him, so I’ll just pass this along.
Does this mean you think they’re gonna get out of this one alive?
No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
🙄 Ugh.
But why? 😭
I wanna do whatever I want. I is the author.
Do you have your Literary Licence from Bagsworth Books like Bastille?
Does this mean you think they’re gonna get out of this one alive?
I think so. It’s still early in the book. You could kill them all off and switch to a different character at this point as the protagansit, but that would be really weird as you have already established Leon and Julian as the protagonists.
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
I don’t need no Literary License.
I think so. It’s still early in the book. You could kill them all off and switch to a different character at this point as the protagansit, but that would be really weird as you have already established Leon and Julian as the protagonists.
hmmm.
No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
completely off topic but Bastille is an awesome name for a character. It sounds like a female name, but I guess it could be for a guy too.
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
Haha! I like Aelic too, but I really liked how you put us more in Julian’s mind than we normally get to be.
I’m like 95% sure they’re going to survive.
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C. S.
It’s a girl.
No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
I’m like 95% sure they’re going to survive.
Wow.
This is all that came to mind.
No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
@ellette-giselle That’s what I thought, it sounds a bit more like a girl’s name.
also that meme is peak humor lol
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
This is Bastille
No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
and this
No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
@ellette-giselle yep, that’s a perfect name for the character in the image.
It just…fits her.
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
*Nods.*
oh, btw, did you read the section?
No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
Lolol.
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C. S.
@ellette-giselle not yet!! I just happened to see Linus’s reply while I was going through my emails. I’m doing animation work right now, but my “work” computer and my normal computer have the same email. I’ll read it when I’m on my other computer.
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
@ellette-giselle I’m def gonna have to catch up on the sections😅🫶
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