Home Page › Forums › Fiction Writing › Critiques › Novel Critique Requests › Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come
- This topic has 368 replies, 7 voices, and was last updated 6 hours, 8 minutes ago by
Ellette Giselle.
-
AuthorPosts
-
May 29, 2025 at 7:42 am #203595
Wait really!!!!
*jumps around cheering*
Yahoo!!!!
Fires will rise to testify that 2+2=4. Swords will be drawn to prove that leaves are green in summer
May 29, 2025 at 10:00 am #203601You know I’m more than happy to help with these books…*glances nervously around*
*Turns up the radio to drown out any bugs*
I’m with your brothers on this one. It needs published.
You pick how heavy I critique/edit. You’ve seen what I do over email. And I’ll probably stick with email, now that I’ve got a laptop.
*Straightens sunglasses*
A cup of tea is cheaper than therapy.
May 29, 2025 at 10:59 am #203603Really?! Ah yay!!!
Wait, you think it needs to be published?! Woah!
Okay, so you’re saying you’ll only give feedback in email, not KP? Or did I misunderstand that completely?
Fires will rise to testify that 2+2=4. Swords will be drawn to prove that leaves are green in summer
May 29, 2025 at 12:22 pm #203604The thing is I relise I’ve been spending way too much time on the computer and my phone recently. I think I need to take a break. So the plan is, once I am done the draft of my current work in progress, to take a step back from electronics for a bit and actually do some real things, like touch grass again. (Ah… grass…). For how long? Maybe a week. Maybe a month. Maybe more, I don’t know, but I need to get away from screens again.
So needless to say, I am a bit hesitant to jump into helping someone with a new project. But one I am done, I would be happy to help!
I am curious to know the premise….
*Enters detective mode and analyses message…*
Let’s see. Yup. Mmm-hmm. Danger of getting caught or killed… Okay. Self-destructing message. Uh-huh… Nazis? Could be just because of the grammar, but we will take it into consideration anyway. Give it a shot… Guns? So that could mean…
A World War II spy story!
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
May 29, 2025 at 1:07 pm #203605Um, yes?!? There is a great lacking of clean distopian fiction, much less christian. These book mat need work, but they’re good, and I definitely want to see them on shelves.
I can use either, but if you want editing, it might be easier for me to use email? Idk. We’ll see. If I did use email, I would probably just be sending my comments in email, having read off KP.
A cup of tea is cheaper than therapy.
May 29, 2025 at 2:46 pm #203608Yes, but I may need a few days or so off first. (You’re probably not starting immediately anyway.)
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
May 29, 2025 at 3:32 pm #203611Nooooo! I am losing my only guy feedback person! 😱
I understand that though.
A World War II spy story!
Funny you say that….. I currently am writing a WWII spy story. F.O.S. But no, this is not WWII.
I plan on starting asap if I’m to get two books rewritten, edited, formatted, and printed by Christmas. That’s not very far away.
So I was hoping for next week (the beginning of June) on Monday. Is that too soon?
Wow really! That is so encouraging!
Fires will rise to testify that 2+2=4. Swords will be drawn to prove that leaves are green in summer
May 29, 2025 at 6:18 pm #203613I think I should be able to, but if I end up needing a longer break, I can probably just catch up after that. I’m a pretty fast reader. 🙃
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
May 30, 2025 at 7:29 am #203626awesome!
Fires will rise to testify that 2+2=4. Swords will be drawn to prove that leaves are green in summer
-
AuthorPosts
- You must be logged in to reply to this topic.