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    Ellette Giselle
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      @hybridlore

       

      Wait really!!!!

       

      *jumps around cheering*

       

      Yahoo!!!!

       

      Fires will rise to testify that 2+2=4. Swords will be drawn to prove that leaves are green in summer

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      Koshka
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        @ellette-giselle

        You know I’m more than happy to help with these books…*glances nervously around*

        *Turns up the radio to drown out any bugs*

        I’m with your brothers on this one. It needs published.

        You pick how heavy I critique/edit. You’ve seen what I do over email. And I’ll probably stick with email, now that I’ve got a laptop.

        *Straightens sunglasses*

        A cup of tea is cheaper than therapy.

        #203603
        Ellette Giselle
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          @koshka

          Really?! Ah yay!!!

           

          Wait, you think it needs to be published?! Woah!

           

          Okay, so you’re saying you’ll only give feedback in email, not KP? Or did I misunderstand that completely?

          Fires will rise to testify that 2+2=4. Swords will be drawn to prove that leaves are green in summer

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          Linus Smallprint
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            @ellette-giselle

            The thing is I relise I’ve been spending way too much time on the computer and my phone recently. I think I need to take a break. So the plan is, once I am done the draft of my current work in progress, to take a step back from electronics for a bit and actually do some real things, like touch grass again. (Ah… grass…). For how long? Maybe a week. Maybe a month. Maybe more, I don’t know, but I need to get away from screens again.

            So needless to say, I am a bit hesitant to jump into helping someone with a new project. But one I am done, I would be happy to help!

            I am curious to know the premise….

            *Enters detective mode and analyses message…*

            Let’s see. Yup. Mmm-hmm. Danger of getting caught or killed… Okay. Self-destructing message. Uh-huh… Nazis? Could be just because of the grammar, but we will take it into consideration anyway. Give it a shot… Guns? So that could mean…

            A World War II spy story!

            Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.

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            Koshka
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              @ellette-giselle

              Um, yes?!? There is a great lacking of clean distopian fiction, much less christian. These book mat need work, but they’re good, and I definitely want to see them on shelves.

              I can use either, but if you want editing, it might be easier for me to use email? Idk. We’ll see. If I did use email, I would probably just be sending my comments in email, having read off KP.

              A cup of tea is cheaper than therapy.

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              hybridlore
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                @ellette-giselle

                Yes, but I may need a few days or so off first. (You’re probably not starting immediately anyway.)

                "Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.

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                Ellette Giselle
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                  @linus-smallprint

                   

                  Nooooo! I am losing my only guy feedback person! 😱

                   

                  I understand that though.

                   

                  A World War II spy story!

                  Funny you say that….. I currently am writing a WWII spy story. F.O.S. But no, this is not WWII.

                   

                   


                  @hybridlore

                  I plan on starting asap if I’m to get two books rewritten, edited, formatted, and printed by Christmas. That’s not very far away.

                  So I was hoping for next week (the beginning of June) on Monday. Is that too soon?

                   


                  @koshka

                  Wow really! That is so encouraging!

                   

                   

                  Fires will rise to testify that 2+2=4. Swords will be drawn to prove that leaves are green in summer

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                  hybridlore
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                    @ellette-giselle

                    I think I should be able to, but if I end up needing a longer break, I can probably just catch up after that. I’m a pretty fast reader. 🙃

                    "Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.

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                    Ellette Giselle
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                      @hybridlore

                      awesome!

                      Fires will rise to testify that 2+2=4. Swords will be drawn to prove that leaves are green in summer

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