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Wait really!!!!
*jumps around cheering*
Yahoo!!!!
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
You know I’m more than happy to help with these books…*glances nervously around*
*Turns up the radio to drown out any bugs*
I’m with your brothers on this one. It needs published.
You pick how heavy I critique/edit. You’ve seen what I do over email. And I’ll probably stick with email, now that I’ve got a laptop.
*Straightens sunglasses*
A cup of tea is cheaper than therapy.
Really?! Ah yay!!!
Wait, you think it needs to be published?! Woah!
Okay, so you’re saying you’ll only give feedback in email, not KP? Or did I misunderstand that completely?
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
The thing is I relise I’ve been spending way too much time on the computer and my phone recently. I think I need to take a break. So the plan is, once I am done the draft of my current work in progress, to take a step back from electronics for a bit and actually do some real things, like touch grass again. (Ah… grass…). For how long? Maybe a week. Maybe a month. Maybe more, I don’t know, but I need to get away from screens again.
So needless to say, I am a bit hesitant to jump into helping someone with a new project. But one I am done, I would be happy to help!
I am curious to know the premise….
*Enters detective mode and analyses message…*
Let’s see. Yup. Mmm-hmm. Danger of getting caught or killed… Okay. Self-destructing message. Uh-huh… Nazis? Could be just because of the grammar, but we will take it into consideration anyway. Give it a shot… Guns? So that could mean…
A World War II spy story!
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
Um, yes?!? There is a great lacking of clean distopian fiction, much less christian. These book mat need work, but they’re good, and I definitely want to see them on shelves.
I can use either, but if you want editing, it might be easier for me to use email? Idk. We’ll see. If I did use email, I would probably just be sending my comments in email, having read off KP.
A cup of tea is cheaper than therapy.
Yes, but I may need a few days or so off first. (You’re probably not starting immediately anyway.)
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
Nooooo! I am losing my only guy feedback person! ?
I understand that though.
A World War II spy story!
Funny you say that….. I currently am writing a WWII spy story. F.O.S. But no, this is not WWII.
I plan on starting asap if I’m to get two books rewritten, edited, formatted, and printed by Christmas. That’s not very far away.
So I was hoping for next week (the beginning of June) on Monday. Is that too soon?
Wow really! That is so encouraging!
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
I think I should be able to, but if I end up needing a longer break, I can probably just catch up after that. I’m a pretty fast reader. ?
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
awesome!
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
IT”S TIME FOR FEEDBACK!
Please remember this is my opinion. You do not have to take any advice I give. These are just thing that I think would be a good idea. Please let me know if you have any questions, or need clarification.
Thank you very much for allowing me to participate in this. It’s been fun reading and giving feedback!
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
Yay!!!
Thank so much for all the help you have given. I’m glad you’ve enjoyed it!! I shall take a look now.
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
Thank you so much for this! It was really helpful!
btw, Tintin is THE BEST. ?
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
You’re welcome!
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
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