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  • #91418
    Kads
    @scripter-of-kingdoms
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      Hi everyone!! I’d like some people to beta read my first few chapters please of some of my fantasy WIPs. The series is called The Travelers’ Caravan. It’s about a group of travelers, and the lengths they must go to in order to protect their true kingdom from the evil that is overcoming it (they don’t do this until book two though, book one’s got a different mission). If you want to know more just ask me!

      I’ll tag some people and if any of y’all know people who might like to read this, tag them too!


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      staring at the fields
      if nothing's really real
      i'll make the winter now my home

      #91419
      Issabelle Perry
      @issawriter7
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        @scripter-of-kingdoms

        Ooooh, this sounds FUN!!!! I’d LOVE to!! But may I ask how this would work? ‘Cause I’d probably have to ask my mom if you’re gonna need my email and all.

        Also, I showed your fanart of Colin on my blog Tuesday!!! Everyone LOOVED IT SOO MUCH!!!!! THANK YOU again for drawing it!!! <33

        God gives His hardest battles to His strongest soldiers.
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        #91422
        Kads
        @scripter-of-kingdoms
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          @issawriter7

          I was just thinking I’d post it here, lol, unless you want it directly sent! That’d prob be more efficient since one of my current WIPs is 24 pages long. XD

           

          AAAAAAA no problem!!!! I checked out the post <3333 I can do more for you if you want! x3 <333

          staring at the fields
          if nothing's really real
          i'll make the winter now my home

          #91423
          Linyang Zhang
          @devastate-lasting
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            @scripter-of-kingdoms I can do line-edits…not really good at analyzing plot and things. But I wouldn’t mind, yeah.

            Lately, it's been on my brain
            Would you mind letting me know
            If hours don't turn into days

            #91424
            Kads
            @scripter-of-kingdoms
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              @devastate-lasting Sure! Sounds good to me! đŸ˜€

               

              also love that forum signature, like thats actually very deep tho and makes me think

              staring at the fields
              if nothing's really real
              i'll make the winter now my home

              #91425
              Linyang Zhang
              @devastate-lasting
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                @scripter-of-kingdoms Thanks, haha. It’s from a song called “Memento” by a guy called TK that I’ve been listening to a lot lately.

                Lately, it's been on my brain
                Would you mind letting me know
                If hours don't turn into days

                #91426
                Issabelle Perry
                @issawriter7
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                  @scripter-of-kingdoms

                  Posting it here might would work better!! But if you’d rather have it personally sent out I’ll ask my mom if that’ll be okay!!!!!

                  God gives His hardest battles to His strongest soldiers.
                  TeenWritersNook.com

                  #91427
                  Kads
                  @scripter-of-kingdoms
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                    @devastate-lasting Cool! I really love music. 100% of my writing is to music.

                    staring at the fields
                    if nothing's really real
                    i'll make the winter now my home

                    #91428
                    Kads
                    @scripter-of-kingdoms
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                      @issawriter7

                      I’m good with either honestly, but I don’t want to clog the KP pages up with my heckin’ long story so perhaps I’ll individually send it out if that’s alright with all of y’alls <3

                      staring at the fields
                      if nothing's really real
                      i'll make the winter now my home

                      #91429
                      Kads
                      @scripter-of-kingdoms
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                        @issawriter7

                        *puts straightest face on, raises right hand in air*

                        Also, I solemnly swear not to use your email for purposes other than writing to you. Because you seem like a very awesome person and I would never want to do that to you or anyone. <3

                        staring at the fields
                        if nothing's really real
                        i'll make the winter now my home

                        #91430
                        Issabelle Perry
                        @issawriter7
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                          @scripter-of-kingdoms

                          LOL!!! Okay!!! I’ll ask my mom later today!!! She’s someone who’s all about being super safe online and stuff is why I’ve gotta ask her but I’m sure she’d be okay with it!!!!!! *crossing fingers*

                          God gives His hardest battles to His strongest soldiers.
                          TeenWritersNook.com

                          #91431
                          Kads
                          @scripter-of-kingdoms
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                            @issawriter7

                            My mom’s like that too so I understand! <3 I hope she says yessss *throws confetti*

                            staring at the fields
                            if nothing's really real
                            i'll make the winter now my home

                            #91432
                            Issabelle Perry
                            @issawriter7
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                              @scripter-of-kingdoms

                              THANKS for understanding!!!!! Me too!!! *dances in confetti*

                              God gives His hardest battles to His strongest soldiers.
                              TeenWritersNook.com

                              #91433
                              Kads
                              @scripter-of-kingdoms
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                                @issawriter7

                                No problem!!! <3 Also totally random, but from talking to you here I kind of get a sense of wanting to get to know you XD because you seem like this SUPER AWESOME person and I really want to get to know you! <333

                                I’m pretty weird don’t mind me ahahah *dances and extroverts in the corner*

                                staring at the fields
                                if nothing's really real
                                i'll make the winter now my home

                                #91434
                                Issabelle Perry
                                @issawriter7
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                                  @scripter-of-kingdoms

                                  Aww, that’s super sweet!!!! <33 I totally wanna get to know you better too!!!!! You’re a REALLY AWESOME gal!!! <33

                                  Girl, you’re not weird at all!!!!! This is actually super sweet!!!!

                                  God gives His hardest battles to His strongest soldiers.
                                  TeenWritersNook.com

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