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September 14, 2022 at 7:14 pm #117492
Wow this is starting to turn interesting @everyonehere
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September 14, 2022 at 7:15 pm #117493Whoa! Thank you for answering my questions. I love those plot twists! They are so sweet…
(I had remembered the “mad” zookeeper, and I was curious to say the least.)
And I get changing it up. It makes a lot of sense, and honestly, is a little more suspenseful this way. (And very like Jocelyn.)
You have listened to fears, child. Come, let me breathe on you... Are you brave again? -Aslan
September 14, 2022 at 7:20 pm #117494Awwwww, that’s so sweet!
And sad. I feel sorry for Vratislav.
His babies are growing up, and he can’t be there… 😢
You have listened to fears, child. Come, let me breathe on you... Are you brave again? -Aslan
September 14, 2022 at 7:26 pm #117496@koshka @godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon
I feel like I’m a little too far in my WIP to give snippets w/o being confusing….but I have this little side project going just for the fun of it….it’s not exactly RP format *shrugs* *hopes that’s okay*
(it’s my 2 polar opposites – Verity and Payton – and I smashed them into a story together XD)
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September 14, 2022 at 7:29 pm #117497Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@queen_of_alvastia. Girl…I’d love to hear Verity and Payton together. 😂😂😂
September 14, 2022 at 7:31 pm #117498@koshka awwww 😢 for the dad leaving!! Also little Zlati even tho he’s seven still BABY TO ME!! AND AHH RASCALLY VULK YESSSS!!!
@queen_of_alvastia @freedomwriter76 NOOOO LYN!! NYX!!! GRIMM!!! I NEED THEM!! XD AND NOVEEEEMBERRRRRalso A’Grend is Ara and November’s home. It’s a type and shadow of Eden. (I got the name by mixing the word Garden and adding an apostrophe XD)
I have yet to name my “world” but I really need to. I struggle with naming things. Luna’s race doesn’t even have a name yet 😫
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebSeptember 14, 2022 at 7:33 pm #117500Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. THEY’RE PROTECTED BY THE #PROTECTIONSQUAD NOW! 😎😎😎 *crosses arms and stands at the drawbridge*
September 14, 2022 at 7:38 pm #117502@freedomwriter76 XD It’s SO MUCH FUN TO WRITE!! *happy squeal*
@godlyfantasy12 BUT WE WANT TO PROTECT THEM!!!! *pulls up drawbridge* Mwahahaha!!Cool! So is your story kind of an allegory?
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September 14, 2022 at 7:39 pm #117503Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@queen_of_alvastia. I’M SURE!!!! 😂😂😂😂
September 14, 2022 at 7:42 pm #117504@queen_of_alvastia @koshka @freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon
Ya know…I hate to do this…but….
Cape flows majestically in the wind as I stand across from the drawbridge. I pull out my pen, which is mightier then the sword.
In reality….This protection squad…it shall never work…
For everything we are protecting them from….
Has.
Already.
Happened.
In our minds.
And our writings.
Thus…we cannot protect them, and in truth, or keeping them from truly living….
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebSeptember 14, 2022 at 7:42 pm #117505That being said…
falls to knees and gets huge manga eyes with tears
GIVE ME MY BABIES!!! 🥺😭
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebSeptember 14, 2022 at 7:44 pm #117506@queen_of_alvastia it’s not an allegory really but it does have type and shadows of biblical things, and it does have God and big themes in it
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
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#ProtectSebSeptember 14, 2022 at 7:49 pm #117508@godlyfantasy12 *sobs* HOW DARE YOU DESTROY MY HAPPY FANTASY!! But I get you – I am killing Kerwin after all….
Ohh!! LOVE IT ALREADY SO MUCH!!
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September 14, 2022 at 7:51 pm #117509@koshka @godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon
Verity and Payton – lost in the woods together…need I say more?
“If we’d turned right when I said turn right, we wouldn’t be here.”
“Yeah, well why would I want to turn right when left was obviously the way to go?”
“It wasn’t the RIGHT way to go then?”
Payton gave her a sigh and his best major eye roll. Bad enough he had to be stuck in this creepy old forest. What turned it from a nuisance to a (almost) catastrophe was that his only companion was a 10-year-old, red-headed, feisty girl who was more concerned with cracking terrible puns than escaping.
He doubted the word “serious” was even a part of her vocabulary.
Great.
“Verity, could you please just let me think here?”
She flopped to the ground under a sprawling oak tree with a huff.
“Whatever you say, Pate.”
“Don’t call me that.”
“Why not? You look like you could use a nickname.”
“Well, I don’t need one from you, okay? We’re stuck here in the middle of nowhere – “
Verity burst into another one of those giggling fits and leaped to her feet, a mischievous sparkle filling her brilliant aquamarine eyes.
“We’re not in the middle of nowhere – we’re in the middle of SOMEWHERE. We just don’t KNOW WHERE! Get it?”
If he had to put up with this the whole time, it was going to be a very long day…why did these kinds of things have to happen to him of all people?
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September 14, 2022 at 7:54 pm #117511Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. Watches you, the wind blowing around my hair and dress
I’m afraid we cannot give you back your charries. They are now protected by The Squad. 😉
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