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September 14, 2022 at 1:43 pm #117405Anonymous
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@elishavet-pidyon. You’re Welcome! 🙂
Hehe, I did before I joined, lol. XD XD XD
Can’t wait! (Ah yes, we’d be even then. 😉 I’ll most certainly check it out!)
September 14, 2022 at 4:03 pm #117411@freedomwriter76 WHY MUST YOU ALWAYS MAKE ME CRY!? I love it though….although I need to go find Bucky now and hug him😭 and go find Tony and give him a piece of my mind…😏😒 *waves* *bye*
@koshka Okay NOW I MUST KNOW MORE!! Umm I’m getting the feeling we may want to add Mikkel to #ProtectionSquadForever? 😥😪
@godlyfantasy12 YES!! I DO!! And if you don’t tell me I shall track you down and make me and if her story makes me cry to hard I WILL KIDNAP LYN!!!🥰#TorrynVelgardProtectionSquad🥰
September 14, 2022 at 4:06 pm #117412@godlyfantasy12 OKAY THAT DOES IT!! I’M KIDNAPPING GRIMM!!! That is seriously *cries my eyes out* *hugs Grimm and glares at you* Oh yeah I might just bring Connan with Grimm into my rented castle! 😭😭😭
🥰#TorrynVelgardProtectionSquad🥰
September 14, 2022 at 4:07 pm #117413September 14, 2022 at 4:09 pm #117414I am SERIOUS!!
Grimm, Cannon, come with me! I SHALL PROTECT YOU!! *puts on glasses* *pulls up drawbridge*
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September 14, 2022 at 4:12 pm #117416@queen_of_alvastia @freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @koshka
You enter, finding yourselves in dark, velvet room. I sit before you in a dark chair, hands folded, smirking.
Ahh…so you wish to hear the story of Lyn?
The story of Cirque?
well then, come on in.
But be warned!! This story is a bit…mad indeed.
But if you’re sure….then all I can say is….
Welcome To The Circus.
(me and my dramatics XD)
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebSeptember 14, 2022 at 4:15 pm #117417*looks around nervously* Umm no I don’t regret this at all… *puts on glasses just in case* 😎
I’m ready for the circus….I think….
*goes to sit in a chair* *trips* *knocks over chair*
Yeah I’m definitely ready XD
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September 14, 2022 at 4:29 pm #117419Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@queen_of_alvastia. AWW, THANK YOUU!!!!!! 🥰🥰🥰 What can I say? I love writing emotion! 😅 Oof, yes, go tell him for me! 😏 *waves* AND YES, I’M GONNA HELP YOU GET GRIMM!!!! *puts on sunglasses and stands guard outside the castle, protecting Grimm and Cannon*
@godlyfantasy12. *sees you* Uhm…I don’t think I’m ready for the circus. 😖😖😖 *puts on sunglasses* Alright…I gotta calm down…okay! I’m ready! Maybe! I DON’T KNOW!!!! *proceeds to hide behind Steve* Just let me know what she says, Steve! I can’t take it right now! 😂😂😂September 14, 2022 at 4:34 pm #117421With a swish of my green-grey cloak, I take the seat indicated for me. Then I push back my cowl and prepare to listen.
Pray tell.
(My drama is in my pen.)
You have listened to fears, child. Come, let me breathe on you... Are you brave again? -Aslan
September 14, 2022 at 4:34 pm #117422@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @queen_of_alvastia
MWAHAHAHA XD
Once upon a night, two brothers lived in harmony.
The eldest; kind, with a sense of humor, and fond of all that lived, and the youngest, a ball of life, making the world his stage; wanting for attention.
Until attention was all he wanted.
Early in his life, younger became jealous of the eldest; how he seemed to naturally pull people to him. How his nature attracted everyone around.
He was the star.
He was the bright light in his parent’s eyes.
But his brother, the eldest, was their pride…
And he grew to despise him for it.
As the brothers grew, they set out from their home, traveling together, wishing to change the world.
And change it they did.
Performing from town to town, the two built a grand showcase of their talents, with the youngest leading from the forefront, and the eldest recruiting a menagerie of creatures to join in their show.
Eventually, their show grew, and they had a volley of races and people traveling with them. A mini town, if you would.
A people of rejects and runaways. A circus.
A home away from home for the outcasts. A place to escape.
The eldest was thrilled, happy to have done exactly what he’d set out to do; make a change.
And the youngest?
He was happy as well.
Happy leading from the front.
Happy being the Star.
Until he wanted more.
See, his elder brother was still the favorite amongst the folks. Whereas the younger seemed to have to work and act, and show-off, his brother had a way of just…so easily reaching people.
And oh…how he hated it.
How he hated him.
And how people flocked to him.
And slowly, his anger began to broil and rage into a deep bitterness.
As their group and show began to grow larger and larger, the brothers decided that they could no longer keep moving from place to place.
And an idea came to life.
An idea like never before.
They would make their little town a true kingdom.
They would found a land.
A place for every runaway. Every outcast. A safe place.
The eldest loved the idea of a safe place for those who felt unsafe, and the youngest saw it as an opportunity.
An opportunity for power.
And slowly, the land of Cirque was born.
The two brothers led it side by side. Younger at the front, and eldest in the background, as it had always been.
Things didn’t change much. Only landscape wise.
They built a town. A neon-circus world. A place where those from the outside could sail in and watch their people perform, and those who wished to escape could live and become a “Cirquian” themself.
And then the tourists would return home in their ships, and all was fairly the same.
But the youngest brother’s bitterness continued to burn against his brother, and his want to be more then just a mere “standby leader” or a “guide to those who come” kept festering.
Until it all came to a head…..
CIRQUE’S HISTORY PART 1!!!
THE SUSPENSE!!’ So…what ya think so far? Part 2 coming now!! But wanted to see what ya firstborn plus suspense 😂 also gotta get Cirque’s history down for u to understand Lyn’s backstory cuz it is all tied up into Cirque’s backstory.
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebSeptember 14, 2022 at 4:37 pm #117423Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. Okay…now I’m scared. 😂😂😂 Love it tho. Amazing story. 👌👍
September 14, 2022 at 4:42 pm #117425@godlyfantasy12 *looks around nervously* Lyn? Oh no wait I think I see…she’s one of the outcasts right? 😭😪😥
🥰#TorrynVelgardProtectionSquad🥰
September 14, 2022 at 4:42 pm #117426Stands near the door, hands clasped over knife hilt.
Ah, Cirque…most intriguing. Pray tell, dear. Pray tell.
First Grand Historian of Arreth and the Lesser Realms (aka Kitty)
Fork the GorkSeptember 14, 2022 at 4:43 pm #117427Nearly falls out of chair from leaning too far forward, enraptured by the tale.
Oh! Thank you for telling, what happens next?
*Fingers sunglasses in belt*
You have listened to fears, child. Come, let me breathe on you... Are you brave again? -Aslan
September 14, 2022 at 4:43 pm #117428@elishavet-pidyon Girl, you’re so much more graceful at this whole dramatic entrance hting than me… *sigh*
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