Does anyone here write poetry or haiku’s ?

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    Allison
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      @elanor

      That is beautiful!

      "Would you kindly...?"

      #146882
      Elanor
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        @acancello

        Thank you. 😊

         

         

        Anddddd to my. Veggie Tales peoples here’s a Pirates who don’t do anything rendition I made.

         

         

        The Pirates Who Don’t Do Anything (Cretans Version)

        Written for a fun summary after our study of Titus on Crete. We talking about how the Cretes who accepted Christ were being transformed from war faring pirating people into Children of the King. 

        We are the Cretans

        Who fight for everything

        We make weapons and go to war

        And if you ask us to be friendly

        We’ll just tell you we can’t be friendly

         

        Cause we’ve established city states

        And expanded beyond our gates

        And we’re never satisfied

        Because we’re always wanting more

        So we wreak havoc on the waves

        As cheating lying pirates

        And we’ll never give it up forevermore.

         

        ‘Cause we’re the Cretans

        Who fight for everything

        We make weapons and go to war

        And if you ask us to be friendly

        We’ll just tell you we can’t be friendly

         

        So we fight, pillage, and plunder

        We strike like angry thunder

        Our survival is a wonder

        Since we never get along

        So we remain hostile neighbors

        And we will not cease our labours

        And we’ll never give it up forevermore.

         

        ‘Cause we’re the Cretans

        Who fight for everything

        We make weapons and go to war

        And if you ask us to be friendly

        We’ll just tell you we can’t be friendly

         

        Now since Christ’s own blood redeemed us

        We’ve found mercy and forgiveness

        His love is such a wonder

        Because He gave it to us first

        So we seek to love and serve Him

        We’ll do anything to please Him

        And we’ll never give Him up forevermore.

         

        We are the Christians

        Who in everything

        Seek to show God’s love

        From our home above

        And if you ask us our identity

        We will tell you of our home heavenly.

        "All we have to decide is what to do with the time that is given to us." - Gandalf

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        Janellebelovedpig
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          @Elanor that’s awesome!

          #146896
          Mallory O’Bier
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            That’s fun, @elanor! 🙂

            This is my most recent poem. Most of my poetry is brief in length. Usually, I get out an idea or a feeling and then stop.

             

            Forgottenings

            Sediments of nostalgia shape a place:

            Like icing on a cake, wrinkles in a face

            Aging, changing, but ever the same feelings,

            Nameless emotions, memories stirring

            Like ghosts, haunting, yearning, wanting—

            To rise from their graves, unbecoming—

            The mere forgottenings of time and space.

             

            #146990
            Allison
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              @elanor @overcomer @janellebelovedpig @starshiness

              Those are great! Here is one of mine I found, I wrote it for some of my best friends who were leaving the neighborhood a few years ago.  Its dosent really rhyme, but the words flow great together!

              The neighborhood By- Allison C

              Everything you said, everything you did

              Changed the neighborhood

              Every idea you had, everything we made

              Changed the neighborhood

              Every game we played, everyone we met

              Changed the neighborhood

              Everything we laughed at, everything we cried at

              Changed the neighborhood

              The day you left

              Changed the neighborhood.

               

              "Would you kindly...?"

              #146991
              Elanor
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                Thanks girls. 😊

                Great job on yours as well!

                "All we have to decide is what to do with the time that is given to us." - Gandalf

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                Elanor
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                  I can’t tell you what inspired this one it just came out.

                   

                  Masked

                  These days I am a stormcloud

                  shrouded in sunbeams

                  With waves of dark thought yet

                  Joy’s fountain remains.

                   

                  If you hit the wrong trigger

                  I might just explode.

                  But if it remains hidden 

                  I’m sure I’ll implode.

                   

                  Like bitter dark chocolate 

                  With sweetness enrobed

                  On the outside it’s pleasant 

                  Until it is probed.

                   

                  Perhaps I’m unassuming 

                  Until my blinds part

                  Then watch out before I strike

                  With a pointed dart. 

                   

                  Though I’m haloed in light

                  There’s dark thoughts inside

                  You say you know me, friend 

                  But do you know all I hide?

                   

                  I may look full of life

                  When in truth I’m exhausted 

                  And at the end of the day

                  Am grateful just to have lasted

                   

                  There’s so many masks I wear

                  To look strong to all I know

                  So that I’m not a burden

                  It becomes a weight to me though. 

                  • This reply was modified 1 year, 5 months ago by Elanor.

                  "All we have to decide is what to do with the time that is given to us." - Gandalf

                  #146994
                  Allison
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                    @elanor

                    That is amazing!

                    "Would you kindly...?"

                    #147321
                    Elanor
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                      @ancancello Thank you 😊 💕

                      "All we have to decide is what to do with the time that is given to us." - Gandalf

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                      Starshiness
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                        @acancello Aww that’s so sad 😭 beautiful poem tho <3

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                        MineralizedWritings
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                          @freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @lightoverdarkness6 @smiley @esther-c @anyone else

                          Poetry! I wrote this one mostly for my oc Kendrick. It could go for aa couple of different charries I have though, It’s just a general representation of depression.

                          Broken wings

                           

                           

                          With broken wings I fell towards earth

                          A symbol of my weightless worth

                          Destined to this rampant fall

                          With no-one there to catch me at all

                           

                          Faster falling, further still

                          Seemingly against my will

                          From this dismal place I’ll call

                          With no one there to hear me at all

                           

                          With broken wings once more I’ll try

                          To reach again into the sky

                          My former glory to restore

                          To feel the way I felt before

                           

                          Faster falling, further still

                          Seemingly within my will

                          So, pull me from this awful dream

                          Rescue me from this never-ending scheme

                           

                          My hardened shell can’t ease the fall

                          Nor give me the voice I need to call

                          In this dismal place I wait

                          Hoping for someone to just relate

                           

                          The ground is coming, coming faster

                          But darkness won’t become my master

                          Quick, pull me from this awful dream

                          And to my former self redeem

                           

                           

                          Reach out please and touch my hand

                          I just need someone to understand.

                           

                          I’m pretty happy with hoe it turned out and kinda want to include it in a book someday, like maybe Kendrick writes poetry and he writes this one? idk.

                          "And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."

                          #147938
                          Allison
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                            @mineralizedwritings

                            Thats really good! I sometimes write poems for my characters too, or even just to pop in places in my book like at the beginning of a chapter or wherever I need one 🙂 .

                            "Would you kindly...?"

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                            MineralizedWritings
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                              @acancello

                              Thanks! 🙂

                              "And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."

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                              Esther
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                                @mineralizedwritings

                                Aww, so sad!! 😢 I don’t think I’ve ever heard about Kendrick before. Is he in the WIP with Tauren and Lesli?

                                Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende

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                                MineralizedWritings
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                                  @esther-c

                                  yep! He’s a later character though, so I haven’t worked on his plot a whole lot. He’s a part of Kaine’s arc. Honestly ig he’s a bit like who Kaine could have become without Everly.

                                  "And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."

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