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October 31, 2023 at 10:22 pm #162191
@jonas @savannah_grace2009 @highscribeofaetherium
I think I shall add Glace, since he got two votes and I know him better than Cash.
Glace Firehead is a type three on Cloaked Mystery’s list. He used to be very optimistic and rebellious.
Oh, wait, I should start his profile with what he looks like…
Tall, about six foot six, with a handsome smooth face that is nicely tanned. His right eye is fiery orange and his left eye is icy blue. He has blond hair that he likes to let grow long (for a guy).
His father, Arln, is Realn emperor and tenth Fettian warlord.
As said before he is very rebellious, and often followed what he thought was right (he was type two). He joined the Wraith Legion, who are the best of the best of the best as far as warriors, and he did well, but was advised (more like forced) to quit training after a while, because he didn’t like some of the Fettian doctrine. And he made that clear.
After that, he joined a Fettian sect and did well…until he went for some training and tests to become some higher rank in that sect with his bestie. His bestie cheated one of the tests (and the Fettian punishment for cheating on that test is banishment from the Fettian empire) and the Fettian found out someone cheated but they didn’t know who. Glace took the fall for his friend (which at this point of his life, his sister would bet he would never do any such thing even for her, soon this was a big leap) saying he did it. Despite his father’s and sister’s efforts, Glace was banished. Oh, and Glace never even told his father or Gloria that it wasn’t him.
Glace wondered by himself, using his excellent training to show up as a cloaked and masked hero to save the day.
His name is the Realn word for ice and he is named so in honor of his father’s mentor, Warlord Glacen. Glace is also adopted, Arln never having married, and Gloria was also adopted.
Glace never knew his real parents, but they might have been somewhat magical.
At the time of Glace’s life in which he comes into the RP, he is pessimistic, grave and like a silent leader. He leads people to believe he’s a really bad guy so they will stay away.
Fun fact, he used to go serfing a lot. It was his favorite sport, he also plays the drums.
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October 31, 2023 at 10:25 pm #162192Oh, and the reason I’m not doing the fun part of his life, is I want to build on the part that’s giving me headaches.
"You need French Toast."
October 31, 2023 at 10:56 pm #162193Compound Fracture
“You have no idea who you’re dealing with,” the man stared up with a grim determination in his eyes. With nimble fingers, he began to untie the knots of the rope pinning him to the chair.
“Oh!” Fracture let out a high pitched giggle, “Don’t I?” he cocked his gun, pointing it directly at his prisoner’s face. “Joke’s on you, I stole your dog! Now I have the upper hand, HERO!” he then proceeded to burst into maniacal laughter. To his disappointment, the prisoner was more focused on untying the last loose knot and did not seem in the least bit fazed by Fracture’s statement. Fracture barely noticed, as he fell down on the floor, cackling.
“Is that your real laugh?” the man, now free of his bonds stood up, gingerly stepped over Fracture and made his way to the door.
“How DARE YOU interrupt my evil laugh!” Fracture screamed, jumping up, stomping his foot and glowering at the former prisoner, throwing his gun across the room in a rage.
“Sorry,” he shrugged. “Oh, I’ve gotta run, nice chat.” in one fluid motion, he opened the door, stepped out, and slammed it shut.
“Well, that was rude,” Fracture huffed, “And I was just getting to the fun part, where I start my monologue!” He sat down on the floor and pouted.
Suddenly a burst of light filled his vision, and everything went dark.
***
Fracture awoke to the feeling of water dripping onto his face. He sat up, peering into the darkness.
“Where the heck am I now?”
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LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333October 31, 2023 at 11:14 pm #162194Glace
Glace Firehead sighed as he stepped out of his portal into his “home” base; his apartment far away from his real home. Far from his father. Far from Gloria. Far from the center of the Fettian Empire. It was the life he had to live, since that incident.
Dropping the satchel from his shoulder to the floor, he slumped into a chair, tired after the day’s excitement. He closed his eyes, ready to fall to sleep with his mask still on.
Glace opened his eyes in another place. He was lying on a couch in some type of stone room. His hand reached for his face, his metallic mask over his nose and mouth was still there. His hood still covered his head, and his hidden weapons were still there. Nothing seemed missing. ‘Where am I? Have I caught a fever or something? Am I delirious?’
He rose from the couch, and cautiously moved forward through the stone passages, his hand steady to grab one of his weapons.
"You need French Toast."
November 1, 2023 at 7:11 am #162198I really like how you started to introduce your villain like that.
Should I later bring in one of my villains?
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November 1, 2023 at 7:53 am #162200throwing his gun across the room in a rage.
That’s hilarious! Was it fake/unloaded? Or is he just being stupid?
Yeah, I think you could. There’s only four of us right now.
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📚 Appreciator of BooksNovember 1, 2023 at 8:15 am #162204Oh my 🤣🤣 Fracture is rather terrible at this XD
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November 1, 2023 at 10:37 am #162216@jonas @rae @highscribeofaetherium
I really like how you started to introduce your villain like that.
Thanks!
That’s hilarious! Was it fake/unloaded? Or is he just being stupid?
No, he’s just throwing a tantrum and he’s kind of stupid.
Oh my 🤣🤣 Fracture is rather terrible at this XD
I know! He thinks he’s super scary and a terrifying villain, but he’s really just annoying XD
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LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333November 1, 2023 at 10:42 am #162218November 1, 2023 at 11:16 am #162238@jonas @savannah_grace2009 @highscribeofaetherium
My villiansKing Vorgan (he would most likely want to kill everyone)
Grathmere (he would most likely want to torture everyone. He’s also extremely magical. I doubt the walls of Dark Castle could hold him)
An unnamed slyiad (she would make devious plans for everyone and may or may not follow through with them)
The Fire Elf (he would want to burn everyone)
The Water Elf (She would want to freeze everyone)
Avan Ram (he would want to do the same things as the slyiad, but would choose one person to be is worst enemy and try to kill that one person [I’ll make that person Glace, since he can handle trying to be killed])
Or I can make one up.
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November 1, 2023 at 11:23 am #162241Wait, It’s Javam Ram, not Avan Ram. Sorry.
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November 1, 2023 at 11:26 am #162242Are we supposed to pick which ones we want you to add? Or are you adding all of them?
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LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333November 1, 2023 at 11:34 am #162244@savannah_grace2009 @jonas @highscribeofaeathorium
You can pick. Adding all of them would be…I don’t want to think about it.
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November 1, 2023 at 11:35 am #162245You can pick. Adding all of them would be…I don’t want to think about it.
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