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December 4, 2023 at 5:36 pm #168279
Those are much more orange than what I’m imagining, and I’m not imagining them as sparky… whatever, it doesn’t matter! How about you make them pure white, or bluish or something so that your brain stops doing that?
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📚 Appreciator of BooksDecember 4, 2023 at 5:38 pm #168282Ok. White fire. Ok, brain? No orange sparks. NO ORANGE SPARKS.
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December 4, 2023 at 6:48 pm #168308Glace
Glace snarled, he didn’t like intrusions. With Klethen busy with the rocky thing, he rushed at Krenna, duckng under her, grabbing the hilt with one hand. He twisted her wrist, popping one if her wrist bones out of place, forcing her to drop her blade. With his other hand, he scraped his knife blade acres her throat, purposefully leaving only a cut. All done in a matter of seconds. But suddenly he felt another presence, a disturbance in the air. Something punched him in his muscle-bound stomach, phasing him little. He twirled Krenna around, pressing her body to his, his knife set to the same cut as before.
“Show yourself or she shall die!”
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December 4, 2023 at 7:40 pm #168314I just realized my above rp has too many typos, redoing it…
Glace
Glace snarled, he didn’t like intrusions. With Klethen busy with the rocky thing, he rushed at Krenna, ducking under her sword, grabbing the hilt with one hand. He twisted her wrist, popping one of her wrist bones out of place, forcing her to drop her blade. With his other hand, he scraped his knife blade across her throat, purposefully leaving only a cut. All done in a matter of seconds.
But suddenly he felt another presence, a disturbance in the air. Something punched him in his muscle-bound stomach, phasing him little. He twirled Krenna around, pressing her body to his, his knife set to the same cut as before.
“Show yourself or she shall die!”
A popped wrist bone hurts, a lot. Personal expierance.
"You need French Toast."
December 4, 2023 at 11:52 pm #168332Krenna isn’t holding a blade. Her blades are made of super hard crystal growing forward from her forearms. This also would make it pretty hard to dislocate her wrist, since you would have to break the crystal.
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📚 Appreciator of BooksDecember 5, 2023 at 7:43 am #168336@jonas ignore rp then, sorry, I’m kinda dumb
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December 5, 2023 at 8:02 am #168342There’s a lot of rules to remember—you’re not dumb. Krenna especially has a lot of things going on
(Also, I’m not quite sure what was supposed to be happening at the end, but Krenna’s splits can’t affect the physical world, if that’s what was happening. Just one more rule to remember 😊 sorry Krenna is so complicated!)
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📚 Appreciator of BooksDecember 5, 2023 at 8:06 am #168343I have an average of 5 out of 30 math problems correct. I’m not that smart.
I don’t like Krenna at this point.
I guess my rp is not worthless, since that tactic of Glace would still work on Klethen (right? Now I doubt myself) later.
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December 5, 2023 at 8:07 am #168344Woosh I could delete it though
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December 5, 2023 at 8:11 am #168346Math isn’t a measure of intelligence as a whole.
Krenna is indeed quite infuriating.
Yes, Klethen doesn’t have any enhanced physical abilities as far as I know.
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📚 Appreciator of BooksDecember 5, 2023 at 8:16 am #168350December 5, 2023 at 8:29 am #168351Yeah, this’ll probably work on Klethen (alternatively, he might do something stupid)
I don’t much like Krenna, either.And also, even if you’re bad at math, it doesn’t make you dumb. Math seriously has nothing to do with intelligence. Some people are more adept at it, just like some people are more adept at drawing, writing, science, and literally everything there is.
Any noun can become a verb if you don't care enough.
December 5, 2023 at 8:33 am #168354I’m gonna let one of you go first before I rp, so I don’t make a fool of myself again.
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December 5, 2023 at 8:34 am #168355Alright then, I’ll go.
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📚 Appreciator of BooksDecember 5, 2023 at 8:36 am #168357Krenna
Krenna tried to decide who to attack. How was she supposed to hurt a creature made of rock, or a guy wearing seemingly indestructible armor? Loop had been right, but Krenna wasn’t about to admit that. She charged towards Klethen.
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