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December 4, 2023 at 5:13 pm #168263
Ohhh…! Okay. Wouldn’t Klethen have gotten totally knocked out?
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December 4, 2023 at 5:15 pm #168266December 4, 2023 at 5:15 pm #168267Just your average fight between a guy who creates portals, an immortal warrior in inpenetrable armor, and an invincible rock creature!
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📚 Appreciator of BooksDecember 4, 2023 at 5:24 pm #168268I think Krenna’s also going to join this fight, for no good reason.
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Krenna looked through the hole in the wall, and down at Glace, Klethen, and Izre.
She started generating crystals on her arms.
“I don’t think that’s a good idea, boss,” Loop said, noticing. “Those three all look tough.”
“I’m tough!” snapped Krenna.
“This fight doesn’t concern you,” Loop protested.
“Don’t care,” said Krenna, striding forward. “I just feel like punching someone.”
She ran towards the portal, trying to figure out the best way to go through. She jumped, feet first. It felt like she was going to fall on her back, but the moment she passed through, she felt herself falling feet first. She landed and orange-yellow crystal blades popped out of her hands.
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📚 Appreciator of BooksDecember 4, 2023 at 5:28 pm #168269Btw, what do the portals look like, and should Glace have noticed it appearing on the edge of his sword?
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📚 Appreciator of BooksDecember 4, 2023 at 5:28 pm #168270Klethen
“Oh, I know.” Klethen said calmly, “But I’ve never been very smart when it came to this sort of thing.”
Before he could do anything, Izre fell through the portal and collided with him. He hit the wall, and his sword stabbed into it, creating a deep gash. Krenna dropped through the ceiling after Izre. “Saíghenim?” He said, more to himself than anyone else, “I should’ve closed that.”
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The problem is Klethen cannot hit Izre, because he would slice right through her.
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December 4, 2023 at 5:30 pm #168271Eh…that’s debatable. Izre is basically a giant Arcweaving construct…basically the same thing as an Eivir blade, except with a human soul instead of a wisp, and stone instead of metal. So it depends…would it cut through an Eivir sword?
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📚 Appreciator of BooksDecember 4, 2023 at 5:31 pm #168272I don’t knowww what they look like :/ my brain UTTERLY REFUSES to stop imagining them like the Doctor Strange portals, BUT THEY’RE NOT!!
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December 4, 2023 at 5:32 pm #168273I’ve been imagining them as a mix between doctor strange portals and Portal portals, except yellow…idk why.
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📚 Appreciator of BooksDecember 4, 2023 at 5:32 pm #168274December 4, 2023 at 5:34 pm #168275Yellow? If they do make any sort of light or anything, it would be white and/or gold.
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December 4, 2023 at 5:34 pm #168277Yeah, idk, whitish yellow is what I was imagining, just like…light colored sparks.
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📚 Appreciator of BooksDecember 4, 2023 at 5:35 pm #168278That’s literally what the Doctor Strange portals look like.
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