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  • #64192
    Rochellaine
    @rochellaine
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      @perfectfifths *confused* Um, yeah.ย  That part was supposed to be a joke too…I’ve known the song since I was a little kid, and there’s a part about if the “straw be too long”.ย  ๐Ÿ˜€

      I was meaningย afterย you finish sewing, you’ll eventually have to cut the thread, or it will be hanging all over the place and look silly.

      I wonder if the hole in the blanket could go all the way around like the bucket song could?ย  *tries* Hole, thread, cut, sharpen…no, I don’t think so. ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€

      "Sylvester - Sylvester!"

      #64195
      Ben Powell
      @supermonkey42
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        @rochellaine Thanks! ๐Ÿ˜€


        @perfectfifths
        Nice! I like the song-like style. ๐Ÿ™‚

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        #64232
        Louise Fowler
        @perfectfifths
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          @rochellaine Oh, yeah. ๐Ÿ˜›

          I didn’t think so, which is why I stopped at four verses. But now I want to try – it just may take longer.

          Hole, thread, cut, sharpen, stone, water, well… Oh, I know, it gets too late to go to the well, so you have to sleep. With what shall I sleep with? With a blanket! There’s a hole in my blanket! XD


          @supermonkey42
          Thanks. XD

          Currently reading Les Miserables

          #64233
          Rochellaine
          @rochellaine
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            @perfectfifths Hahahahahaha!!!! ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€

            "Sylvester - Sylvester!"

            #64238
            Snapper
            @dragon-snapper
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              @sam-kowal *cracks knuckles* @daeus I had to tag you too. XD

              Challenge accepted. Raspberries. Go.

              Frozen Raspberry

              Bland,

              And the gray of night,

              Shivering hands.

              No light.

              I couldn’t fight,

              Tasteless.

              I couldn’t write…

              Numbness.

              Why?

              A question…

              A question for the sky.

              Of this evil infection?

              Why the gray,

              Does life always,

              Have to be this way?

              All the ends in frays?

              In the fog,

              The olde black-and-white

              I wander and slog…

              I need a little bright.

              Into the fridge,

              I find myself…

              But with doubt I cringe.

              Would there be empty shelf?

              But hunger for color,

              It drives me,

              Forces me out of dolor.

              So I open it hopelessly.

              On the bare glass of cold,

              A single plate,

              Aweful to behold,

              Awaits, yes, it waits.

              There…. color and taste.

              The only red, ripe, ready…

              Calling, it’s calling. Make haste!

              I reach for it. Ready…

              Because raspberry, frozen raspberry,

              You are my sunshine.

              Because raspberry, frozen raspberry,

              … I think you’re mine…

              I need you…

              โ˜€ โ˜€ โ˜€ ENFP โ˜€ โ˜€ โ˜€

              #64244
              Rochellaine
              @rochellaine
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                That’s a really cute and funny poem, @dragon-snapper !ย  ๐Ÿ˜€

                Raspberry, frozen raspberry…I think you’re mine…

                Love it!!

                Are you going to tag anyone with a topic?

                "Sylvester - Sylvester!"

                #64251
                EpicAddie2
                @epicaddie2
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                  @supermonkey42 Yikes, I’m a bit late. Sorry! It was a crazy week last week.

                  Well, I’ll try, although I’m terrible at poetry. Like,ย reallyย bad. ย It’s sad.

                  INFJ ~ 4w5
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                  #64254
                  EpicAddie2
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                    Okay, I must admit I didn’t try very hard with this one. I’ve doneย muchย better.

                    Dolphins, dolphins, oh how I love thee, dolphins

                    With your fins and tail so perfectly shaped

                    As you swim, I watch, mouth agape

                    How are you so perfect? I ask

                    For me, perfection is an impossible task

                    And then you leap out of the water

                    And look, you caught her!

                    A small shiny fish, wiggling and squirming

                    But also very confirming

                    That dolphins, dolphins, are the greatest creatures EVER and DO NOT BOTHER DENYING IT

                    *chuckles weakly and bows*


                    @seekjustice
                    Your topic is… uhhhhย *glances at nearest object* A spoon!

                    INFJ ~ 4w5
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                    #64256
                    Ben Powell
                    @supermonkey42
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                      @epicaddie2

                      That dolphins, dolphins, are the greatest creatures EVER and DO NOT BOTHER DENYING IT

                      ๐Ÿ˜€ Yes… theyโ€™ve always seemed a bit arrogant, havenโ€™t they?

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                      #64257
                      EpicAddie2
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                        *chuckles* Yes they have.

                         

                        INFJ ~ 4w5
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                        #64265
                        Daeus
                        @daeus
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                          @dragon-snapper ๐Ÿ˜€

                          ๐Ÿข๐Ÿข๐Ÿข๐Ÿข๐Ÿข๐Ÿข๐Ÿข๐Ÿข๐Ÿข๐Ÿข๐Ÿข๐Ÿข๐Ÿข๐Ÿข๐Ÿข๐Ÿข๐Ÿข๐Ÿข๐Ÿข๐Ÿข๐Ÿข๐Ÿข

                          #64268
                          Sam Kowal
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                            @dragon-snapper ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€ Wow.

                            That is super epic XD.

                            That’s my official Raspberry Song now.

                            *walks outside looking for raspberries*

                            *There’s no raspberries*

                            *:(*

                            *Giarstanornarak tries to melt chair*
                            Also, Daeus has 22 turtles in his signature.

                            #64272
                            Rochellaine
                            @rochellaine
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                              @epicaddie2 Wow!ย  Haha!ย  ๐Ÿ˜€ The last line is my favorite, too.

                              "Sylvester - Sylvester!"

                              #64286
                              itisastarrynight
                              @itisastarrynight
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                                @rochellaine I enjoyed thisย  a lot ๐Ÿ™‚ Good job!

                                I can't believe it's not butter!

                                #64304
                                Grace H.
                                @gh24682468999
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                                  @rochellaine These poems are hilarious. Thanks for starting this! ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€

                                  I screeched at Stan

                                  Like a mother bear

                                  But all he said was โ€œWell There

                                  Please keep your hair

                                  I put that hole in your blanket

                                  Now I go for a chairโ€


                                  @sam-kowal
                                  @dragon-snapper NO ONE HAS MENTIONED how funny “Now I go for a chair” is. That is most definitely the best part of the poem.

                                  It's g-h, 2-4-6-8 twice, three 9's
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