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February 19, 2018 at 10:03 am #64192
@perfectfifths *confused* Um, yeah.ย That part was supposed to be a joke too…I’ve known the song since I was a little kid, and there’s a part about if the “straw be too long”.ย ๐
I was meaningย afterย you finish sewing, you’ll eventually have to cut the thread, or it will be hanging all over the place and look silly.
I wonder if the hole in the blanket could go all the way around like the bucket song could?ย *tries* Hole, thread, cut, sharpen…no, I don’t think so. ๐ ๐
"Sylvester - Sylvester!"
February 19, 2018 at 10:24 am #64195@rochellaine Thanks! ๐
@perfectfifths Nice! I like the song-like style. ๐A Kapeefer for life!
Compendium of KP Literature: kapeeferliterature.wordpress.comFebruary 19, 2018 at 6:46 pm #64232@rochellaine Oh, yeah. ๐
I didn’t think so, which is why I stopped at four verses. But now I want to try – it just may take longer.
Hole, thread, cut, sharpen, stone, water, well… Oh, I know, it gets too late to go to the well, so you have to sleep. With what shall I sleep with? With a blanket! There’s a hole in my blanket! XD
@supermonkey42 Thanks. XDCurrently reading Les Miserables
February 19, 2018 at 6:51 pm #64233@perfectfifths Hahahahahaha!!!! ๐ ๐
"Sylvester - Sylvester!"
February 19, 2018 at 8:25 pm #64238@sam-kowal *cracks knuckles* @daeus I had to tag you too. XD
Challenge accepted. Raspberries. Go.
Frozen Raspberry
Bland,
And the gray of night,
Shivering hands.
No light.
I couldn’t fight,
Tasteless.
I couldn’t write…
Numbness.
Why?
A question…
A question for the sky.
Of this evil infection?
Why the gray,
Does life always,
Have to be this way?
All the ends in frays?
In the fog,
The olde black-and-white
I wander and slog…
I need a little bright.
Into the fridge,
I find myself…
But with doubt I cringe.
Would there be empty shelf?
But hunger for color,
It drives me,
Forces me out of dolor.
So I open it hopelessly.
On the bare glass of cold,
A single plate,
Aweful to behold,
Awaits, yes, it waits.
There…. color and taste.
The only red, ripe, ready…
Calling, it’s calling. Make haste!
I reach for it. Ready…
Because raspberry, frozen raspberry,
You are my sunshine.
Because raspberry, frozen raspberry,
… I think you’re mine…
I need you…
โ โ โ ENFP โ โ โ
February 19, 2018 at 11:09 pm #64244That’s a really cute and funny poem, @dragon-snapper !ย ๐
Raspberry, frozen raspberry…I think you’re mine…
Love it!!
Are you going to tag anyone with a topic?
"Sylvester - Sylvester!"
February 20, 2018 at 11:42 am #64251@supermonkey42 Yikes, I’m a bit late. Sorry! It was a crazy week last week.
Well, I’ll try, although I’m terrible at poetry. Like,ย reallyย bad. ย It’s sad.
INFJ ~ 4w5
aldarley.wordpress.comFebruary 20, 2018 at 11:55 am #64254Okay, I must admit I didn’t try very hard with this one. I’ve doneย muchย better.
Dolphins, dolphins, oh how I love thee, dolphins
With your fins and tail so perfectly shaped
As you swim, I watch, mouth agape
How are you so perfect? I ask
For me, perfection is an impossible task
And then you leap out of the water
And look, you caught her!
A small shiny fish, wiggling and squirming
But also very confirming
That dolphins, dolphins, are the greatest creatures EVER and DO NOT BOTHER DENYING IT
*chuckles weakly and bows*
@seekjustice Your topic is… uhhhhย *glances at nearest object* A spoon!INFJ ~ 4w5
aldarley.wordpress.comFebruary 20, 2018 at 12:15 pm #64256That dolphins, dolphins, are the greatest creatures EVER and DO NOT BOTHER DENYING IT
๐ Yes… theyโve always seemed a bit arrogant, havenโt they?
A Kapeefer for life!
Compendium of KP Literature: kapeeferliterature.wordpress.comFebruary 20, 2018 at 12:23 pm #64257*chuckles* Yes they have.
INFJ ~ 4w5
aldarley.wordpress.comFebruary 20, 2018 at 12:53 pm #64265@dragon-snapper ๐
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February 20, 2018 at 1:06 pm #64268@dragon-snapper ๐ ๐ ๐ Wow.
That is super epic XD.
That’s my official Raspberry Song now.
*walks outside looking for raspberries*
*There’s no raspberries*
*:(*
*Giarstanornarak tries to melt chair*
Also, Daeus has 22 turtles in his signature.February 20, 2018 at 3:10 pm #64272@epicaddie2 Wow!ย Haha!ย ๐ The last line is my favorite, too.
"Sylvester - Sylvester!"
February 20, 2018 at 5:57 pm #64286@rochellaine I enjoyed thisย a lot ๐ Good job!
I can't believe it's not butter!
February 21, 2018 at 8:56 am #64304@rochellaine These poems are hilarious. Thanks for starting this! ๐ ๐ ๐
I screeched at Stan
Like a mother bear
But all he said was โWell There
Please keep your hair
I put that hole in your blanket
Now I go for a chairโ
@sam-kowal @dragon-snapper NO ONE HAS MENTIONED how funny “Now I go for a chair” is. That is most definitely the best part of the poem.It's g-h, 2-4-6-8 twice, three 9's
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