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February 16, 2023 at 3:18 pm #133191
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@godlyfantasy12. Take all the time you need. đ
February 16, 2023 at 3:44 pm #133196@freedomwriter76 WAIT!!! I never saw that reply for Aaron and bren!!! CRISIS AVERTED!!! Ok my bad yâall confusion has happened đ
Aaron
âReally?â Bren looked up with wide eyes at Lily.
âAhâŚthank you, but we couldnât ask you to do that.â
âItâs no problem, really,â Lily insisted, smiling at Aaron. He bit his lip, brows furrowing.
The question still remained on wether or not he could trust these peopleâŚ
They seemed genuineâŚLily especiallyâŚ
And sheâd known his father as a childâŚ
ButâŚanyone could turn on themâŚ
And he had to think of his brother.
Then againâŚhe didnât really know his way around this placeâŚand without the others, he could use a bit of help.
Heâd justâŚkeep Bren close.
He looked at his brother, who was still jumping from foot to foot enthusiastically.
Well, as close as possible.
âAlrightâŚif youâre sure.â
âWe are,â One of the young men said, nodding.
Bren threw his hands in the air, letting out a loud whoop. Aaron smiled.
Fenrys
Fen stared at the white-blonde young man. He was signingâŚ
Could he not hear?
Fenrys read the manâs hands as they spoke in a language foreign to most. He and his brothers had been taught sign at a young age by his father, for heâd once had a sister who used it to communicate by.
The man was smiling bright and Fenrys quickly looked away, knowing how it Felt to be a bitâŚdifferent.
He knocked his knuckles against his wooden leg.
âAhâŚwell, thank you anyway,â Aria dipped her chin.
Fen looked away, nodding as well. He turned his eyes back to the blonde, smiling slightly. He put his hand to his chin, giving the customary âThank youâ sign.
Caden
âThat would be great!â
âAhâŚâ Lucien cocked a brow, placing a hand on Cadenâs shoulder. âOne second.â He pulled his brother aside, along with Puck. Whispering, he said, âYou sure we can trust them?â
Caden shrugged, âI dunnoâŚI meanâŚthe kid they got with them is pretty cute. I canât imagine them having that kid with them and being like, mass murderers or something.â
âMm, that doesnât really say much.â Puck said. âThey couldâve stolen him, just saying!â
Lucien frowned, looking back. The kid was giggling in the man with the metal armâs grasp.
âI donât think soâŚâ
âCome onâŚwe donât really have anywhere else to go right now.â Caden turned back to the threesome smiling.
Lucien followed, and Puck begrudgingly, arms crossed.
âAlright, sounds like a plan. Weâll go with ya,â Lucien smiled.
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#ProtectSebFebruary 16, 2023 at 4:01 pm #133198@freedomwriter76
Rae
âWell, Dassie, whatcha think?â
Hadassah smiled sweetly, clasping her hands in front of her. Rae grabbed one of her arms, pulling her around in a circle playfully. The younger girl laughed, coming to a stop with her spinning.
âGuess the others got separated from us, huh? That or they left usâŚâ
Hadassah pursed her lips, clutching the bottom of her top. She shook her head slightly.
âYeaâŚthey wouldnât do that.â Rae said, smiling. She held on tightly to her older sisterâs arm, walking further down the hall they stood in. âWeâll probably find them further downâŚif theyâre here.â
Hadassah frowned, shaking her head again.
âYea! RightâŚIâm sure theyâre here.â Rae released her sister, walking down the hall by herself. âHeyâŚdo you hear that?â
Hadassah paused, listening.
âSounds like someoneâs comingâŚâ
also @lightoverdarkness6 u wanna meet Lila and Kiri? (Two pretty girls XD XD)
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#ProtectSebFebruary 16, 2023 at 4:42 pm #133212@freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6 u on?
Also I think itâs ur turn freedom to RP at the castle
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#ProtectSebFebruary 16, 2023 at 5:12 pm #133219Anonymous
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@godlyfantasy12. Yeah…I’ll try to get to the castle in a minute. đ
Lily
Bren threw his hands into the air, letting out a loud whoop. Aaron and Albert smiled, and Lily and Elias laughed.
Lily smiled. “Come on, then! Adventure awaits!”
(she’s still as energetic as ever! đ¤Ł)
Eli
The man, Fenrys, put his hand to his chin, signing a ‘thank you’.
Eli smiled, nodded, and signed back, ‘You’re welcome. Glad we can help.’
Eli turned back to Jonathan, signing to his brother, ‘Shall we get going now?’
Jonathan nodded, turning his attention back to Aria and spoke, asking her if they were ready to go, or so Eli could guess by the way his lips moved.
(so…yea…Eli’s gotten really good at reading lips by this point. đ)
Steve
âAlright, sounds like a plan. Weâll go with ya,â Lucien said with a smile, whilst Puck kept his arms crossed.
Steve smiled. “Good. We should probably get moving then, huh?”
Viola
Someone was up ahead.
Two someone’s, actually…judging by the sound of voices.
Both feminine.
Viola partially opened her satchel, making sure a few fingers were touching her pistol.
She had good reasons to be cautious.
Viola came around the corner and stopped.
Sure enough, there were two girls in the hallway.
Viola smiled. Nodded at them and gave them a small wave. “Hello there…I mean you no harm.”
February 16, 2023 at 6:54 pm #133266@freedomwriter76 hey do u have anymore villains? I donât know of the villains yet in the second seriesâŚ.
Aaron
Aaron smiled. âAlright, wellâŚI must thank you, for offering your help.â Aaron adjusted his cloak and satchel, readying himself.
Albert and Elias nodded, heading through the door theyâd come through. Lily, Bren and Aaron followed.
âSo, how did you get here?â Bren asked, making his way up to where the two young men were. Aaron made sure to keep an eye firmly fastened on him.
âNot sure exactlyâŚjust kindaâŚarrived.â Elias said.
âUs too!â Bren said. Elias chuckled. âSo youâre brothers? Like Aaron and me?â
âYup. Iâm the younger one. Albert here is my older brother,â Elias grinned at the other young man.
âAnd Iâm just along for the ride I suppose!â Lily sighed dramatically. Elias gave her a playful look.
âYea right.â
Aaron took a glance at Albert. He was being rather quiet. Not that that was unusualâŚAaron himself was being quiet.
Lily then turned to Aaron. âSo thenâŚyouâre looking for your father?â
âUmâŚyes.â Aaron nodded, a bit wary. How much information should he give?
âWell, I hope you find him.â
âTh-ThanksâŚâ Aaron looked away, gripping his satchel until his fingers were numb.
His fatherâŚ
He could just see the ginger-haired manâs smiling face. His bright blue eyes. So similar to his brotherâs.
The kind words and jovial laughter.
But the memories nowâŚ
They were allâŚtainted. With a melancholy feeling. A feeling ofâŚ
Sadness andâŚ
Regret.
Aaron glanced at Bren.
He hadnât told his brother the real truth of his fatherâs disappearanceâŚ
None of them had. Only he and Aria, and a few others knewâŚ
Knew that heâd left. Not disappeared.
Left them with a note.
A. Note.
A note thatâŚmade absolutely no sense.
A note that left him and his sister with more questions then answers.
Though his mother seemed confident evermore in their fatherâŚAaron couldnât help but wonder if there wasnât somethingâŚmore he couldâve done.
To make him stayâŚ
To do somethingâŚ
Had something happened? To make him leave?
âAaron? Ronnie!â Bren tugged on Aaronâs sleeve, pulling him from his thoughts.
âHuh?â Aaron jerked. âOhâŚsorry Bren. What is it?â
âIâm thirsty.â
âOh, here.â Aaron opened his satchel, pulling out a flask of water and giving his brother a drink. They didnât have much left, but his brother was worth it.
âThanks!â
Aaron smiled. âNo problem BrenâŚâ he shoved the flask back into his satchel. âNone at allâŚâ
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#ProtectSebFebruary 16, 2023 at 7:21 pm #133277u wanna meet Lila and Kiri? (Two pretty girls XD XD)
XDXD sure!! (Also OMGOSH Arthur and Corvina as a couple đđđđ That is GOLD!!!! And imagining them as parents â¤ď¸â¨ And their kids!!! Ahhh I love it â¤ď¸â¨đ)
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February 16, 2023 at 7:23 pm #133278@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76
If we need a villain, (Unless either of y’all want to put one in đ I’ve got one! He’s very underdeveloped, so I really do need to work on him. Up to y’all đ
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February 16, 2023 at 7:25 pm #133279@freedomwriter76
Aria
Aria nodded. âYes, thank you for agreeing to help us. We appreciate it.â
âItâs really no problem,â The woman, Isabel smiled.
âStill, it wouldnât be right to take your help without gratitude.â Aria smiled. She turned to Fenrys who gave a side grin and the group continued on down the hallway, Fenrys taking up near the boys, and Aria beside Jonathan and Isabel.
Aria glanced at the young woman. âHow much longer? If you donât mind my being so forthcomingâŚâ
Isabel looked at her curiously. Aria motioned at her own stomach. Isabelâs eyes gleamed, her face glowing, another sure sign that she would soon be a mother. Aria smiled, remembering when her mother was carrying Bren.
Caden
Caden grinned, taking up side next to Lucien and the man with the little boy. Bucky, he believed.
He couldnât help itâŚthe little boy reminded him a lot of his baby brother, Benji.
He made a face at the little boy, Ryo, making him laugh, and then began to start a game of patty cake with him.
Lucien chuckled, rolling his eyes. âYouâre gonna make a great mom, Cade.â
Caden stuck his tongue out at his brother. âOh hush, youâre just jealous.â
âPsh, jealous you get to babysit all the time? OhâŚyes.â
Puck let out a sigh, hands in his pockets. âIâm not jealous of either of you.â
âNo one asked,â Lucien pursed his lips, glaring.
Puck shrugged. âJust saying.â
Hadassah
Rae raised a brow at the woman who had seemingly come out of nowhere. Hadassah gripped her arm, taking a step back.
She wasnât sure how she felt about this ladyâŚ
Something seemedâŚoffâŚ
âHello thereâŚI mean you no harm.â She said. âMy name is Viola. And you are?â
Rae pursed her lips, hand on her hip. âWhy should we tell you?â
Viola quirked her lips, brow cocked. âI suppose you donât have a reason tooâŚbut I assure you, thereâs no reason to be afraid of me. Iâm all alone in here.â
Hadassah looked around.
She seemed to be telling the truthâŚBut the way the ladyâs eyes kept looking at themâŚMade her skin crawlâŚ
âStill, give us one good reason.â
âWellâŚperhaps we can help each other.â Viola took a step forward. Hadassah gripped Rae tighter, eyes widening. âIâm trying to findâŚa friend. Maybe youâve seen him.â
âHavenât seen anyone. ButâŚweâre looking for some others tooâŚI guess it wouldnât hurt to have some help. Whatcha think Dassie?â Rae glanced at her sister.
Hadassah frowned, releasing Rae and rubbing her arm. She shook her head slightly.
The woman tilted her head. âI promiseâŚI mean no harm.â
âWellâŚI guess thereâs not really any harm in telling our names. Besides, Come on Dassie.â Her sister raised a brow, leaning in and whispering, âWe can take her if need be.â
Hadassahâs eyes widened, mouth opening slightly. She shook her head wildly, but Rae was already talking.
âNameâs Ebony Rae, but everyone just calls me Rae. This is my sister Hadassah. She doesnât talk.â
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#ProtectSebFebruary 16, 2023 at 7:26 pm #133280@lightoverdarkness6 sure!!!
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#ProtectSebFebruary 16, 2023 at 7:52 pm #133289@lightoverdarkness6 Iâll RP as Lila and Kiri meeting the boys
Lila
âA bit dusty, donât ya think?â Kiri ran her finger over one of the mantels in the room they were in.
âI think itâs rather beautifulâŚin a rustic way.â Lila smiled, sitting on a couch that still had red velvet cushions, though they could use a bit of refurbishing.
âHm, to each their own I suppose,â Kiri shrugged.
A door to their left creaked open, making both girls turn. Lila stood quickly, eyes wide. She took a stepped toward Kiri, who stared intensely at the door as it opened.
Two figures emerged, boys around their ages, maybe a bit younger.
âWho are you? Are you the reason we’re here?â
The two boys blinked, faces flushing. They looked at each other before one of them spoke.
âU-UmâŚNoâŚWe donât even know why weâre here, actuallyâŚum, Iâm Asher. This is my best friend, Matthew.â
Lila glanced at Kiri, offering a small smile and nodding. She took a step forward, clasping her hands in front of her.
âNice to meet you both. My name is Lila, and this is my cousin Kiri.â Kiri saluted with two fingers, putting one arm behind her back and winking. (Sheâs a bit of a flirt/just enjoys making boys blush) âWeâre looking for our friends and siblings.â
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#ProtectSebFebruary 16, 2023 at 8:01 pm #133293@freedomwriter76 u still on? U donât have to RP Iâm just wondering if ur on đ
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#ProtectSebFebruary 16, 2023 at 8:05 pm #133297So does ur villain have any interest/care for powers or anything? Iâm just thinking for a reason for him to kidnap Bren or hold Bren hostageâŚ.
I know Bren has the elemental flame but he doesnât like it because he canât control it and it hurts people
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#ProtectSebFebruary 17, 2023 at 8:52 am #133393@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76
Aww poor precious Bren!!
Well, he does have interest in anything that could hurt someone…so maybe?
I’m not sure how he would find out that Bren has said powers…but yeah, if he found out, that wouldn’t be good đŹ (or would be, depending on the characters or the authors XD)
So y’all are good with me putting him in?
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February 17, 2023 at 1:02 pm #133423@lightoverdarkness6 yup!! Also I made an RP of Lila and Kiri meeting Asher and Matt
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