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May 9, 2023 at 12:29 pm #142662
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@godlyfantasy12 i’m good with whoever starting us off!!! and yea…Viola and Vance may have some conflict XD @lightoverdarkness6
I think these were the groups/what they were doing👇
- Aaron, Elias, and Ginny~Searching for Bren
- Lila, Matthew, and Albert~Searching for Bren
- Asher, Lily, and Kiri~Searching for Bren
- Viola, Vlad, Nadya, Raymond, Cummings, Vance, and Bren~Plotting for villainy
- Steve, Lucien, Benji, Bucky, Tony, Ryo, Nehemiah, Puck, and Caden~Wandering around
- Alex, Riker, Madelene, Liam, Cameron and Damien~Looking for Bren
- Isabel, Jonathan, Eli, Iris, Aaliyah, Lia, Fenrys, Dylan, Aria~Just met Dylan&Iris/the kids; just wandering around
May 9, 2023 at 12:30 pm #142663Anonymous
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that took so long *flops onto couch facefirst* 😂
May 10, 2023 at 11:34 am #142787@freedomwriter76
Ooohhh wow girl!! You totally didn’t have to do that! I bet you’re exhausted. *Hands you some lemonade in a writer’s mug* XDXD
But thank you so much! I wouldn’t have had a clue where to start XD
Ooh yeahhh!!! That’s gonna be so much fun. More conflict!! *Evil writer’s laugh* XD
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May 10, 2023 at 11:41 am #142789@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12
Yeah idk who’s turn it is either lol. I think I went last tho so either of y’all can go first!
And totally no rush. I’ve been struggling to keep up lately so I completely understand if it takes us a few days to get going 🙂 So don’t stress if you don’t feel like RPing, but you’re afraid to keep other’s waiting. I’d so much rather have happy friends that haven’t RPed in three weeks than friends who are stressed and down but RP every hour. XD 😀 Remember, this is just for fun! 😊
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May 10, 2023 at 12:10 pm #142793Anonymous
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*gratefully takes lemonade* tysm!!!❤️ ohh, i know I didn’t have to, but I thought I’d help everyone out XD
You’re so welcome!!!
Yes, this is just for fun!!!!! 🙂 😉
May 10, 2023 at 1:09 pm #142820@freedomwriter76 I’m not entirely sure where to start…so I’m just gonna be Bren and get us moving XD. I think he’s gonna try for another escape attempt cuz idk how else to get us moving/make some conflict obviously this isn’t going to work cuz he’s surrounded this time but at least he’s trying lol.
Bren
After eating all of the candy he’d been offered, Bren stood in silence, listening to the two groups introduce themselves. His fingers twitched anxiously against his mouth, the urge to chew on them almost unbearable.
It was a silly habit. Babyish…but he couldn’t help it. Sucking on his fingers made him feel better. Gave him something to do. His siblings and parents would always gently remind him when he did it, and he’d gotten better recently, but now the urge was overpowering.
He looked back. The hall was so dark behind him…
Too dark.
If he weren’t so scared…maybe he could make it. But he was scared. He scolded himself for being silly, and returned his eyes to the front.
Past the second group, torches littered the walls, lighting the path. If he could scurry past them somehow, then maybe…
One of the men was pretty tall…
If he could shuffle underneath his legs…
Bren’s brows furrowed, his cheeks puffing into a frown as his shoved two of his fingers into his mouth, anxiety rising.
Should he try it?
Vance had seemed so angry last time…
But…if he did make it…
And…Vance wouldn’t actually hurt him would he?
He glanced at the tall, dark-haired man. And then the others in front of him.
Would they?
He knew not everyone was as nice as the people at home, his brother and sister said that much…and he’d seen that, sure…
But…they wouldn’t really hurt him, right? It’d be like when he got in trouble at home! He’d get scolded…maybe a small punishment. That was all.
(My baby is so naive and innocent 😭)
Bren nodded fiercely to himself, pulling his fingers from his lips and, when the opportunity presented itself, he dashed madly between one of the men’s legs, scrambling beneath them.
“WHAT THE-?!” He cried, grappling for the boy, but he was too quick.
“I’ve got’em!” Someone cried, and Bren felt something grip his ankle, tugging him back. Hard.
He yelped as his hands slid out from beneath him, a small flicker of bright orange shooting from his palm before disappearing.
The hand lifted him into the air by his foot, holding him upside down like he was nothing.
“Leggo! Put me down!” He wiggled and squirmed, but it was no use.
Caught again. If only he were faster. Bah… he pouted.
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#ProtectSebMay 10, 2023 at 9:56 pm #142904@freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6 y’all probs aren’t on lol, but y’all wanna RP next?
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#ProtectSebMay 11, 2023 at 5:58 pm #142973Anonymous
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@godlyfantasy12 @lightoverdarkness6 I can go!!! 😊❤️😁
Vlad
Cummings laughed, still holding onto Bren, who was pouting…who seemed to be on the verge of tears.
“Someone likes to try to escape, hmm?” Viola mused, smirking. “I suppose someone should watch him, then.” She turned to face him. “Vlad, you keep an eye on him while we plan, unless, of course, you’d rather Vlad not hold onto Bren, Vance.”
Vlad nodded.
Cummings righted Bren.
Vlad took Bren into his arms, gently.
He held Bren tightly.
Bren tried to fight back.
Vlad tightened his grip. He dropped his voice to a whisper so quiet no one else could hear. “Shhh…stop fighting. I’m going to try to help you out of here.”
(he may be on the wrong side…but kidnapping a child is too far in Vlad’s book 😅 btw, i know he probably won’t rescue Bren…but he may try…and get caught 😬)
May 11, 2023 at 7:27 pm #142975@freedomwriter76 aww Vlad! @lightoverdarkness6
Bren
Bren paused his squirming for a moment, looking into Vlad’s eyes to see if he was being sincere. He seemed to be telling the truth…but it was so hard to tell right now.
He sniffed, a few tears escaping as he went quiet, stiffly sitting in Vlad’s arms, legs wrapped around the man’s hips. Vlad held him tight, but not enough to hurt him.
Still, it wasn’t comfortable, like when Ima would hold him, or when he’d curl up with his siblings at night…
But, it did feel safer than being near any of the others, so he slowly pushed himself closer into Vlad, burying his face into the man’s shoulder and gripping his shirt.
He sniffled, slipping two of his fingers into his mouth again.
“Children,” The man who’d caught him sneered, as if Bren were the most revolting thing he’d ever seen.
“Shh. He’ll come in handy,” Viola said, a bit of mirth in her tone. “The little ones make the best bargaining chips.”
Bren met her eyes for a moment, and, seeing something he didn’t like at all, scrunched his baby blues shut.
“Now, Vance…exactly what is your plan for this…special little one?” She asked.
(I’m thinking Viola saw Bren’s slip up with his power earlier even if no one else did and now she’s probably got ideas of her own)
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#ProtectSebMay 14, 2023 at 6:46 pm #143339Anonymous
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@godlyfantasy12 hey, while we wait for Light with the villains, would you like to restart our group with Caden, Lucien, Benji, Puck, Tony, Steve, Bucky, and Ryo? 🙂
May 14, 2023 at 6:55 pm #143340@freedomwriter76 yea! I think we had Puck and Bucky was just pulled back up from that hole in the ground-Puck was acting a bit strange (a mix of Pain, fears, embarrassment and the things he inherited from his mother)
And I really wanted to have Benji interact some with Tony XD XD specifically calling him Stank some more 🤣 and Caden is like “Now Benji…” but Benji just keeps going “STANK STANK STANK!
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#ProtectSebMay 14, 2023 at 7:09 pm #143345Anonymous
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@godlyfantasy12 that’d be great with Benji and Tony 🤣
would you mind starting us back???
(oh, and idk if I’ll get the chance to really RP tonight, but I’ll get to it as soon as I can😊)
May 14, 2023 at 7:24 pm #143351@freedomwriter76 ERMM….sure??? Maybe not rn tho cuz…not sure what to RP…?? 😂 but I’ll think of something!
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#ProtectSebMay 15, 2023 at 2:49 pm #143426@freedomwriter76
Caden
Puck was still acting a bit… anti-social after the incident earlier. Not that he was usually super social, but he seemed a bit off.
Caden could kinda guess what was going on in the kid’s head…though he couldn’t be entirely sure, as with Puck, it could be any number of things.
Best to just leave him be at the moment…let things cool down.
As the group had walked, personalities had seemed to come together and angers had cooled thankfully.
They’d now lapsed into silence, all huddled fairly close together in a narrow corridor, lit by lanterns.
In front of Caden, Ryo sat in Steve’s arms, trying his hardest not to fall asleep.
He was doing his best imitation of a puppy, waking himself up only moments before fatigue took over.
Caden smiled, having seen that look many times on Benji.
And even his more grown brothers.
He chuckled.
“Was’o Funny?” Benji asked, pulling at his hand. Caden shook his head.
“Nothing.”
“Tell me! Tell me!” He pouted, hitting his brothers leg with his fists.
Caden swooped him up, holding him upside down, the boy’s black hair flying over his eyes. Benji screeched, the sound echoing down the corridor, waking Ryo once again.
“I was just thinking about how cute you are!” Caden teased, blowing raspberries into Benji’s tummy. The boy screeched, pushing against his older brother’s forehead.
“Top it! Stop it!” He said, an adorably angry look on his face, though he couldn’t help his giggles.
It was a known fact that all the boys in the Beawulf family were extremely ticklish.
Modór loved holding it over Doda’s head.
Lucien let out a loud laugh at the sight of his baby brother in such a position, which only made Benji more annoyed. He hit and pounded at Caden all the more, but the blonde’s tickling fury just grew.
“Yeesh, with chords like that kid could wake the dead,” Tony said, brows raising.
Ryo was giggling just from watching, and Steve, mirthfully watching, couldn’t seem to help but poke the little toddler a few times himself, provoking more tiny giggles from him.
“Alright, better stop. He looks like a tomato,” Lucien joked, though he knew Caden would never go too far. Caden grinned, squeezing Benji into a hug until his cheeks were squashed against his own. The little boy yelled out with indignation.
“Lemme go! I’m not a baby!”
“Aww…sure you are! You’re our baby, wittle Bwenji,” Caden said, making Benji’s lips purse and his pout grow.
Lucien laughed and then looked ahead. “Hey, Puck!”
The still quiet boy gave him a short glare, hands in his pockets. Lucien grinned devilishly.
“What?” Puck asked, huffing.
“You still ticklish?”
Puck’s nose twitched, eyes widening slightly. “Don’t you dare….”
But before Puck could get away, Lucien was already on him, the two wrestling around on the ground until Lucien had him pinned, tickling his ears and neck and then his underarms
Puck’s shrieks of laughter were contagious, considering that sound didn’t always escape.
Once Lucien was finished, he laughed, rolling back off the boy, who was breathing heavily, but still smiling.
“I hate you!” He said, though it was obvious he didn’t mean it, poking Lucien in the ribs, making the older boy let out a shrill laugh. “Pshh…I wouldn’t even have a challenge if I tried to tickle you.”
Caden chuckled, shaking his head at the two.
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#ProtectSebMay 15, 2023 at 3:05 pm #143431Anonymous
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@godlyfantasy12 Aww, I loved that!!! ❤️❤️❤️
Steve
Steve laughed, watching Lucien and Puck. Ryo giggled, and Steve carefully put him up on top of his shoulders, just as Lucien and Puck finished their tickling and wrestling match.
He turned around to face Caden and Benji with a slight smirk. “That was quite a show. Me and Ryo just got two shows.”
Caden laughed.
Ryo giggled. “Stevie.” he hugged the top of Steve’s head. Steve smiled up at him.
He faced Caden again. “So, you and your brothers…” he trailed off, eyes landing and focusing on Bucky, who trailed behind everyone else, staring ahead blankly, absentmindedly, completely unfazed by anything that was happening in front of him…in his own world…his own memories…his own nightmares.
“Bucky!” Ryo cried, kicking his legs, his sneakers smacking against Steve’s chest.
Bucky finally looked up. He smiled faintly, softly, and he came forward. He grabbed Ryo off of Steve’s shoulders and slid Ryo into his arms. He kissed Ryo’s forehead. “Hey there, kiddo.”
Ryo giggled, wrapping his arms around Bucky’s neck, burying his face against Bucky’s chest. Bucky smiled, holding him close. He faced Steve and raised a half-smile. “I’m fine, Steve.”
He walked ahead, eventually falling into step beside Tony.
Bucky was a horrid liar.
Steve ran a hand through his hair and beard, smoothing both down, and faced Caden. “So, like I was about to ask…where are you and your brothers from?”
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