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  • #137830
    GodlyFantasy12
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      @freedomwriter76 AWWW VLAD 😭 at least Bren will have a bit of comfort

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      #137835
      Anonymous
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        @godlyfantasy12 ahhh, i knowwwwww!!!!! 😭😭😭

        #137838
        GodlyFantasy12
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          Bren

          Bren looked up, shaking from head to toe. He flinched as one of the men stepped closer, bending down to his level.

          The man smiled slightly, eyes softening. Bren’s breaths shuddered, but evened just a little, seeing a small bit of comfort in the younger man’s eyes. A little something that made him think of his brother.

          “Hi…what’s your name?”

          Bren didn’t answer, fear gripping his throat, making it dry. He squeezed himself tighter.

          “Do you want some candy…?”

          Bren pursed his lips, a low grumble in his stomach answering for him.

          It was then that he realized he hadn’t eaten at all since he’d woken up…and his last memory before this place was going to sleep beside his brother, gazing at the stars…

          Who knew how long ago that had been.

          But…was this some sort of trick?

          Could he really accept this man’s gesture?

          “It’s safe…I promise. Here,” He popped one of the candies into his own mouth to prove his point. Chewed. Swallowed.

          Bren blinked, and then, slowly put out a shaking hand. Vlad smiled a bit, dropping the pieces of candy into his outstretched hands.

          Vance growled from behind.

          “Excuse me. I’d like to take the boy back now please.”

          Vlad’s eyes swept to the man, beginning to stand. “What right do you have to claim him?”

          “Vlad, please, don’t be so rude,” One of the women snapped. She didn’t seem very nice (Nadya lol)

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          #137889
          Light
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            @godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76

            “Stupid boy,” I muttered under my breath.

            Bren had escaped.

            But not for long. 

            I rounded the corner, my fists clenched.

            There was Bren…

            But there were other people with him.

            I heard Bren stutter “O-Oh! I-I-! Help-please!” He looked back at me, fearful.

            He looked up at the stranger, finding the confused look on the redheads face. And then another man stepped up.

            “Hello there, little boy…” Red head whispered, smiling faintly.

            The other man scoffed. “Stupid klutz.”

            Raymond clicked his tongue. “Now, now, Cummings…”

            “Are you his father?” Cummings asked, turning to me, raising an eyebrow.

            I watched as Bren scooted between both groups and into the wall. He scrubbed at his face, pulling his knees to himself.

            Bren heard Cummings ask if I was his father. His head shot up and before I could answer he cried out-

            “No! He isn’t!”

            “You little-“ I growled, taking a step forward. Bren scooted away a bit, but not much.

            He wouldn’t go anywhere. He had nowhere to go. 

            I adjusted my posture, narrowing my gaze. I turned, my eyes boring into each of the group, meeting their own. One hand absentmindedly fingered my belt, and with it, the blade hidden in my clothing.

            I looked into each of their eyes, and said softly, but menacingly, daring them to oppose me. “He may not be my son…but he is mine.”

            But I had a feeling that I didn’t need to worry about Bren being taken from me…and so, ruining my chance to get back what was rightfully mine.

            No…this group, this room, had a familiar feeling.

            All the people in this group were similar.

            Manipulative…cruel…dark.

            And I was comfortable with that.

            More than one had that same hungry look in their eyes…

            The look of a hunter. 

            Maybe…maybe we can help each other look for our…possessions. 

            We each introduced ourselves.

            Suddenly, heeled footsteps clicked.

            A woman dressed all in black walked up. She smiled and lifted a hand in greeting. “Hello, everyone…did I almost miss a party?”

            “Viola, welcome.” Nadya said with a warm smile.

            Viola smiled and nodded. “Nadya…it’s nice to see you. Hello, Vlad.”

            My eyes were on Bren. The man–Vlad–was giving him something…

            Candy.

            I growled from behind.

            “I’d like to take the boy back now please,” I said slowly.

            Vlad’s eyes swept to me, a bit of fire burning in them, as he began to stand. “What right do you have to claim him?”

            “Excuse me?” I asked, a small spark of anger rose up in me, but I put it out.

            There’s no need for that. Not now. 

            “Vlad, please, don’t be so rude,” Nadya snapped.

            I nodded to Nadya, smiling gratefully.

            Then, looking around, I said softly, “Well…I feel like we all have the same motivation here…and, I believe that we can each get what we want…”

            I paused, glancing at each of them.

            “…If we work together. What do you say?”

            #HugRikerSquad

            #137910
            GodlyFantasy12
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              @freedomwriter76 u wanna go next?

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              #137916
              Anonymous
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                @godlyfantasy12 Sure! 😊 @lightoverdarkness6

                VIOLA

                “…If we work together. What do you say?”

                Viola smiled when Vance’s eyes met her own.

                 

                This man was a kindred spirit…that much was for certain.

                 

                Viola smiled. “We’d enjoy nothing more.”

                 

                VLAD

                Vlad tried to not grimace when Viola talked.

                 

                He didn’t want to work with any of these people…any of them.

                 

                He turned to Bren, voice dropping to so quiet of a whisper that no one except Bren could hear, and whispered, “I’ll find a way to get you out of here…I promise.”

                #137930
                GodlyFantasy12
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                  @freedomwriter76 aww Vlad 😭 @lightoverdarkness6

                  Bren

                  Bren quivered as the woman with short black hair spoke. She looked a little like aunt…but her hair was short. And she looked cruel…mean…

                  Not his Aunt Cori…definitely not.

                  Vlad gently whispered, “I’ll find a way to get you out of here…I promise.”

                  Bren’s eyes lit up with a spark of hope, though he wondered how that would be possible…seeing as they were completely surrounded now…

                  But…at least he had someone on his side now.

                  “Bren.” A cold voice made his stomach flip. He jerked, his eyes meeting Vance’s. “Come here.”

                  Bren didn’t move, shaking in his spot against the wall. Vance’s eyes narrowed, lips twitching.

                  Now.”

                  Bren clutched at his shirt front, giving one more glance to Vlad, who looked worriedly at the boy. Slowly he stood, legs wobbling, and then made his way over to the dark haired man.

                  Vance looked down at him, and it was then Bren realized just how small he was in comparison.

                  Vance grabbed his chin, forcing his head up. Bren squeezed his eyes shut, reeling back.

                  The next time you decide to run off…” He didn’t finish, the threat hanging in the air as his fingers tightened around Bren’s jaw.

                  The boy merely whimpered, nodding as best he could.

                  Vance merely sighed with agitation, releasing Bren. He muttered, “Perhaps my new companions are better equipped to deal with stubborn children.” He gripped Bren’s shirt, holding him so he couldn’t try to run again.

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                  #137939
                  Anonymous
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                    @godlyfantasy12 the baby!!!! 😭 I don’t feel sorry for Vance right now…but his backstory did make me cry XD @lightoverdarkness6

                    VIOLA

                    “Perhaps my new companions are better equipped to deal with stubborn children.” Vance muttered.

                    He may not have realized that Viola heard him…but she did.

                     

                    She smiled faintly, sadistically. “Not children, per say…but I, for one, know how to keep things in line. It only takes a little…force.”

                     

                    Cummings smiled and nodded in approval. “That is does, Viola…I think I’ll like this group.”

                    #137963
                    Light
                    @lightoverdarkness6
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                      @godlyfantasy12 AW BREN 😭😭😭😭 And @freedomwriter76 I RARELY feel bad for him, honestly 😂. Even when speculating his death

                      Godly, you write Vance so well!! Like, that’s exactly what he would do, (unfortunately 😬). I really love reading y’all’s RPs!! They’re always so good 😀

                      #HugRikerSquad

                      #137965
                      Anonymous
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                        @lightoverdarkness6

                        Even when speculating his death

                        Hold it…hold it…HOLD IT!!!!!!

                        YOU’RE SPECULATING…WHAT!?!?!?

                         

                        And thank you…glad I can write good RP’s for everyone to read XD

                        #137969
                        Light
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                          @freedomwriter76

                          Yes…

                          You heard me right. (Unfortunately 🙁)

                          I’ve been mapping out his character arc…and, well…

                          That’s the end of it. 

                          BUT!! He is redeemed before he dies. But yea…when I said before I don’t feel bad for him much…I do feel bad for him here. But Dylan…I feel SO bad for Dylan…

                          😭😭😭😭

                          #HugRikerSquad

                          #137971
                          Light
                          @lightoverdarkness6
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                            @freedomwriter76

                            And you’re so welcome!! They are so entertaining and I love reading them!! 😀

                            #HugRikerSquad

                            #137980
                            Anonymous
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                              @lightoverdarkness6 I’m so glad he gets redeemed, but…but…

                              😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

                              (i understand though. XD i have to do it a lot to charries, and everyone knows it 😂😂😂)

                              Aww, girl, you’re so sweet!!! ❤️❤️❤️

                              #137995
                              Light
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                                @freedomwriter76

                                I’m so glad he gets redeemed, but…but…

                                😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

                                AHHH I know right!!!! 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

                                (i understand though. XD i have to do it a lot to charries, and everyone knows it 😂😂😂)

                                XDXD Haha, yeah. Sometimes it just has to happen, for the other characters to benefit from it (or not benefit, depends on the story 😂😭😭)

                                Aww, girl, you’re so sweet!!! ❤️❤️❤️

                                Thank you sister!! You are too!! ❤️❤️❤️

                                #HugRikerSquad

                                #138025
                                Anonymous
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                                  @lightoverdarkness6

                                  XDXD Haha, yeah. Sometimes it just has to happen, for the other characters to benefit from it (or not benefit, depends on the story 😂😭😭)

                                  Exactly! XD😂

                                  Thank you sister!! You are too!! ❤️❤️❤️

                                  Yw!!!!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ Aww, thanks girl!!!!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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