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March 6, 2023 at 4:16 pm #135760Anonymous
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And Nehemiah…let’s not forget Nehemiah. 😅🤣 @godlyfantasy12. Good for you, Aram!!! 🤣
PUCK!!!!! 😭😭😭😭😭😭
Nadya
What an ill-mannered man.
Nadya turned around with a huff. “Let’s go.” She snarled, walking forward.
Vlad merely fell into step behind her.
Stupid man…stupid men.
Vlad and Aram were both so ill-mannered.
What jerks.
What fools.
What imbeciles.
(i’m probably going to combine Vlad/Nadya with Raymond/Cummings for now 😬)
Bucky
Bucky didn’t move.
He didn’t know how to respond…he didn’t know what to do.
“I-I…”
“J-just…d-don’t leave me…”
Bucky walked back over.
He slowly slid to the floor beside Puck. “Hey…relax…I’m not going anywhere.”
Words Steve had said to him many times, when he had panic attacks, flashbacks, and nightmares.
“…You’re safe.”
Steve
Benji buried his face in Caden’s shoulder.
Steve patted Ryo’s back, slowly easing the toddler to sleep, still holding him in his arms, gently bouncing him.
They had to do something…but was there even anything they could do?
Ryo’s arms loosened from around his neck, and Steve brushed hair out of his face, only to see that the toddler was fast asleep.
He let out a deep breath.
March 6, 2023 at 4:18 pm #135763Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. OOH, I love the idea of them using a rope to pull them up!!! 🤩🤩🤩
YESSS, the hair tug!!!!! 😍😍😍😍😍
March 6, 2023 at 4:25 pm #135769@freedomwriter76 awww Ryo is sooo adorable!!!! Ugh lol also that’s fine because then when (if) we ever combine the villains (and poor Bren XD) we’ll all the villains will be there lol.
Lucien
Lucien turned, “Anyone have any ideas?”
Stark, the new guy, spoke up. “We need to get them back up here some way. Not sure how to do that seeing as we don’t have much…”
(hey maybe Nehemiah has some rope?)
Puck
Puck watched as Bucky got down beside him. “Hey…relax…I’m not going anywhere.”
Puck’s breaths evened out a bit, feeling some of the emotions coming off of the man in front of him.
Confusion…a bit of anxiety…
But also, sincerity. Compassion.
Understanding.
Empathy.
Puck blushed a bit, unused to being so…vulnerable.
“You’re a strange one, you know that,” Bucky said. “Though…I guess I’m kinda strange myself…” He stared off, eyes glazing.
Puck looked up, feeling as the man’s emotions shifted to a more, forlorn feeling.
“Most people with intricate emotions are.”
Bucky raised a brow. Puck winced, he always seemed to say the weirdest things.
For being an Empath…he definitely wasn’t the best at communication…or reading the room…
“Sorry…I…” Puck put his face in his arms, the pain in his back lowering into a throb.
Could he tell him? Trust him?
“I can…kinda…sense emotions…feel them…it’s…not the greatest feeling.”
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#ProtectSebMarch 6, 2023 at 7:59 pm #135849@lightoverdarkness6 would u like to RP as Matt and Asher and Vance?
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#ProtectSebMarch 6, 2023 at 8:15 pm #135855@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76
oof, I’ll try! Probably won’t be able to tonight, maybe tomorrow tho. 🙂 Sorry!
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March 7, 2023 at 7:27 am #135883(AWW Bren’s got a stubborn streak XD 😍)
But….oof…that’s not good…😬😬
So Asher is a lot more stubborn than Vance had expected…but that didn’t stop him from getting as much out of him as he could…
But eventually, Asher is so just exhausted that he lets something slip…and then when he realizes what he’s done, he immediately shuts up.
Soooo….
That’s when Vance used Matthew. 😬😬
So if Bren won’t say much…then Vance will have someone else to go after…someone that Bren cares about.
All I can say is…poor Bren 😭😬
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March 7, 2023 at 9:00 am #135887@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12
I hope both of y’all had a great church service, and Godly, I hope you had fun at the concert, and Light, I hope you had an absolutely amazing, wonderful birthday!!! 💗💗💗
Oops just saw this! Thank you!! We didn’t make it to church, we stayed up late for my birthday. I did have a wonderful birthday! My Mom got me a shirt that had a quote about ‘Light Over Darkness’ Lol 💗. I think I should have one of my books named that. Maybe this current one! 😅💖
Vance
The man, Riker scrutinized me closely, his brows furrowed. I met his gaze, with a smile that didn’t quite reach my eyes.
He smiled faintly, then brought his attention back to Bren.
“Bren, is it?” Riker asked, smiling.
Bren nodded slowly.
“Nice to meet you. You… remind me if someone I met once. How old are you?”
Bren stiffened, glancing up me. I nodded slightly, not taking my gaze off of the man. He knew something was up…
But…
I glanced at his children. Riker couldn’t do much even if he wanted to…and he wouldn’t…not if he wanted to keep his boys safe.
“T-Ten…” Bren said softly.
I released Bren’s shoulders, and instead put my arm loosely around him in a fatherly gesture.
“Yes, Bren is ten years old.” I smiled at the boy.
Then I looked back at Riker, and his children. “The years go by too fast…don’t they?” I asked, my expression growing somber.
But this time, it wasn’t a facade.
I did know the feeling…the feeling of losing a son. Of watching another grow up…and leave.
They do grow up too fast.
Asher
I stood next to Matthew, deep in thought. He stayed silent as well.
I worried about him. He was definitely the more introverted of the two of us, and without me or his sister…or even Iris or Dylan…I didn’t know how he’d do.
I hope he’ll be okay.
Aaron broke the silence. “Alright…any suggestions for groups?”
No one spoke.
Aaron frowned. Elias cleared his throat, placing a hand on Aaron’s shoulder.
“Well, I can go wherever you need me.” He smiled. Aaron returned it, shoulders relaxing.
I winced at the sound of the familiar feminine voice crying, “I volunteer going with Asher!”
Kiri gave me a sultry glance, batting her eyelashes. I blushed furiously, opening my mouth but no words came out.
Matthew smiled a bit. Lila pursed her lips into a laughing smile.
I sighed.
Oh brother.
“Well, I can go with them,” Lily said, obviously seeing my discomfort.
I let out a breath, shooting Lily a grateful look. I wouldn’t have to be alone with Aaron’s beautiful…blonde cousin.
“I can go with Matthew,” Lila offered. Matthew flushed, glancing at me, realizing.
“So…w-we are s-splitting u-up…?” He asked, nervously fiddling with the ends up his shirt. Lila gently placed a hand on his shoulder.
“We’ll be able to look more this way…but if you’d rather-”
“N-No! I-It’s fine…” Matthew blushed slightly.
I smiled mischievously at him.
I’m not the only one who has a bit of a crush…
“Albert?” Elias turned to his brother. The young man was fiddling with something against one of the walls. “Hey, Albert..?”
“He can go with us if you’d like,” Lila smiled sweetly.
Elias swallowed. “Ah…that might not…” He looked at Lila, pausing.
“Well…alright…”
As the groups started to say goodbye and began to head out, I turned to Matthew and forced a smile.
“Well…see you later, Matt.”
He blinked, and slowly nodded. “Y-yeah…”
Then he grinned.
My brows furrowed. “What?”
He shook his head, still smiling.”N-nothing. J-just how much fun y-you’re going to h-have with Kiri.”
I grimaced at him. “Hah…yeah. More like how much fun she’s going to have making me blush.”
Then I smirked. “And you have fun with Lila,” I said.
He blushed, throwing back his head. “Is i-it really th-that obvious?”
I grinned. “About as obscure as a whale in a swimming pool.”
He shook his head, still smiling. Then he sobered. “Well…I-I guess this i-is goodbye…f-for a while anyway.”
I nodded. “Yeah.” I stepped forward and gave him a hug. Then turning, I waved at him one last time as I followed my group out of the room and down one of the winding corridors in the large castle.
(I’ll try to do Matthew later! 🙂 )
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March 8, 2023 at 3:54 pm #136080@freedomwriter76 I believe it’s your turn to RP 😊 also do u wanna go ahead and introduce Iris into Fen and them’s group??
imma make an RP with Kiri and Asher and them leaving tho.
Kiri
“Alright guys-and gals-“ Kiri’s smiled at her cousin, who shook her head mirthfully. “Guess we’ll be seeing you all, after we find Brenny boy!” She them’s turned to Asher, golden hazel eyes bright.
“Would you like to lead?” She leaned in a bit, smiling sweetly. “I don’t mind following.” She tucked a strand of her hair behind her ear, eyes locking with the boy’s.
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#ProtectSebMarch 8, 2023 at 4:06 pm #136083March 8, 2023 at 6:12 pm #136155Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. Yeah, it is my turn. I may write a RP or 2, but y’all, @godly and @lightoverdarkness6 don’t be concerned if I’m not on much the next few days. I have Youth Group tonight, a Bible Study with my best friend tomorrow, and then my grandparents are coming on Friday and staying the weekend! Sooo…probably won’t be back until Sunday or even Monday. Just letting y’all know. 😊
Bucky
“I can…kinda…sense emotions…feel them…it’s…not the greatest feeling.”
Bucky slowly nodded, giving the kid a small smile. “I’d imagine…are you the only one who can do that, or…?”
Steve
“I have some rope.”
Everyone turned to face Nehemiah, who took something off of his side. “I-I have this for emergencies…it seems silly until you need it.”
Steve gently unwrapped Ryo’s arms from around his neck and handed him over to Tony. “We can hand the rope down and pull Bucky and Puck up. I’ll hold the rope, keep it from falling, and help pull. Anyone else wanna help?”
Iris
She held Lia closer to her, holding Aaliyah’s hand with her free hand.
“Mama…where are we going…?” Aaliyah asked.
Iris slowly shook her head. “I-I’m not entirely sure, sweetheart…just, stay with me.”
She’d been in a castle like this before…way back when. Years ago, back when she and Riker were younger and their older four kids still lived at home.
She let go of Aaliyah’s hand for a moment, grabbing a door handle, twisting it, and opening the door.
Light poured in from a hallway.
Iris shielded her eyes, just as she saw familiar faces. “Isabel, Jonathan!”
They both turned to face her, and Jonathan’s eyes widened. “MOM!? What…?”
Another door opened and a teenage boy stepped into the room. (it’s Dylan, btw…since he was joining this group too, lol! 😅🤣)
March 8, 2023 at 8:33 pm #136196@freedomwriter76
You’re good girl!! Hope you have an amazing week!! Have fun!! 😊❤😊❤
@godlyfantasy12 Sorry it took so long! 😅Matthew
I smiled at Asher as he and his companions exited the room.
Then, my smile sagged and I sighed, gazing at the floor.
“Matthew, which way would you like to go?” I heard a sweet voice ask.
I looked up to see Lila smiling at me. My cheeks flushed.
“U-uh…” I looked around at the several halls. “Wh-whichever one you w-want to,” I mumbled quietly, blushing.
Dylan
I opened the door, shielding my eyes from the light.
Suddenly, I heard a voice cry out, “Isabel, Jonathan!”
“MOM!? What…?” Another voice exclaimed.
I gazed around the room as my eyes adjusted to the brightness. There were several people in the room, along with two young children.
A woman held a small baby, her pigtails bouncing as her mother embraced several others.
Suddenly, they turned to me, noticing me for the first time.
I waved awkwardly. “Uh…hi. I’m looking for two 14 year old boys, Matthew and Asher. Have you seen them?”
Asher
“Would you like to lead?” Kiri leaned in a bit, smiling sweetly. “I don’t mind following.” She tucked a strand of her hair behind her ear, eyes locking with mine.
I blushed furiously.
“S-sure…um, which way should we g-go?” I asked Lily and Kiri softly, my stomach fluttering with butterflies.
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March 12, 2023 at 4:16 pm #136517Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@lightoverdarkness6. Aww, thanks girl!!! I did have fun! ❤️❤️❤️ @godlyfantasy12.
Okay, I’m back!!!! 😜😅😆
Now, time to RP!!!! 😏
Alex
“The years go by too fast…don’t they?” Vance asked, facing Riker, his expression changing.
Alex’s hands clenched and unclenched at her sides.
Bren wasn’t his.
She knew it.
And oddly enough, this man, this father…knew it too.
Riker smiled softly and merely nodded. “…They do. Way too quickly. I have four grown children and two more children, other than these three.”
Vance nodded.
Alex leaned over to Madelene. “We need to get Bren out of here…this crazed man can’t possibly be his father.”
“I know, Alex…patience.”
Alex huffed.
How long would they have to wait!?
This little boy could be hurt if they didn’t do something now!
“We need to get him, Madelene…now.”
“Patience, Alex…patience.” Madelene reminded, chided, softly, offering Alex a small smile.
Alex crossed her arms and turned away.
This little boy, though much older, reminded her of Ryo…wherever he was.
She just wanted to help Bren.
And oh, how she hoped that Ryo was safe.
March 14, 2023 at 7:46 pm #136810@freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6 I AM HEREEEEE!!!!! (I have a meeting at 7 tho so these will be quick!!!)
Puck
“No…my…My mother can,” Puck said, letting out a small breath. The pain was relenting some, sweat dripping from his brow.
Bucky sat beside him now, tilting his head. “Must be something…”
“It’s…not all it’s…cracked up to be…” He huffed.
“Hey Buck!” A voice called. Bucky looked up. Stood.
“Steve?”
“We’ve got a rope! We’re gonna throw it down and have you both climb back up! Alright?”
Bucky looked over at Puck, brows furrowed. He frowned.
Puck swallowed, still arched over, face contorted. He looked up, a bit shaky.
“Ah…one minute.” Bucky called. He knelt back down, one hand on his knee. “Puck…can you climb”
Puck glared. “Course I c-“ He winced as he tried to straighten, his back tightening, soreness flowering through.
Bucky shook his head. “That’s a no. Come on,” he held out his arms.
“What-?” But before Puck could say anything more, he felt himself lifted off the ground. His eyes went wide and he squirmed for a minute before realizing it was Bucky who was holding him, one arm under his knees, the other gently holding his back.
Puck sputtered as the man walked over where Steve had dropped the rope, through the hole in the ceiling.
“How are you possibly going to climb with me?!”
“You’re going to have to latch onto me.”
“This is ridiculous!”
“You want to stay down here?”
Puck stayed quiet. Bucky adjusted him, allowing the boy to grip his neck and slowly wrap his legs around his torso. He whimpered as he did so.
“What if they…can’t pull us both up…?” Puck whispered.
Bucky paused. Gripped the rope. “Steve’s strong. And there’s others up there. I’ll let them know what we’re doing….alright…? It’s gonna be fine.”
Puck slowly nodded, squeezing his eyes shut, refusing to tell Bucky he was…
Actually scared of heights…
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#ProtectSebMarch 14, 2023 at 7:49 pm #136811Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. WELCOME, WELCOME BACKKKKKK!!!!!!! I have dearly missed you!!! ❤️❤️❤️
March 14, 2023 at 7:55 pm #136816@freedomwriter76 I’m not entirely sure what to RP for bren so do u wanna go as Riker??
Fen
Fen stopped, as did Aria as, seemingly out of nowhere, a group appeared.
They didn’t seem dangerous…but looks could be deceiving. Fen’s fists clenched. He checked the strap against his “leg”, making sure it was stable just in case.
Aria’s eyes narrowed, her hand slipping beneath her cloak in an instant.
But these strangers were of no danger, which became apparent as soon as the one their group yelled “MOM?!”
Aria glanced at Fen, but before either had time to react, another door opened, on the opposite side.
“Trapped,” Fen whispered. Aria nodded.
This time, a young man entered. His face paled at the sight of the group. He held out his hands, laughing awkwardly, and then quickly introduced himself.
Dylan…
Looking for two young boys.
Brothers perhaps?
Fen’s muscles twitched, but his nerves eased slightly…
(Would Dylan notice his leg? If not ignore this)
And then the boy’s gaze drifted to his Fen’s leg, though it was only for a second. Fen flushed a bit, though he kept his eyes trained on this other young man’s. Dylan tried for a smile.
Fen knew he didn’t mean anything by it…but…
That didn’t make it any less painful…
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