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March 3, 2023 at 6:51 pm #135461
@freedomwriter76 sure u can introduce that character!!! Also I like the trap door idea or something relating to this character or both!!!
Aram
Aram raised a brow, glancing at Vlad, whose hands gripped his weapon until his knuckles turned white. Slowly he returned it to its place, though his eyes still stay trained on Aram.
Aram ignored them both, walking ahead a bit. “Exactly what is it you’re looking for, if I may ask.”
“You may not,” Vlad said.
“Vlad, please, this man might be able to help us,” Nadya said, smirking. She stepped up to Aram. “If we tell you…will you share a bit about yourself?”
Aram glanced at her. He slowly nodded. “Yes. But what I choose.”
Ginny
“Elias, hm? Strong name, good. We will need strength if we are to save young Red! Aaron!” Aaron blinked, straightening.
“Wh-what?” He flushed a bit pink, looking into Ginny’s bright green eyes. The girl grinned, hands on her hips, one touching the hilt of her saber.
“Any ideas where Bren lad might be?”
Aaron’s brows furrowed. He shook his head sadly.
“Ah, no matter. We’ll find him in no time.” She reached into the folds of her dress, pulling out the rusted compass she knew well.
Her fingers ran over its copper, letting out a small breath. The red arrow within spun until finally coming to a halt on a certain point.
“We shall follow the compass. It usually guides right.”
“Are you sure about-” Elias started but was stopped by a glare from the red-haired young lady. He clamped his mouth shut.
“Come,”
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#ProtectSebMarch 3, 2023 at 7:05 pm #135464@freedomwriter76 my RP was unfinished 🤣
so the end was supposed to say
“Come, Aaron,” Ginny said, placing a hand on Aaron’s shoulder, making his cheeks flush pink, “Let us find young Bren!”
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#ProtectSebMarch 3, 2023 at 7:07 pm #135465Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. Okay!
Lol…poor Elias! 😅🤣❤️
Vlad (this boy has an attitude today, lol!)
Nadya nodded and smiled, as if she trusted this man…as if she thought this man would understand.
Vlad shouldered up ahead, instead leading the way as the other two came in behind.
Nadya smiled at Aram. “Well, you see…there’s a….weapon we are looking for. A very good, special, and…useful weapon. Someone stole it from us, and we’re trying to find it and take it back, but they’re fighting us for it, you see? We merely want our weapon back because it is rightfully ours. You understand that, don’t you, Aram…?”
Elias
Elias rubbed the back of his neck and followed Ginny and Aaron as they took off down the hallway.
She was….well…certainly…uhm…something.
Not that Elias would openly admit that.
Truth be told,
she was kinda scary.
He wasn’t afraid of war, but women…? Some of them were terrifying.
“Are you sure we should be completely relying on that compass? It looks kind of…old?”
Steve
“Maybe we should keep moving on though…only way we’ll find our other brother.” Lucien mused.
Steve slowly nodded. Smiled softly. “You’re probably right.”
Footsteps sounded, and everyone was suddenly on high alert.
Nehemiah held Ryo closer, Steve drew his shield, Bucky drew his gun, and Lucien drew a bow. (Lucien has the bow, right??? I forgot…😅)
Everyone waited for a long moment, waiting to see who would come around the corner.
“STANK!” Ryo suddenly screamed, and Steve’s muscles instantly relaxed.
He heard Bucky chuckle quietly behind him.
“Wow…really? Can’t you call me Stark for once?”
Tony came around the corner in his metal suit with the face part off, his face visible. He glanced around. “Woah…everyone’s tense in here. Hey Steve. Hey Metal.”
Bucky scoffed and turned back around.
Steve sighed, put his shield up, and faced Tony with a grin. “Well, it’s great to see a familiar face.”
“STANK!”
Tony turned on Ryo. “What do you want from me?”
Ryo reached for Tony. “Up!”
Tony rolled his eyes, sighed, and took Ryo into his arms, taking him from Nehemiah.
Steve turned to Lucien, then Puck, Caden, and Benji. “It’s okay guys…he’s a friend.”
“Yeah. No need to be so tense.” Tony mused, shifting Ryo to his other arm. “I’m Tony. Tony Stark. Hey, you have a bow just like our friend Clint. I could call you Legolas…but I need a new nickname.” Tony said, facing Lucien, before facing Steve again. “Alright Capsicle, who are all of your new friends?”
Steve shook his head and quietly sighed. Well, Tony was certainly being Tony. “Tony, this is Lucien, Caden, Puck, Nehemiah, and Benji.” He motioned to each one as he said their names.
Tony nodded. “Nice to meet all of you.”
“Stank…” Ryo whispered, wrapping his arms around Tony’s neck.
Tony sighed. “I’m never going to get him to stop saying that, am I…?”
March 3, 2023 at 7:09 pm #135466@freedomwriter76 BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHA STAAAAAANK!!!!!!! Yesssssss!!!!!!!!!
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#ProtectSebMarch 3, 2023 at 7:09 pm #135467AND TONYYYYYY!!! AHHHHHHHH
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#ProtectSebMarch 3, 2023 at 7:09 pm #135468Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. Ohhh, okay! That happens sometimes!🤣
March 3, 2023 at 7:11 pm #135469Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. I thought it would be fun to add Tony. And yeah, Stank…everyone found out about that, and a mix of Steve, Bucky, and Loki taught Ryo that…Tony hates it, but everyone else thinks it’s hilarious. 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
March 3, 2023 at 7:18 pm #135471@freedomwriter76
Aram
Aram narrowed his eyes.
There was definitely something this girl was not telling him.
And he knew quite a bit about being deceptive. Most of his young life had been filled with deceit.
“A weapon? A sword?” He quirked a brow.
“Mm…not exactly…” Nadya sighed.
Aram nodded. “This…weapon…you say it was stolen?”
“Yes,” Nadya’s fists clenched. “We want it…need it returned to us. Everything depends on it.”
Aram was beginning to understand now.
“This weapon…it isn’t your average weapon is it?”
“Definitely not,” Nadya smiled.
Vlad shot them both a look, as if telling her not to say too much.
But in truth…that look had told Aram everything he needed to know.
The weapon wasn’t an object at all.
It was a person…
Aaron
Aaron’s face paled. He looked at Elias, shaking his head wildly.
Ginny stopped in her tracks. Turned to the older man. Her eyes were dark, hidden slightly beneath dark red curls. Her hand gripped the compass tight, turning her knuckles white.
“This compass….has been in me family…for generations. It will not lead us astray.” And with that, she turned back around.
Both boys stood, hearts beating loudly. Elias’s face was pale. He glanced at Aaron. Whispered.
“Is…she always like that..?”
Aaron chuckled a bit. “Umm…intense you mean? W-Well…I just met her kinda recently but…yea….” Elias let out a breath. Aaron looked at him. “Hey, she’s not so bad though. Just…you know…a bit rough around the edges…”
Elias glanced at him. Aaron looked back at Ginny, quirking his lips to one side.
He watched as she walked ahead down the hall, following the compass in her hand. Her eyes roved the room, head moving and making her curls fall over her shoulders. Her hips swayed as she walked, steel-toed boots clicking against the floor.
Aaron blushed furiously, averting his gaze.
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@godlyfantasy12. Aram is onto them…hehehe!!! 😅🤣😏
Lol, poor Aaron!!! 🤣🤣🤣
Vlad
Nadya had already said too much. “Come on, Nadya, let’s not bother the man.”
Nadya glared at him. “He’s the one who asked. Now, Aram, is there anything you would like to share?”
Elias
Elias smirked. Poked Aaron in the shoulder. “You like her, don’t you…?” He asked in a somewhat sing-song voice.
Aaron turned to face him with wide eyes, cheeks flushing a dark pink. “W-what!? N-no! No way!”
“Oy, are you boys coming or not!?” Ginny cried, turning around, hands on her hips.
Elias gave Aaron another smirk and faced Ginny with a smile. “Yes ma’am, we are. Come on, Aaron.” He winked at his new friend and followed after Ginny.
Aaron had a crush on her, no doubt about it. But the chances were he didn’t want to admit it and Ginny didn’t want to acknowledge it…tough.
Maybe they needed to realize that they loved each other…even if they didn’t want to.
Well, maybe this adventure had just gotten a lot more fun.
(lol…Elias is plotting…😅🤣😏)
March 3, 2023 at 7:31 pm #135475@freedomwriter76
Puck
Lucien raised a brow, slowly lowering his bow. He slipped it back on his back, and the arrow back in its place.
“Tony? Well, nice to meet ya.”
Caden smiled, “Yea! The more company the better!”
Puck let out a long, loud sigh/groan, obviously thinking the opposite. Caden offered him a sympathetic smile, rubbing his shoulder.
“Stank!” Ryo cried again, giggling. Benji, who was standing beside Caden, erupted into a belly full of giggles.
Tony looked over, as if noticing the other small child for the first time. He rolled his eyes to the heavens.
“Stank! He called him stanky!”
“Benji…be nice…” Caden said, though it was obvious he was trying very hard to hide his laugh.
“Stanky…” Benji snickered, holding his mouth.
“STANK!” Ryo screeched again. Benji erupted once again into giggles.
Puck rubbed his temples, muttering something about a headache. He leaned against the wall.
“What’s up with Rabbit?” (Hope u don’t mind me making a nickname)
Puck looked up, brown furrowing. “Rabbit…? What-?”
“Ya know, the ears kid,” Tony pointed to his own ears, which were obviously smaller then Puck’s own.
Puck pursed his lips, grabbing a single ear. He was the second person that day to mention his ears. Then again, the other was a toddler, but still!
“Tony, really?” Steve sighed.
“Ya know…you do kinda look like a bunny.” Lucien said. “You know, you do that nose thing.”
“What nose thing!”
“You know…that!” Lucien pointed. Puck’s nose was scrunched up, quivering slightly. He put a hand over it.
“I do not! Besides he said a rabbit.”
“Same thing.”
“Alright, come on guys…” Caden said.
Puck still held a hand on his nose, staring at the floor. He frowned.
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#ProtectSebMarch 3, 2023 at 7:35 pm #135479@freedomwriter76 GASP YESSS PLOTTING ELIAS!!!!
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#ProtectSebMarch 3, 2023 at 7:41 pm #135490@freedomwriter76 ok so I’ll be in a concert tonight for who knows how long lol!!!
u can RP for Puck’s group and if u want to get Buck and Puck (heh XD) separated from the other group u can and then we can RP more tomorrow 😊
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#ProtectSebMarch 3, 2023 at 7:51 pm #135495Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. I don’t mind at all!!! 🤣🤣🤣 (poor Puck.)
Steve
Puck stared at the floor, frowning, a hand still over his nose.
Poor kid.
Steve turned on Tony, rolling his eyes. “Really, Tony? You had to do that?”
“What? Rabbit fits him.”
Steve sighed, crossing his arms.
Tony was…something.
“Just like how I call you Capsicle because you were in the ice for such a long time and because you’re Cap. Just like Clint and being called Legolas, and Mr. Shakespeare In The Park. I have nicknames for everyone, Cap…it’s my thing, right?”
“Still. You could have been nicer about it.”
“Nicer?”
“Yeah, stop being a jerk for once.” Bucky retorted, now standing beside Steve, his gun up, but obviously he was still on the alert.
Tony faced them both, Ryo still in his arms. He rolled his eyes. “No one asked for your opinion, Metal Head.”
“And no one asked for your nicknames and attitude either.”
“I’m the one with attitude? Look who’s talking.” Tony retorted.
Ryo glanced back and forth between the three of them.
Steve needed to stop this before it got worse. “Guys, hey, come on…”
Bucky took a step towards Tony. “You’re not the only one who gives people nicknames, Stark. I have a whole list of nicknames for you, but most of them I can’t say around little ears.”
“Is that so, Barnes?” Tony snarled, stepping up to Bucky.
Steve stepped in between them, pushing them apart. “Tony, Bucky, knock it off. If you two can’t get along then I’m going to keep the two of you away from each other. Got it?”
“Fine by me. I’d rather be away from him.” Bucky retorted, before turning on his heel and walking away a bit further away.
Tony shrugged. “Whatever, Capsicle. I’d rather stay away from Metal Head anyways.”
Ryo pursed his lips, a few stray tears in his eyes.
He always hated seeing people fight.
“Here Steve, you take him. He seems to like you better anyways.” Tony mused, holding Ryo out.
Steve gently took Ryo into one of his arms.
He gently wiped the tears from Ryo’s eyes with his other hand before wrapping his other arm underneath Ryo. Ryo wrapped his arms around Steve’s neck, finally lapsing into silence.
Steve slowly turned to the others as Tony stalked away to stand a bit further away. “Sorry about that Puck, everyone. Do you guys want to start moving forward?”
March 3, 2023 at 7:52 pm #135497Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. Ooh, have fun!!! I went to my 1st concert last night, it was sooo much fun!!! 😃😄
Have fun!!! 💗💗💗
March 3, 2023 at 8:17 pm #135518@freedomwriter76 thx!! I can make another RP I thought it started earlier then it does XD
Lucien
Lucien whistled. Things were getting…heated.
Caden lifted Benji into his arms. The boy wrapped his arms around the blonde, frowning.
“Why’s everyone angry?”
“Shh…it’s alright, bud. Just…a lot of emotions going around…” Caden swallowed, looking down at Puck.
Lucien followed his gaze.
Yea…a lot of emotions…
Not great for an unwieldy Empath….
Puck was still staring at the ground, fingers now pinching his pants. He pursed his lips, wrapping his arms around his torso.
“Puck…?” Lucien raised a brow, but before he could ask if the kid was alright, Bucky called from ahead.
“Hey, guys, y’all might wanna see this.”
Before anyone else could say anything, Puck was gone, obviously wanting to get away from some of the crowd. He headed toward Bucky, past Lucien, arms still wrapped around himself.
Lucien frowned, watching him.
He didn’t seem just…upset anymore.
Now his face was pale…like he was…in pain?
Steve sighed, shaking his head, holding a now quiet little toddler in his arms.
“Well, I guess we should-“
And then…
A yell of alarm sounded from down the hall.
Everyone turned in surprise.
“PUCK!” Caden cried, recognizing the voice.
“STEVE!” Bucky yelled, voice strained, from down the hall.
The group took off, hearts beating in their chests. Lucien put a hand on his bow, pulling out and knocking it with an arrow.
But…when they reached the end of the hall….
Bucky and Puck were nowhere to be seen….
“Puck?!” Caden yelled, looking around. Lucien kept his eyes trained, but they weren’t around.
“Bucky! Buck!” Steve yelled.
“Hey! Down here!” A voice yelled.
Everyone turned, and that, was when they spotted the small, square shaped hole in the ground.
A…trapdoor of some kind.
Everyone looked down.
It was dark…and deep from the looks of it, and the way Bucky’s voice was faint and echoing.
Steve called down, “Buck! Are you alright?!”
“I…I think I’m fine…but…” He paused, coughing. “The kid…I don’t see him…”
Lucien and Caden met eyes, stomachs flipping.
Puck…
No…he…he had to be alright…he had to be!
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