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March 3, 2023 at 4:33 pm #135439
@freedomwriter76 AND BACK!!
Lucien
Lucien watched as Bucky walked away, leaving Steve…looking not so great. Lucien frowned, letting out a small breath. Benji tilted his head.
“What’s wrong?” The boy asked. Lucien forced a smile.
“Ah…I think, maybe he could use a bit of cheering up,” Lucien nodded his head at the muscular blonde. Benji’s eyes lit up and he nodded fiercely.
Setting Benji down, the boy ran up to the blonde, transforming mid-way into a pup. He leapt at the man’s legs, surprising him.
“What-?” Steve looked down, just in time to find a roly-poly black wolf pup tugging at his skin tight pants leg. He couldn’t help but grin. He glanced at Lucien who shrugged, smile on his face.
Steve slowly picked up the pup. Benji licked the air, unable to get at Steve’s face as he held him up.
“You and your brothers are…something,” Steve said, laughing. He brought the pup close, letting it crawl over him, like the excited creature it, or he, was.
Steve laughed harder.
Lucien came over.
“If he’s bothering you let me know,” Lucien said, still grinning. “Us Beowulf boys aren’t exactly known for our “Calm.”
Steve shook his head as the pup licked him. “He’s fine.”
Lucien folded his arms, tilting his head. He glanced ahead at Bucky. “You alright?”
Steve frowned a bit. “Ah…fine. He’s just…going through some stuff.”
“Yea, I get it. Trust me. I do have three brothers.”
Steve set Benji down, and the wild pup ran off, sights now set on Caden.
“Yea…triplets huh? What’s that like.”
Lucien put his arms behind his head. “It’s cool. Kinda stressful sometimes, but at least we don’t have to deal with people confusing us, since we look nothing alike.”
Steve smiled.
“I get it though,” Lucien said, face growing serious. “Really.” He looked at Bucky. “I mean…My brothers and I, we’ve had great lives, but that doesn’t mean everything is perfect, ya know? My little brother, his name’s Fenrys,” Lucien’s eyes softened, no longer seeing Bucky walking down the hall, but his younger brother, struggling with his artificial leg. “He…ah…he got the short end of the stick.”
Steve was quiet for a moment. Nodded slowly. Lucien lowered his gaze.
“I just, I understand. Trying to say the right things…but they come out…not so great,” he chuckled. “Me and Caden both. It’s hard sometimes, when your on the outside looking in, and all you wanna do is help.”
Steve swallowed, and Lucien wondered if, for a moment, there were tears in the man’s eyes.
“Exactly…” Steve whispered.
“But I do know one thing, for certain. At the end of day, my brothers and I? We’re still that. Brothers. And even if I say the wrong thing, Fen…well…usually, he always comes to understand that I meant well. And while the point may not have gotten across how I wanted it to, things usually have a way of working out in the end. That’s what my Asti says.”
“Your Asti?”
“Ah, mom,” Lucien chuckled, running a hand through his hair.
Steve laughed. He nodded, smiling.
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#ProtectSebMarch 3, 2023 at 4:40 pm #135440@freedomwriter76
Aram
Aram’s grip tightened as the door before him opened and a young woman let out a shrill scream. His body tensed, preparing for a fight, especially when a young man pulled out what appeared to be some sort of…weapon.
Aram’s eyes narrowed as the young man called out.
“Who are you? Are you the reason we’re here!?”
Aram sucked in a breath, gazing from the pale faced girl to the determined young man, weighing his options.
He spoke slow, deliberately.
“I am not. I do not know how I came to be here. As for who I am, I see no reason to tell you this.”
The young man’s eyes narrowed. He held the weapon in his hands tighter. “You will tell us. Now!”
Aram glared. He would not be bullied by a mere child.
“No. I will not.” He straightened. The boy’s eyes blazed, but the girl slowly put an arm out, eyes more curious now then anything. Aram could tell she was looking at the scars on his face.
She pursed her lips, eyes narrowing.
“You were brought here too then?”
“What are you doing?” The young man growled.
“Getting answers, unlike someone,” the girl retorted. Aram raised a brow. Obviously these two did not get along…
“As I said before, I don’t know how I got here. If you’d excuse me, I’ll pass without any bother to you.”
“That’s not gonna happen,” the young man said, “Not until you tell us who you are.”
Aram sighed. If it would get him out of here…
“Alright, fine. My name is Aram. That is all you need to know.”
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#ProtectSebMarch 3, 2023 at 4:45 pm #135441@freedomwriter76 would u like to RP as Elias? I just would like to Get Ginny meeting up with Aaron soon XD u don’t have to tho
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#ProtectSebMarch 3, 2023 at 4:46 pm #135442Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. Welcome back!!!! 😀
AWW, LUCIEN!!!! 💖😭
You are sooooo sweet to everyone!!! 💖💖💖😭😭😭
Steve
Someone else understood.
More often than not, Steve felt…alone. Wondering if he was the only one out there who wanted to make things right and oftentimes…ended up making things worse.
He gently rubbed the back of his neck, easing tension from his shoulders. “Thanks, Lucien…it means a lot…really.”
(btw, I was wondering if I could add someone from my fanfic (a Marvel character, mind you, lol, to this group, since he knows them and Ryo and his interactions are HILARIOUS sometimes…🤣 It may cause some conflict at some point tho…but it’s up to you. 😊)
Lol, Aram!!! 🤣🤣🤣
Vlad
Vlad raised an eyebrow. He wanted…needed more. “That’s not enough.”
Nadya shot him a glare and turned to Aram with an apologetic smile. “Forgive my comrade here, Aram. He doesn’t think before he speaks. I am Nadya, and this is Vladimir. Everyone calls him Vlad.” She smiled softly. “You may pass through if you’d like, but if you’re looking for someone…we wouldn’t mind helping you. We’re also looking for someone…oh, and something.”
March 3, 2023 at 4:48 pm #135443Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. I’d love to be Elias!!! 😃😊
Elias
The groups slowly split up.
He wasn’t exactly…the most comfortable, leaving Albert alone with Lila and Matthew.
Yeah, he was his older brother…but Albert…Albert was…well…different. Not in a bad way. No, not in the least.
Just…different. He saw things differently…sometimes better than they did.
“Elias…? You there?”
He blinked and faced Aaron. Gave a small nervous laugh. “Me? Oh, yeah, I’m here…sorry about that. I was thinking. Alright, the hallway splits up ahead. Which direction do you think we should go?”
March 3, 2023 at 4:54 pm #135446@freedomwriter76 did…SHE just call Bucky a something….
OOF 😤😤😤😡😡
Sure I don’t mind!!! And I’m always up for conflict!! And I’m trying to think of how we can separate Bucky and Puck from the rest of the group (just for a little bit not forever)…any ideas?
Aram
Aram gazed at the girl, trying to weigh her intentions.
He knew the look on her face…knew it well. Because it was a look he’d worn many, many times in his life.
The look of someone whose intentions were…not exactly wholesome.
And…perhaps still weren’t.
Aram pulled at his cloak, licking his lips as fury boiled in his stomach. A small, fanning fire of rage…bitterness.
Hate.
One he’d been feeding for years.
“Hm.” He grunted.
The girl, Nadya, raised a brow, looking at Vlad.
“Is that a yes…or…?”
“I will accompany you. On my time. When I choose too, I will leave.” Aram said.
Vlad didn’t seem happy with this arrangement.
“Just who do you think you are?!”
“Vlad, please,” Nadya sighed. She gave a small smile, nodding at Aram. “So be it.”
Aram nodded back, though his eyes lingered on the young man.
The question remained…
Who was he…?
Once….
He’d been a prince.
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#ProtectSebMarch 3, 2023 at 5:28 pm #135447@freedomwriter76
Aaron
Aaron flushed a bit. He wanted him to decide?
He calmed his nerves, sucking in a large breath as he scanned the split halls. “Hm…ah…I’m not sure,” He said honestly, blushing around the ears. “But…something tells me…we go left.”
“Left it is then,” Elias smiled.
Aaron returned it, though his stomach twisted at the sudden thought of: What if he was wrong…
What if Bren was in the other direction…
What if they missed his brother…because of him?
“You good?” Elias asked. Aaron merely nodded, pulling at his tunic.
Ginny (YESSS)
Ginny kicked the oak door with the metal toe of her boots, sending a stray piece of rock flying. Her red curls fell over her shoulders and her brows furrowed in agitation.
“GAH! Their door is gonna be the death of me.” She sighed, stepping back with her hands on her hips.
Currently, Ginny had found herself locked in a windowless room, having awoken completely bedraggled and without any knowledge of where she was.
Drugged.
Shanghaied!
Must have been!
Gah…stupid boys…getting her involved in their little adventure. Getting her kidnapped…locked up in who knows where for who knows what reason!
She growled, stepping back, preparing herself once again to run at the door, full force.
She let out a savage, wild cry that, should anyone else have heard they would not have thought her a proper lady at all-not that she was one mind you-and barreled into the door.
It creaked on it’s hinges, but didn’t break.
She huffed, a bit out of breath and shoulder aching.
But Ginny was no quitter.
Aye! Not Ginny McFadden!
She growled, stepping back further this time, till her back reach the wall behind her.
“BLAST IT ALL!” She cried, running once more full force into the door.
Just in time for it to open…
Her eyes went wide, but it was too late to stop her motion and she soon found herself on the ground, something hard but also a bit soft beneath her.
Immediately she drew her saber, holding it edged across the person’s neck, eyes glaring.
“Who are ya! Why have yo-” Her brows raised as her vision cleared, recognizing the person beneath her.
She pursed her lips, lowering her saber slightly.
“Aaron?”
Indeed, Aaron was beneath her, pinned down as she sat on his chest, saber still near his neck. His eyes widened, face pale.
“I-I-” He stuttered. Ginny raised a brow. “Ginny…?”
“Course tis!”
Aaron swallowed, glancing down at her sword. “Ah…”
“Oh, aye,” Ginny said, placing her saber back in her belt, when she then noticed the stranger standing nearby, eyes wide as saucers.
She leapt to her feet, hand once again on her saber.
“Who are you?” She asked. He held up his hands.
“Ginny, no! He’s a friend,” Aaron said, slowly sitting up and rubbing his abdomen.
Ginny slowly stood straight, though her hand was still positioned next to her belt. Her eyes ticked from the stranger back to Aaron.
“Friend, hm? Is he the one who brought us here? Shanghaied us?”
“Sh-shanghaied? What’s that…ah…never mind! Listen,” Aaron stood, “Bren’s been kidnapped! I…I don’t know where he is, but we’re trying to find him, and-”
“Oy! Slow down!” Ginny held out her hands.
First…
He didn’t know what a shanghai was?
Aye…
“Red’s been kidnapped?” her eyes narrowed, imagining the fiery haired ball of spunk she’d met only a few weeks back. Aaron nodded, face falling. Ginny frowned.
“Who did it?”
“Some guy…I…I’m not sure. He was looking for some boys we met, but…we can’t do what he wants…”
“Why not? It would get Red back.” Ginny folded her arms.
The stranger blinked. “Well, because it’s wrong…?”
Ginny pursed her lips. “Sometimes you have to do hard things.”
Aaron swallowed, face paling. He looked away. “I…I can’t do that.”
Ginny sighed. Shook her head.
“You’re too good ya know.” She put her hands on her hips. “But alright. We’ll find Red.”
Aaron looked at her, eyes bright now. He smiled. She returned it. He blushed slightly.
Her eyes drifted to the stranger.
“Oy, I haven’t gotten your name.”
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#ProtectSebMarch 3, 2023 at 6:20 pm #135449@freedomwriter76
Happy Birthday!!!
I hope your birthday is AMAZING!!!! 🥳🎉🎈🎊💖
Thank you so much 😊🥰💖!!!!! It has been pretty amazing so far 🥰
Aww Liam!! Riker!! And Cameron!!
XDXD Damien!! He’s so cute.
im also wondering if Vance is still going to get away with Bren because that group is getting large… but I also am enjoying the kidnapping thing XD XD I want the group to have conflict but then maybe he still gets away with Bren and now he has more people after him? When he meets Viola?
Haha, yeah…me too…😅🫢😆 Yeah, that sounds good!
GASP maybe in the end the big story ends up being a search for Bren, but it also is full of conflict because now he has Viola looking for Bucky and maybe that one guy and Raymond join too and AHHHHH!!!
what do y’all think?!
(also poor Bren will be surrounded by villains XD)
*GASP* AHHH YESSS!!! Oh my goodness, brilliant!!! And maybe Vance can get Matthew, and use him and Bren for leverage…and then Viola will be with him and they’ll be helping each other find their victims…and just ughh I love it already XD!!
(And yes, the poor baby XD 😅😭)
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March 3, 2023 at 6:32 pm #135450@lightoverdarkness6 IKR!!!! Oh hey idk how long ur on but do u wanna RP as Vance?
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#ProtectSebMarch 3, 2023 at 6:37 pm #135451Aww Aaron!! He’s so precious and sweet <3<3
And…that picture…Wow. Just WOW. XD
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March 3, 2023 at 6:38 pm #135452Ah, I would, but my family is about to go out to eat! I’ll try to get one in tonight, if not, then tomorrow. 🙂 Sorry!
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March 3, 2023 at 6:38 pm #135453@lightoverdarkness6 XD XD ikr…lol
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#ProtectSebMarch 3, 2023 at 6:39 pm #135455Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Thank you so much 😊🥰💖!!!!! It has been pretty amazing so far 🥰
Aww Liam!! Riker!! And Cameron!!
XDXD Damien!! He’s so cute.
You are sooo welcome!!! Aww, I’m glad!!! 😊💖
Aww, thanks!!! I love them so much already. 😅🤣😍
@godlyfantasy12. Okay, do you want me to introduce the character to the group with Steve and them, or do you wanna RP first? 😊And hmmmmm…maybe Puck/Bucky could go into a room ahead of the others and the door locks, or they could fall into a trapdoor, or…IDK…maybe something involving the character I’m going to introduce??? idk…😅
And yes, Nadya called Bucky “something” 😭😡
And oooh….Aram is so intriguing! 😮😏😅
Nadya
“Well, shall we go on then?” Nadya offered with a warm smile.
Aram slowly nodded. “We shall.”
She smiled and nodded, turning on her heel to walk away.
Aram came to walk somewhat beside her, and Vlad fell into step behind.
Good. She could only stand that child for so long.
Nadya turned to Aram with a smile. “I’m glad you could accompany us, Aram. Ignore Vlad. He’s…flighty.”
Elias
“Oy, I haven’t gotten your name.”
This girl seemed…energetic, in a way. She reminded Elias of Lily, in a small way.
She also had a very…interesting accent.
Elias smiled. “I’m Elias. I’m…a new friend of Aaron’s. We met in this castle. We’re looking for Bren right now…”
March 3, 2023 at 6:40 pm #135456Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@lightoverdarkness6. Have fun with your fam!!! 😊💖
@godlyfantasy12. Hello again!!! 😃💖🤣 -
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