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February 8, 2023 at 4:53 pm #132306Anonymous
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Okay…this is it for now!!! (until I find out what guy Naja is married to, lol! š¤£)
Name: Eli Henry Schind
Age: 25
Personality: Sweet, highly intelligent, brave, curious, hard-working, devoted, courageous, faithful, honest, kind, caring
Looks: Bright blonde slightly messy hair (like the photo), bright green eyes, pale skin. Wears a long sleeve white button-up shirt, a red sweater-vest overtop, a black tie, black pants, and black dress shoes
February 8, 2023 at 5:01 pm #132307@freedomwriter76 š LILY!!!!!!
AHHHH DR WOLFGANG?!?! AHHHHH!!! š
ok ok, time to introduce my babies!!! (Or future babies š)
Also, if youāve ever read the Wingfeather saga, o kinda think of Araās children like the Igiby siblings š„°
First off-
Aaron Mael Nadir
Aaron is the eldest of November and Araās children, making him the one who will one day take Araās place as ruler of AāGrend, a large destiny to live up to.
Aaron tries his best to take this in stride. He is humble, brave and has a strong sense of moral justice. His family is most important, both the one living within the castle, and the ones heās grown up with outside of the castle walls.
With an array of people who love him and to come home to, Aaronās life has never been one without Light.
Heās apt to make sure his parents are proud of the man heāll one day become. The king heāll one day be, and while he knows his father has nothing but love to give to him, heāll still do anything in his power to keep pleasing him.
Appearance: Brown hair like in the photo above, a few streaks of lightness in it, and in the sunlight can appear very dark red (from his fatherās genes.) He has small curly spots around his ears.
Deep Brown eyes like his mother and fair skin with just a few very light freckles dotting his face. Wears his motherās green Destina crystal.
(Iām bad at clothes sooo yea XD)
Age: Weāre gonna go with around 15
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#ProtectSebFebruary 8, 2023 at 5:11 pm #132311@freedomwriter76 ELIIIII!!!!!!! AHHHH!!!! Also itās so great how u write adults and I write teens XD XD
Here’s ma girl!!!! Yāallā¦the girls in the future are likeā¦
Ok I love my current girlsā¦but their daughters? Their like hauntingā¦in a good way. Like theyāre so pretty! And justā¦their personalities and idk! Itās just so cool.
So here is:
Aria-Lynn Fabel
Being born only a year after her brother, Aria and Aaron are practically considered twins to all around them. Not that they mind.
The two are extremely close, though a bit different in demeanor.
Quiet, strong and resilient, Aria is loyal to her family, just like Aaron, but she is thankful she is not in his place to one day take over in her motherās footsteps.
Itās enough having to deal with her shared gift of visionsā¦
But Aria doesnāt resent her mother in anyway for this giftā¦no, she knows it has a purpose. Somehow.
But Aria knows she is not fit for the throne, and that is fine with her. Sheād much rather spend her time sparring with the triplets, or practicing her craft of creating new weapons and shield then reading books or learning to deal with people.
But she does love her family. Her brother. Her people.
And sheāll do whatever she has to to protect them.
Appearance: Brown wavy hair in soft curls, the color of her motherās only a bit darker.
Deep brown eyes and light fair skin.
Age: around 14
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#ProtectSebFebruary 8, 2023 at 5:32 pm #132314AHHH ITS TIME FOR ONE OF MY BABIES!!!!!!! EEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!! *jumps up and down excitedly*
(of course itās my baby, heās likeā¦a carbon copy of November except also not!)
Bren Edan Nadir (I canāt pick one pic! Imma just post his board XD)
Bren is the youngest of the Nadir family. Born with fiery red hair, he was the spitting image of his father as soon as he opened his eyes.
Straying from the previous children, Ara insisted this oneĀ finallyĀ not be named after her, but instead, after his father.
Thus, Bren came into existence.
Bren is a fun, playful and silly boy. Heās often found with one of his siblings, talking their ear off, or perhaps just to be near them. He canāt stand being alone, always wanting someoneās constant company, though maybe not necessarily their attention.
Heās fairly carefree, as most little boys his age should be, although he can cause quite a bit of a stir sometimes, to no fault of his own.
Andā¦this makes him very sad sometimes.
After allā¦he didnāt mean to hurt anyone. Or their items. Or animals. Or homes.
He justā¦canāt control whatās inside of him.
And sometimes,Ā the fire likes the get out.
Does that make him bad? Or evil? Or no good?
His parents say it doesnātā¦
And so do all his friendsā¦
His fatherās learned to control his powersā¦
Butā¦
When all your power does is hurt people, does that mean your the one hurting people?
Is if you? Or is it whatās in you? And is there a difference?
Ahā¦but itās okay.
At least the dragons understand.
Appearance: Curly ginger hair (I really like the hair of the boy in the top left pic lol, with the bird) and bright baby blue eyes just like his daddy. Fair skin with a few freckles, and a single dimple on his right cheek. Like November he is left handed.
Age: Around 11
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#ProtectSebFebruary 8, 2023 at 5:32 pm #132315I have others but I think Iāll start with them for now.
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#ProtectSebFebruary 8, 2023 at 6:02 pm #132317Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. Yes, it is quite funny that I write adults and you write teens! š¤£š¤£š¤£
AHHHH, BREN!!!! I LOVE YOUUUUU!!!!! šššššš
Alrighty!!! I’m gonna start with Albert, Elias, and Lily, just bc I want the three of them together. š
Elias
This wasn’t their house…or Riker’s…and it certainly wasn’t Vietnam.
It wasn’t anywhere Elias knew.
“This place looks interesting! It’s a beautiful castle…I feel like I’ve done this before…but oh, whatever!” Lily cried, looking around the grand hall with a big smile.
She spun in a circle, her knee-length skirt fanning out around her. “It’s a VERY beautiful castle! Albert, Elias, don’t you think we should go exploring?”
Elias grinned. If they had this opportunity…why not make the most of it!? “Yeah, let’s go exploring!”
Albert smiled and nodded. “Sure! I’m getting tired of just standing here.”
Lily laughed and nodded. “Let’s go then…woah, that made me dizzy!” She rubbed her head and laughed again before grabbing Elias’ hand. “Come on, let’s go!”
Elias smiled. She had even remembered to not touch Albert, who didn’t let many people touch him.
Elias laughed and squeezed her hand. “Come on, let’s go, Lily! Albert, see if you can catch up!”
“You think I can’t catch you!? Just you wait!” Albert called back.
And they went racing down the hall.
February 8, 2023 at 7:27 pm #132328@freedomwriter76 I love that mention of Lily sorts remembering it but not really, maybe she finally remembers later when she meets one mine, maybe they remind her of when she met one of my charries or something (specifically Bren sinceā¦he is the spitting image of Novemberā¦)
Also Iām thinking Iāll have Bren and Aaron be together, and Aria will be alone for now.
Aaron and Bren can meet the current group if u donāt mind!
Aaron
Aaronās eyes blurred as he blinked them open, light burning into his mind. He winced, rolling to his side and rubbing his face.
Was it morning already?
It felt as though heād just gotten to sleepā¦
Then againā¦he had tossed and turned for a long while the night before.
Sleeping in the woods was nowhere near as comfortable as sleeping in your own bed.
He sat up with a small sigh, resting an arm on one knee as he surveyed his surroundings and-
Waitā¦
Aaronās heart sped as the tired fog cleared, revealing the cold yet pristine marble work of the floor he now lay on. His mind reeled, breath quickening.
Had it all been a dream? Everything that had happened recently?
Some sort ofā¦drawn out nightmare?
Had he fallen and hit his head? Concussed himself?
He stared at the marble around him, and then looked up at the chandelier hanging above. Bright gold, shining into the beautiful curtains and wallpaper that decorated the room.
It was beautifulā¦butā¦
The colors were way off.
Reds and purples and goldsā¦not enough creamsā¦
This was not home.
He squeezed his eyes shut as the hope that sprung suddenly vanished.
Abba was still goneā¦
He sucked in a breath, fingers clenching into a fist as his other hand clutched his heart.
His head jerked up.
His siblings. His friends. Where were they?
He peered once again around the room.
Andā¦where was he?
And they been captured during the night?
But why was he not bound if so?
He slowly stood, searching the room for any sign of familiarity. Any sign of those he knew.
Why hadnāt he been wakened from his sleep? Heā¦shouldāve heard somethingā¦
Sucking in a breath, Aaron walked to the first door, taking hold of its golden handle.
He had to find his siblings, and his friends. He couldnāt let them down.
Bren
This placeā¦wherever it was, was big. Bren had found that out when heād tried running down a variety of different hallways and doors, calling out the names of his siblings and various people he knew-to no avail.
He seemed to be in a castle, as it looked a lot similar to home, but it was definitely not his homeā¦
His home was aĀ lotĀ nice. And cleaner.
Ima made sure of that.
He threw open yet another door. āAaron! Aria!ā
Nothing. He let out a huff, cheeks puffing out like a chipmunk as he ran to try another door
(as for his outfit I imagine him wearing what the boy in the one photo with the bird is wearing, in his collage with a bright blue belt that kinda waves behind him when he runs lol I thought this was cute while heās running and opening doors XD)
His first thought when waking up in this castle was that Aaron and Aria had brought him homeā¦
A thought that had both excited him and made him upset.
For oneā¦he wouldāve liked to Imaā¦
He did miss her soā¦
Her beautiful voice. Her hair. Her eyes. The hugs sheād give, and the way sheād hold him whenever he was scaredā¦.
Butā¦the thought of his siblings and his friends going on an adventure without him? Leaving him all alone?
He peeked into another room.
Nothing.
He ran down another hall.
He knew he shouldnāt have done itā¦.knew it was wrong to sneak awayā¦to hide himself and not let his Ima or siblings know he was following until later.
Like Aaron had saidā¦whatĀ wasĀ Ima thinking now?
Was she sad? Angry?
Bren frowned, coming to stop. He pinched the ends of his tunic, biting his lip.
Heād never want to make her any of those thingsā¦
Butā¦
It had been Puckās idea first!
Soā¦it was Puckās fault! Not his!
His small heart gave a quiver.
Noā¦you chose to listenā¦
He let out a small sigh, nodding.
(I think Iām gonna make him 10 instead of 11, I just think heās a bit younger lol)
It was then that the door in front of him, the one heād been about to open, opened.
āBren?ā Aaronās voice was full of relief. Bren grinned from ear to ear, all previous worries gone.
āAaron! Iāve been looking everywhere for you! Do you know where we are? Whereās Aria? And everyone else? This place kinda looks like our home doesnāt it? How did we get here? Ooh this roomās pretty!ā
Aaron gave a small smile, running a hand through Brenās hair.
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#ProtectSebFebruary 8, 2023 at 7:33 pm #132330I really loved writing Brenās POV! His little personality and outlook is so cute!! I love it!
and you can definitely see the resemblance to November in him but also heās his own self, and the changes in raising and having siblings has definitely molded some of that (Novemberās abused childhood and Ara was an only child)
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#ProtectSebFebruary 8, 2023 at 9:25 pm #132335@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76
Oh, this is interesting. I usually don’t stretch the timeline that much, I know that Layson and Everly have one or two other kids besides Maylee. Is this like a no parents zone š¤£ or could I have the whole fam here? Or maybe just Everly and Maylee and one of the other kids… XD I dunno.
Oh and I don’t think Tauren and Lesli have kids after they get married, just a very beloved border collie they treat like a kid šš¤£
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
February 8, 2023 at 10:09 pm #132342@mineralizedwritings lol! Thatās cute!
Hm I donāt think parents are off limits. Honestly if Freedom ever wanted to bring like Riker in (if heās still alive š plz say he isā¦) or one of the boys as a parent Iād be fine with it š
But we probably wonāt make groups tooo huge right off the bat keep the more split? But who knowsā¦.
cuz I have a lot more to introduce laterā¦.
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#ProtectSebFebruary 9, 2023 at 10:12 am #132356@freedomwriter76 u on?
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#ProtectSebFebruary 9, 2023 at 11:24 am #132373*appears*
Hellooooo! Just wondering what ‘Character Castle’ is. XD I just scrolled through and saw beautiful human beings who sounded amazing. Are y’all just sharing your characters?
I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child
February 9, 2023 at 11:41 am #132381@euodia-vision hi!! Ok so, because Iām lazy and donāt want to fully explain it, in essence this is a roleplay!
this is a Second Character Castle (thus the 2.0) made because we didnāt want timeline issues with the current one and wanted to add future characters from our works in progress (WIPs)
that being said youāre welcome to join this one or the original (just called Character Castle)
if u want to join, I suggest going to the very first page of the original Character Castle and reading the rules, since I donāt really feel like writing them all š
it should be easy to find since itās right on the recent topics page and itās just Character Castle. Itās the very first post on that forum, written by Denali Christianson.
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#ProtectSebFebruary 9, 2023 at 6:07 pm #132442Hey @freedomwriter76 u on?
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#ProtectSebFebruary 9, 2023 at 6:23 pm #132446Anonymous- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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I know I’m not freedomwriter76 but I’m on and since I have charries here feel free to have them meet up. I think I’ll keep mine together to make it less confusing for everyone involved. š
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