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    Anonymous
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      Okay…this is it for now!!! (until I find out what guy Naja is married to, lol! šŸ¤£)

      Name: Eli Henry Schind

      Age: 25

      Personality: Sweet, highly intelligent, brave, curious, hard-working, devoted, courageous, faithful, honest, kind, caring

      Looks: Bright blonde slightly messy hair (like the photo), bright green eyes, pale skin. Wears a long sleeve white button-up shirt, a red sweater-vest overtop, a black tie, black pants, and black dress shoes

      #132307
      GodlyFantasy12
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        @freedomwriter76 šŸ˜­ LILY!!!!!!

        AHHHH DR WOLFGANG?!?! AHHHHH!!! šŸ˜­

        ok ok, time to introduce my babies!!! (Or future babies šŸ˜‰)

         

        Also, if youā€™ve ever read the Wingfeather saga, o kinda think of Araā€™s children like the Igiby siblings šŸ„°

        First off-

         

        Aaron Mael Nadir

        Aaron is the eldest of November and Araā€™s children, making him the one who will one day take Araā€™s place as ruler of Aā€™Grend, a large destiny to live up to.

        Aaron tries his best to take this in stride. He is humble, brave and has a strong sense of moral justice. His family is most important, both the one living within the castle, and the ones heā€™s grown up with outside of the castle walls.

        With an array of people who love him and to come home to, Aaronā€™s life has never been one without Light.

        Heā€™s apt to make sure his parents are proud of the man heā€™ll one day become. The king heā€™ll one day be, and while he knows his father has nothing but love to give to him, heā€™ll still do anything in his power to keep pleasing him.

        Appearance: Brown hair like in the photo above, a few streaks of lightness in it, and in the sunlight can appear very dark red (from his fatherā€™s genes.) He has small curly spots around his ears.

        Deep Brown eyes like his mother and fair skin with just a few very light freckles dotting his face. Wears his motherā€™s green Destina crystal.

        (Iā€™m bad at clothes sooo yea XD)

        Age: Weā€™re gonna go with around 15

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        #132311
        GodlyFantasy12
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          @freedomwriter76 ELIIIII!!!!!!! AHHHH!!!! Also itā€™s so great how u write adults and I write teens XD XD

           

          Here’s ma girl!!!! Yā€™allā€¦the girls in the future are likeā€¦

          Ok I love my current girlsā€¦but their daughters? Their like hauntingā€¦in a good way. Like theyā€™re so pretty! And justā€¦their personalities and idk! Itā€™s just so cool.

           

           

          So here is:

          Aria-Lynn Fabel

          Being born only a year after her brother, Aria and Aaron are practically considered twins to all around them. Not that they mind.

          The two are extremely close, though a bit different in demeanor.

          Quiet, strong and resilient, Aria is loyal to her family, just like Aaron, but she is thankful she is not in his place to one day take over in her motherā€™s footsteps.

          Itā€™s enough having to deal with her shared gift of visionsā€¦

          But Aria doesnā€™t resent her mother in anyway for this giftā€¦no, she knows it has a purpose. Somehow.

          But Aria knows she is not fit for the throne, and that is fine with her. Sheā€™d much rather spend her time sparring with the triplets, or practicing her craft of creating new weapons and shield then reading books or learning to deal with people.

          But she does love her family. Her brother. Her people.

          And sheā€™ll do whatever she has to to protect them.

           

          Appearance: Brown wavy hair in soft curls, the color of her motherā€™s only a bit darker.

          Deep brown eyes and light fair skin.

           

          Age: around 14

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          #132314
          GodlyFantasy12
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            AHHH ITS TIME FOR ONE OF MY BABIES!!!!!!! EEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!! *jumps up and down excitedly*

            (of course itā€™s my baby, heā€™s likeā€¦a carbon copy of November except also not!)

             

            Bren Edan Nadir (I canā€™t pick one pic! Imma just post his board XD)

             

            Bren is the youngest of the Nadir family. Born with fiery red hair, he was the spitting image of his father as soon as he opened his eyes.

            Straying from the previous children, Ara insisted this oneĀ finallyĀ not be named after her, but instead, after his father.

            Thus, Bren came into existence.

            Bren is a fun, playful and silly boy. Heā€™s often found with one of his siblings, talking their ear off, or perhaps just to be near them. He canā€™t stand being alone, always wanting someoneā€™s constant company, though maybe not necessarily their attention.

            Heā€™s fairly carefree, as most little boys his age should be, although he can cause quite a bit of a stir sometimes, to no fault of his own.

            Andā€¦this makes him very sad sometimes.

            After allā€¦he didnā€™t mean to hurt anyone. Or their items. Or animals. Or homes.

            He justā€¦canā€™t control whatā€™s inside of him.

            And sometimes,Ā the fire likes the get out.

            Does that make him bad? Or evil? Or no good?

            His parents say it doesnā€™tā€¦

            And so do all his friendsā€¦

            His fatherā€™s learned to control his powersā€¦

            Butā€¦

            When all your power does is hurt people, does that mean your the one hurting people?

            Is if you? Or is it whatā€™s in you? And is there a difference?

            Ahā€¦but itā€™s okay.

            At least the dragons understand.

             

            Appearance: Curly ginger hair (I really like the hair of the boy in the top left pic lol, with the bird) and bright baby blue eyes just like his daddy. Fair skin with a few freckles, and a single dimple on his right cheek. Like November he is left handed.

            Age: Around 11

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            #132315
            GodlyFantasy12
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              I have others but I think Iā€™ll start with them for now.

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              #132317
              Anonymous
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                @godlyfantasy12. Yes, it is quite funny that I write adults and you write teens! šŸ¤£šŸ¤£šŸ¤£

                AHHHH, BREN!!!! I LOVE YOUUUUU!!!!! šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜

                Alrighty!!! I’m gonna start with Albert, Elias, and Lily, just bc I want the three of them together. šŸ˜‰

                Elias

                This wasn’t their house…or Riker’s…and it certainly wasn’t Vietnam.

                It wasn’t anywhere Elias knew.

                “This place looks interesting! It’s a beautiful castle…I feel like I’ve done this before…but oh, whatever!” Lily cried, looking around the grand hall with a big smile.

                She spun in a circle, her knee-length skirt fanning out around her. “It’s a VERY beautiful castle! Albert, Elias, don’t you think we should go exploring?”

                Elias grinned. If they had this opportunity…why not make the most of it!? “Yeah, let’s go exploring!”

                Albert smiled and nodded. “Sure! I’m getting tired of just standing here.”

                Lily laughed and nodded. “Let’s go then…woah, that made me dizzy!” She rubbed her head and laughed again before grabbing Elias’ hand. “Come on, let’s go!”

                Elias smiled. She had even remembered to not touch Albert, who didn’t let many people touch him.

                Elias laughed and squeezed her hand. “Come on, let’s go, Lily! Albert, see if you can catch up!”

                “You think I can’t catch you!? Just you wait!” Albert called back.

                And they went racing down the hall.

                #132328
                GodlyFantasy12
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                  @freedomwriter76 I love that mention of Lily sorts remembering it but not really, maybe she finally remembers later when she meets one mine, maybe they remind her of when she met one of my charries or something (specifically Bren sinceā€¦he is the spitting image of Novemberā€¦)

                   

                  Also Iā€™m thinking Iā€™ll have Bren and Aaron be together, and Aria will be alone for now.

                  Aaron and Bren can meet the current group if u donā€™t mind!

                   

                  Aaron

                  Aaronā€™s eyes blurred as he blinked them open, light burning into his mind. He winced, rolling to his side and rubbing his face.

                  Was it morning already?

                  It felt as though heā€™d just gotten to sleepā€¦

                  Then againā€¦he had tossed and turned for a long while the night before.

                  Sleeping in the woods was nowhere near as comfortable as sleeping in your own bed.

                  He sat up with a small sigh, resting an arm on one knee as he surveyed his surroundings and-

                  Waitā€¦

                  Aaronā€™s heart sped as the tired fog cleared, revealing the cold yet pristine marble work of the floor he now lay on. His mind reeled, breath quickening.

                  Had it all been a dream? Everything that had happened recently?

                  Some sort ofā€¦drawn out nightmare?

                  Had he fallen and hit his head? Concussed himself?

                  He stared at the marble around him, and then looked up at the chandelier hanging above. Bright gold, shining into the beautiful curtains and wallpaper that decorated the room.

                  It was beautifulā€¦butā€¦

                  The colors were way off.

                  Reds and purples and goldsā€¦not enough creamsā€¦

                  This was not home.

                  He squeezed his eyes shut as the hope that sprung suddenly vanished.

                  Abba was still goneā€¦

                  He sucked in a breath, fingers clenching into a fist as his other hand clutched his heart.

                  His head jerked up.

                  His siblings. His friends. Where were they?

                  He peered once again around the room.

                  Andā€¦where was he?

                  And they been captured during the night?

                  But why was he not bound if so?

                  He slowly stood, searching the room for any sign of familiarity. Any sign of those he knew.

                  Why hadnā€™t he been wakened from his sleep? Heā€¦shouldā€™ve heard somethingā€¦

                  Sucking in a breath, Aaron walked to the first door, taking hold of its golden handle.

                  He had to find his siblings, and his friends. He couldnā€™t let them down.

                   

                  Bren

                  This placeā€¦wherever it was, was big. Bren had found that out when heā€™d tried running down a variety of different hallways and doors, calling out the names of his siblings and various people he knew-to no avail.

                  He seemed to be in a castle, as it looked a lot similar to home, but it was definitely not his homeā€¦

                  His home was aĀ lotĀ nice. And cleaner.

                  Ima made sure of that.

                  He threw open yet another door. ā€œAaron! Aria!ā€

                  Nothing. He let out a huff, cheeks puffing out like a chipmunk as he ran to try another door

                  (as for his outfit I imagine him wearing what the boy in the one photo with the bird is wearing, in his collage with a bright blue belt that kinda waves behind him when he runs lol I thought this was cute while heā€™s running and opening doors XD)

                  His first thought when waking up in this castle was that Aaron and Aria had brought him homeā€¦

                  A thought that had both excited him and made him upset.

                  For oneā€¦he wouldā€™ve liked to Imaā€¦

                  He did miss her soā€¦

                  Her beautiful voice. Her hair. Her eyes. The hugs sheā€™d give, and the way sheā€™d hold him whenever he was scaredā€¦.

                  Butā€¦the thought of his siblings and his friends going on an adventure without him? Leaving him all alone?

                  He peeked into another room.

                  Nothing.

                  He ran down another hall.

                  He knew he shouldnā€™t have done itā€¦.knew it was wrong to sneak awayā€¦to hide himself and not let his Ima or siblings know he was following until later.

                  Like Aaron had saidā€¦whatĀ wasĀ Ima thinking now?

                  Was she sad? Angry?

                  Bren frowned, coming to stop. He pinched the ends of his tunic, biting his lip.

                  Heā€™d never want to make her any of those thingsā€¦

                  Butā€¦

                  It had been Puckā€™s idea first!

                  Soā€¦it was Puckā€™s fault! Not his!

                  His small heart gave a quiver.

                  Noā€¦you chose to listenā€¦

                  He let out a small sigh, nodding.

                  (I think Iā€™m gonna make him 10 instead of 11, I just think heā€™s a bit younger lol)

                  It was then that the door in front of him, the one heā€™d been about to open, opened.

                  ā€œBren?ā€ Aaronā€™s voice was full of relief. Bren grinned from ear to ear, all previous worries gone.

                  ā€œAaron! Iā€™ve been looking everywhere for you! Do you know where we are? Whereā€™s Aria? And everyone else? This place kinda looks like our home doesnā€™t it? How did we get here? Ooh this roomā€™s pretty!ā€

                  Aaron gave a small smile, running a hand through Brenā€™s hair.

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                  #132330
                  GodlyFantasy12
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                    I really loved writing Brenā€™s POV! His little personality and outlook is so cute!! I love it!

                    and you can definitely see the resemblance to November in him but also heā€™s his own self, and the changes in raising and having siblings has definitely molded some of that (Novemberā€™s abused childhood and Ara was an only child)

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                    #132335
                    MineralizedWritings
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                      @godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76

                      Oh, this is interesting. I usually don’t stretch the timeline that much, I know that Layson and Everly have one or two other kids besides Maylee. Is this like a no parents zone šŸ¤£ or could I have the whole fam here? Or maybe just Everly and Maylee and one of the other kids… XD I dunno.

                      Oh and I don’t think Tauren and Lesli have kids after they get married, just a very beloved border collie they treat like a kid šŸ˜‚šŸ¤£

                      "And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."

                      #132342
                      GodlyFantasy12
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                        @mineralizedwritings lol! Thatā€™s cute!

                        Hm I donā€™t think parents are off limits. Honestly if Freedom ever wanted to bring like Riker in (if heā€™s still alive šŸ˜­ plz say he isā€¦) or one of the boys as a parent Iā€™d be fine with it šŸ˜Š

                        But we probably wonā€™t make groups tooo huge right off the bat keep the more split? But who knowsā€¦.

                         

                        cuz I have a lot more to introduce laterā€¦.

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                        #132356
                        GodlyFantasy12
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                          @freedomwriter76 u on?

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                          #132373
                          Euodia
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                            *appears*

                            Hellooooo! Just wondering what ‘Character Castle’ is. XD I just scrolled through and saw beautiful human beings who sounded amazing. Are y’all just sharing your characters?

                            I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child

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                            GodlyFantasy12
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                              @euodia-vision hi!! Ok so, because Iā€™m lazy and donā€™t want to fully explain it, in essence this is a roleplay!

                               

                              this is a Second Character Castle (thus the 2.0) made because we didnā€™t want timeline issues with the current one and wanted to add future characters from our works in progress (WIPs)

                              that being said youā€™re welcome to join this one or the original (just called Character Castle)

                               

                              if u want to join, I suggest going to the very first page of the original Character Castle and reading the rules, since I donā€™t really feel like writing them all šŸ˜…

                               

                              it should be easy to find since itā€™s right on the recent topics page and itā€™s just Character Castle. Itā€™s the very first post on that forum, written by Denali Christianson.

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                              #132442
                              GodlyFantasy12
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                                Hey @freedomwriter76 u on?

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                                Anonymous
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                                  @godlyfantasy12

                                  I know I’m not freedomwriter76 but I’m on and since I have charries here feel free to have them meet up. I think I’ll keep mine together to make it less confusing for everyone involved. šŸ˜œ

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