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February 18, 2023 at 3:46 pm #133616
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@lightoverdarkness6. I don’t like the sound of this guy…😬😬😬 @godlyfantasy12. I am SOOO sorry!!! I meant to RP before now!!! 😭
Albert
Elias smiled softly at Aaron and Bren.
Albert glanced between all of them, still continuing to walk down the hall, quietly clicking his tongue inside of his mouth.
Lily smiled at Aaron and Bren. “So, what do you two like to do for fun where you-”
Footsteps sounded, and Aaron turned, just as someone came around the corner. “Good afternoon. I am looking for two young boys, fourteen years of age. Have you seen them?”
Everyone turned, and both Albert and Elias drew their M16’s.
Albert’s body sweat and tensed at the same time, his eyes roving over the man. He wore all black except for his shirt and gloves, which were white.
Something about him was off.
Lily’s eyes narrowed, she put her hands on her hips, and she raised an eyebrow, standing in front of Bren. “Who are you, and what are you doing here, I ask!?”
Isabel
Aria smiled.
Isabel continued to beam at her, one hand still holding Jonathan’s, and she ran her hand along her stomach. “It will be soon…only two months or so…”
“You can’t wait…can you?”
Isabel laughed and shook her head at Aria. “No…I cannot.”
Bucky
Bucky glanced in between Caden, Lucien, and Puck.
He didn’t trust them…not one bit…but Caden seemed to be…good with Ryo.
Ryo giggled and reached for Caden. “Again, again!”
Caden smiled and nodded. “Let’s play again.”
And he began playing again.
Steve stepped over, now instead standing beside Puck, and nodded at them. “We should probably get moving, then, huh?”
(what kind of conflict can we cause for this group, Godly…? Any ideas? 🤔)
Viola
“Name’s Ebony Rae, but everyone just calls me Rae. This is my sister Hadassah. She doesn’t talk.”
“Nice to meet you, Ebony, Hadassah. I will help you find whoever it is you are looking for, and you can help me find my friend, sound like a plan?” She smiled.
February 18, 2023 at 10:11 pm #133667@freedomwriter76 ok sorry bout that y’all! Was in a meeting all day then had to clean lol. Idk if y’all are still on but I kinda hope u are for a bit but it is nighttime so…sigh
Aaron
Aaron stared at the newcomer, wrapping a hand around his cloak. Something didn’t feel right about this man…
But…Aaron had never ventured outside of his home before…
Perhaps…perhaps he was wrong. Just…misjudging this man.
Though Lily and the others seemed a bit off put by his presence as well…which didn’t make him feel any better.
Of course Bren, in all his innocent curiosity, was fascinated by the prospect of meeting absolutely anyone.
The man raised a brow at Lily’s sudden outburst.
“Lily…easy…I’m sure he’ll explain.” Elias said calmly, though he kept a wary eye on the newcomer as well.
The man smiled. “Ah, I’m sorry, I didn’t meant to frightened you young people. I’m merely looking for…my sons…”
Bren peeked around Lily, eyes wide. “Your sons? We haven’t seen them, but maybe we can help you look! We’re trying to find our-”
“Bren.” Aaron stopped him with a stern look. Bren frowned, tilting his head.
The man quirked his lips. “Oh? Well, perhaps we could help each other then!”
Elias furrowed his brows. “Ah…actually…I think we’ll be going. But thank you for the offer.” He nodded politely, placing his hand on Aaron’s shoulder.
Bren looked back, confused. “But why-?”
“Bren, come on.” Aaron said, reaching for his brother.
“But-!”
“Now!” Aaron said.
Bren pouted, shaking his head. “I don’t understand!” Aaron let out an annoyed sigh, gripping his brother’s arm, but before he could pull him away, the stranger grabbed his baby brother by the collar, pulling him into his arms.
(btw if your not ready or your villain wouldn’t do this then just ignore this part of the RP)
“BREN!” Aaron cried, gripping his brother’s sleeve so tight a piece of fabric tore, remaining in his hand.
Bren’s eyes were wide as saucers, face pale as the moon. He gripped the stranger’s arms, as if holding on for dear life.
Lily gasped as Albert and Elias reached for what must have been weapons, though they looked foreign to Aaron.
Not that he was paying much attention…his eyes were too focused on his brother…held tightly in the grips of this stranger.
“Let him go!” He yelled, reaching to his belt for his own weapon, a dagger he’d grabbed from the armory before leaving home.
Though…he’d hoped to never use it.
He’d only just started training with it, and…didn’t even know if he could use it…should the need ever arise.
Though…seeing his baby brother’s glassy blue eyes…
Aaron wondered if it would be as hard as he’d previously thought.
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#ProtectSebFebruary 18, 2023 at 10:30 pm #133668@freedomwriter76 also! For the group with Puck and them, I’m thinking maybe Bucky misunderstands the twins a bit on his metal arm (not sure what exactly could be said…any ideas?) and there is a bit of conflict, only for it to be revealed their brother is “handicap” and he and Steve are like oh… 🤦🏻♀️ XD XD XD
Ebony
Ebony raised a brow at the woman.
She didn’t trust her a bit. Not that she really needed to.
To be honest, she didn’t trust most adults.
And adults tended not to take her seriously.
Which was perfectly fine.
In fact…that was often the perfect way to get things done…
Ebony gave her best smile. “Alright! Sounds like a deal! Dassie?”
Hadassah’s brows furrowed. She bit her lip, putting her finger on her chin.
Also so worried…like a scared kitten….A trapped songbird….
Sad really…
Rae poked her tongue into her cheek, biting back an eye roll.
If I had the powers she had, I wouldn’t be near as skittish or fearful to use them. I honestly don’t get it. So she had an accident. Whatever.
Rae forced a smile, taking her oldest sister by the arm. “C’mon Dassie, it’ll be fun.”
Hadassah frowned, making a small “Hm” noise. She let out a small sigh before nodding, lowering her head as if in defeat.
Rae smirked.
I always win. Pushover.
Fenrys
(I’m gonna say Fen asked that last question XD)
Aria raised a brow as the conversation drifted away from them.
“Can she wait? Really?” She couldn’t hide her mirthful smirk. Fenrys blushed, scowling.
“I just..! I didn’t mean…! Agh…” He put his head in his hands, though his ears were still red.
Aria laughed slightly, covering her mouth with her wrist. “Don’t worry about it. I’m sure she didn’t think anything about it. Although…don’t you remember Benji’s birth?”
Fenrys lifted his head, running a hand through his black hair. He shrugged. “Yea. I mean, a bit. It was a couple years back.”
“Your memory that bad?”
Fenrys glared at her playfully. “Do you remember Bren’s?”
Aria smirked. “Like it was yesterday.”
He sighed. “Of course you do…”
She chuckled. “Well…I’ll let you slide. After all, you and your brothers aren’t exactly known for your…ah…attention spans.”
Fenrys raised a brow. “What’s that supposed to mean?!”
She shrugged. “Well…the rumor is, you three got only a third part of your brain,” She winked playfully, then laughed.
Fenrys blinked. His nose scrunched up, eyes glaring and cheeks turning red.
“That is not true.”
Aria stared at him for a moment, smiling. He cocked a brow.
“What?” He asked.
She shook her head. “Nothing. Just. You look cute when you do that.”
Fenrys blushed, heat rising to his face. He looked ahead.
Aria said nothing, face never changing from its calm expression.
Cute?! What did she mean by that?!
“Ah besides,” She started. Fenrys glanced at her. “We all know if anyone got the brains out of the three of you….it’s you.”
He smiled, heart beating in his ears at the compliment.
“Cause your brothers are idiots sometimes.”
And with that, he let out a laugh.
AHHHHHH OK I TOTALLY SHIP ARIA AND FEEEEN
AHHHHHH
GASP…
ARIENNNNNNNNN 😍😍😍😍😍😍
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#ProtectSebFebruary 19, 2023 at 8:47 am #133679@freedomwriter76 😬😬😬 @godlyfantasy12
Vance
The girl’s eyes narrowed, she put her hands on her hips, and she raised an eyebrow, standing in front of…the youngest member of the group. He looked about ten years old.
Perfect…
I smirked. This would be fun.
“Who are you, and what are you doing here, I ask!?” The girl exclaimed.
I raised a brow at her sudden outburst.
“Lily…easy…I’m sure he’ll explain.” A boy said calmly, though he kept a wary eye on me as well.
Ah…no matter. When have I ever made good first impressions?
I smiled. “Ah, I’m sorry, I didn’t meant to frightened you young people. I’m merely looking for…my sons…”
The little boy peeked around Lily, eyes wide. “Your sons? We haven’t seen them, but maybe we can help you look! We’re trying to find our-”
“Bren.” An older boy, maybe Bren’s brother stopped him with a stern look. Bren frowned, tilting his head.
I quirked my lips. “Oh? Well, perhaps we could help each other then!”
The older boy who had spoken earlier furrowed his brows. “Ah…actually…I think we’ll be going. But thank you for the offer.” He nodded politely, placing his hand on Bren’s brother’s shoulder.
The two brothers began to have a small argument, Bren wanting to help me find…my sons…
But the other…he was a smart kid. They all were. Even though they didn’t know who I was…they could feel the darkness that followed me. The change of the room when I entered. And they were wary. As they should be.
I smirked.
But not nearly smart or wary enough…
Suddenly, after watching the boy’s argument go on for a few moments, I took a small step closer…and another.
Then, I my arm shot out, snatched the little boy’s arm, and pulled him to me in the blink of an eye.
“BREN!” His brother cried, gripping his Bren’s sleeve so tight a piece of fabric tore, remaining in his hand.
Bren’s eyes were wide as saucers, face pale as the moon. He gripped my arms, as if holding on for dear life.
The whole company gasped, each reaching for their weapons.
“Let him go!” Bren’s brother yelled, reaching to his belt for his own weapon.
Suddenly, they all froze, eyes wide in horror. I gripped Bren with one hand, and with the other, I held a small but deadly blade against his throat.
“I wouldn’t do that if I were you…” I murmured, staring at each of them, my eyes dark and menacing.
“Sheath your weapons…or I may be forced to do something…that, frankly, I don’t much care for.”
(Ahhh I HATE Vance already, and I just created him. AHHH Precious Bren!!! And Aaron!! 😭😭😭 And I felt so awful and sad writing that, because I have a 10 year old brother, and I would be so terrified and furious if anything ever happened to him. Or any of my siblings, for that matter.)
(Also, I don’t think he would do anything to hurt Bren, because he did raise Dylan, and he loves Dylan, and Bren is kinda going to remind him of Dylan…so yeah. But he will threaten.)
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February 19, 2023 at 9:50 am #133680@lightoverdarkness6 aww it’s alright though Aaron is not going to be happy (or know what to do…)
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Aaron
Aaron’s heart dropped into his stomach as the man pulled a small, glittering knife from his side, holding it against Bren’s skin.
Bren stopped struggling, going completely still, which was, in itself a scary sight to behold from the rambunctious little lad.
Aaron’s hand shook around the hilt of his still hooked dagger, his stomach squeezing with nausea.
He knew their adventure would be fraught with danger…
He’d prepared himself for that…
But this?
Bile rose to his throat, making him sick.
Bren wasn’t even supposed to be with him…
What would his mother think if she saw them now?
His father….
He shook his head.
No…they weren’t here right now. He had to focus. He had to get Bren. Had to…had to keep him safe! Somehow…
“R-Ronnie…?” Bren’s lip quivered, hands shaking as they held the arm that held him.
“It’s alright Bren,” Aaron said, though he was sure his face said otherwise. “It’s…it’s gonna be alright.”
He turned his attention to the stranger, glaring. “Let. My. Brother. Go!”
“Not until you tell me where those two boys are.”
“We don’t know! We haven’t seen them!” Lily said.
The man glared, the knife inching closer, though not close enough to quite hurt Bren. But it did make him whimper a bit.
Aaron let out a cry. “No! We’re telling the truth! I promise!”
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#ProtectSebFebruary 19, 2023 at 9:57 am #133681aww it’s alright though Aaron is not going to be happy (or know what to do…)
Thanks…yeah, I’m not sure what Vance really wants…he might want them to help him find Asher and Matt, but they would never agree to that…Idk, we’ll have to figure it out 😅
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February 19, 2023 at 10:43 am #133683hmm…well, what is motivating him to be a villain.
besides maybe revenge.
Before he ever wanted to kidnap Asher, maybe because of revenge or bad feelings, what motivated him to be whoever he is? Ruthless and cold.
Did he want power? That will kinda help decide what motivates him rn, because that motivation is what shows through despite his goal for Asher because he also is still that person.
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#ProtectSebFebruary 19, 2023 at 2:30 pm #133697Kiri
Kiri smiled as Asher blushed furiously, stuttering out his words. She batted her eyes, gripping his arm.
“Great! Off we go then! Lila?”
Lila raised a brow at her, pursing her lips. Kiri shrugged slightly, exchanging a look with her cousin.
So maybe she could ease off on the teasing a bit…
But where was the fun in that?
Lila sighed. Smiled. “Alright. Perhaps one of these doors will lead us to our friends. Shall we try this one?” She pointed to her left.
“S-Sure,” Said the other boy, Matthew, looking a bit shy. He seemed sweet too…perhaps a bit less confident then Asher.
And while Kiri did enjoy toying with those kinds too…she had to admit the more confident ones were always more fun.
“Good then!” Lila said, moving a strand of her white hair behind her ear. She headed for the door, opening it and then glancing behind with a smile.
Kiri grinned, tugging Asher along. He let out a small yelp, nearly tripping over his feet.
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#ProtectSebFebruary 20, 2023 at 8:53 am #133796Ooh okay! So my villain…*spoiler* Vance kidnapped Dylan at a young age, intending to raise him as his own. He and his wife had a son, but unfortunately his son was stillborn, and he needed an heir to the organization that he had created. So Dylan grows up believing that he is Vance’s son. Vance had some animosity towards Dylan’s true parents, (Still figuring out what exactly happened), so that’s why he chose Dylan. Vance is cruel, coldhearted, hardworking, devoted to his work, but he grows to love Dylan as his own, and actually is a pretty good father to him. *Spoiler over*
I think something happened to his parents so he was exposed to violence and poverty at a young age, and now he’s not a good person at all.
Also, he’s pretty close to Dylan, and so when Dylan realizes that he doesn’t want to become like his father, and chooses another path, Vance is hurt and angry. So he’s probably trying to find Asher and Matthew, Dylan, and then…maybe just be as much of a bad person as he can.
I’ve heard that people who are miserable inside often treat others the same way, so he probably won’t be nice to anyone.
And, yeah, he wants to be a powerful ruler and everyone respect him, bc when he was young he was so poor and treated like dirt.
So….he’s got a lot of motivation 😅.
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February 20, 2023 at 9:08 am #133797Matthew
Kiri smiled as Asher blushed furiously, stuttering out his words. She batted her eyes, gripping his arm.
He blushed even more, then glanced at me. I smiled at him. “Having fun?” I mouthed.
I was just glad that Kiri wasn’t hanging onto me like that.
Just then, Kiri said, “Great! Off we go then! Lila?”
Lila raised a brow at her, pursing her lips. Kiri shrugged slightly.
Lila sighed and smiled. “Alright. Perhaps one of these doors will lead us to our friends. Shall we try this one?” She pointed to her left.
“S-Sure,” I said softly, smiling a little at Lila. Then I blushed.
If Asher looked like…that…
I glanced at him. His cheeks seemed like they would never fade back to their regular color.
Then I wonder how I look…
“Good then!” Lila said, moving a strand of her white hair behind her ear. She headed for the door.
My eyes widened, I leapt in front of her and opened it for her.
She seemed shocked, and I was afraid that I shouldn’t have done that.
Then she smiled sweetly. “Thank you Matthew,” She said.
I smiled back. “Y-you’re welcome…”
We glanced back in time to see Kiri grinning and tugging Asher along. He let out a small yelp, nearly tripping over his feet.
Oh boy, I thought.
Asher smiled weakly at me. Then he looked at Kiri. I could barely hear him say, “So…what’s your favorite animal?”
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February 20, 2023 at 2:29 pm #133824@freedomwriter76 hey u wanna RP??
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#ProtectSebFebruary 20, 2023 at 2:31 pm #133826Anonymous
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@godlyfantasy12. Yeah, one sec!!! 😉 I totally forgot and got sidetracked, lol! 😅😆
February 20, 2023 at 2:33 pm #133828Lol!
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#ProtectSebFebruary 20, 2023 at 2:44 pm #133835Anonymous
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@godlyfantasy12. Not really sure what the twins could say, tbh, to start conflict over Bucky’s arm…😅
But I’ll do the other groups. 😉
Viola
Viola smiled at the girls.
The younger one had…spunk.
And she liked that. The older one, however? She seemed like quite the pushover.
“Shall we go on, then? We’ll never find our friends if we don’t get moving.” Viola said with a smile, closing her satchel, now knowing that she didn’t need the pistol inside.
Yet.
Isabel
Isabel smiled at the friendly banter between Aria and Fenrys.
Jonathan nodded towards the end of the hall. “Everyone, we’re getting to the end of the hall. Do either of you have any idea which direction we should go?”
Elias
The man brought the knife closer to Bren’s neck.
“No! We’re telling the truth! I promise!” Aaron screeched.
Elias glanced from the man to Bren, to Aaron, to Lily, to Albert, and back to the man again. His palms sweated. “Listen…if we put up our weapons…will you let go of Bren? Whoever it is you’re looking for…we haven’t seen them. We’re only looking for our friends…we haven’t seen anyone else in this place. But let Bren go…and we’ll put up our weapons. I promise.”
February 20, 2023 at 3:18 pm #133843@freedomwriter76 hm yea I’m not really sure either, I’m thinking Caden asks maybe what happened?
Also not sure what to do for the other groups (beside Bren and Aaron’s cuz there group is pretty knee deep in stuff rn lol)
Doesn’t have to be conflict just…not sure what to do.
Hmm.
If I had more lined out I’d throw in a villain but I don’t really know.
I do have a character figured out but timeline wise it doesn’t quite fit because I had it where they’re just starting their journey…
OH I do know something we could have for the group with the twins and puck, if you’re good with it.
Puck often has back spasms/pains sometimes that happen at random. They can last for just moments to hours (it’s due to the fact that eventually, he’s going to grow wings)
Later that could happen, if you’d like.
As for the others, Hadassah is very skeptical of Viola. Rae doesn’t trust her either but is conniving and willing to use her (a clash of two wills if you please)
If Viola finds out about Hadassah’s shadow abilities that could lead to trouble as she and Hydra are already driven by power (hence their search for Bucky, their “weapon”)
But Rae isn’t quite like Aaron. If Hadassah is threatened, yes Rae won’t just stand by, but her motives are purely self centered. She’ll rescue her sister, because in the end it’ll help gain her sisters trust even more.
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