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February 18, 2023 at 12:27 pm #133580
XDXD Oh good. It’s supposed to, lol. I’ll start on his description post.
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February 18, 2023 at 12:29 pm #133582Cool!
also, do u want him to be watching Aaron and Bren’s group? Up to you. I’m just thinking Bren would make a good hostage but it’s up to you really 😊
He’s a sweetie. And Aaron would not be happy.
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#ProtectSebFebruary 18, 2023 at 12:44 pm #133585Hmm. Sure! So he’s going to be after Asher and Matthew, and Bren would probably interest him very much, due to his fire powers. He would probably use him a leverage for Aaron and those in his group to help him find Asher and Matt.
So sure! I’m almost done with the description. 🙂
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February 18, 2023 at 12:46 pm #133586@lightoverdarkness6 sounds good!
yea…he’d probably think one of this group helped the boys escape since they’re all just kinda in this random castle lol
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#ProtectSebFebruary 18, 2023 at 12:52 pm #133587February 18, 2023 at 12:59 pm #133590@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @idk-who-else-is-on-here-XD
So…here is my villain!
Name: Vance Bone
Personality: Coldhearted, cruel, hard working, devoted to his work, is humorous (dark humor 😬), and can be snarky.
Appearance: Black hair and blue eyes. Pale skin.
Wears: Black pants and cotton shirt. Wears a light leather jacket over it, with the collar turned up. Wears white gloves with the finger tips cut off.
Don’t have a picture yet for him. I’ll post one if I find one.
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February 18, 2023 at 1:10 pm #133591@lightoverdarkness6 OOH I can imagine him!!! I like him!!!
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#ProtectSebFebruary 18, 2023 at 1:12 pm #133592Aww thanks!! Oh yay!! I’m glad you do! (You probably shouldn’t tho…😬🤐)
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February 18, 2023 at 1:13 pm #133594If he finds out Aaron and them are telling the truth also…about not knowing where Asher is…
He might decide to keep Bren and just take him with him to find Asher himself, idk how ur villain works.
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#ProtectSebFebruary 18, 2023 at 1:14 pm #133595@lightoverdarkness6 weeeelll I like him as a villain XD!!
u wanna RP as him? Ik freedom isn’t on rn but u can still RP and I can maybe make a reaction depending on what it is? Idk 😂
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#ProtectSebFebruary 18, 2023 at 1:14 pm #133596My fav part is probably the white gloves, really makes him real for me.
that coupled with the jacket and hair of course like he just looks so cool in ma head (and dark and snarky)
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#ProtectSebFebruary 18, 2023 at 1:23 pm #133599weeeelll I like him as a villain XD!!
Oh yeah, I know :). I just meant he can be…rough 😂😬
u wanna RP as him? Ik freedom isn’t on rn but u can still RP and I can maybe make a reaction depending on what it is? Idk 😂
Sure! Yeah, I can. Who all is in Aaron and Bren’s group again??
My fav part is probably the white gloves, really makes him real for me.
that coupled with the jacket and hair of course like he just looks so cool in ma head (and dark and snarky)
XDXD Yess that’s how I imagine him too! He’s very dark and snarky Lol
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February 18, 2023 at 1:31 pm #133601@lightoverdarkness6 Aaron, Bren, and Freedom’s characters Lily (Riker’s daughter) Albert and Elias (Leon’s Sons)
Freedoms are in their mid 20s
Aaron is 15
Bren is 10
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#ProtectSebFebruary 18, 2023 at 2:06 pm #133605February 18, 2023 at 3:29 pm #133612@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76
Vance
I strode down the hall of this…place. It wasn’t my headquarters. The old, abandoned store house didn’t have this nice of a floor…this was oak. Not pine.
I sighed with aggravation.
Well…if I’m here, then Dylan could be as well…and even if Dylan isn’t here…then my young captives might be.
I smirked, my mind flying from one thought to the next.
But…
My smirk faded.
They might be…free. This certainly wasn’t my house, or the old building that served as our base…and they could be free…roaming this place.
I ground my teeth together.
I wouldn’t let them escape. Not again. I had gone through to much to let them go free.
I would find them…and they’d regret escaping.
I’ll need to locate a dungeon or other room…
But…I’ll need to find them first.
I grinned, and continued walking swiftly through the long corridors.
* * * * *
Suddenly, I heard voices.
My head jerked up from where I had been examining a small patch of dirt, searching for footprints.
I didn’t recognize any of the voices, to my disappointment.
But maybe they’ve seen them.
I turned the corner and stopped.
There was several younger teenagers, and a few young adults. I scanned them for Asher or Matthew, but neither were in the group.
One of the kids turned.
I nodded to him.”Good afternoon. I am looking for two young boys, fourteen years of age. Asher Brooks and Matthew Young. Have you seen them?”
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