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  • September 1, 2017 at 10:34 pm #42568
    Anonymous
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      @epicaddie2 – this is really cool. I felt like the ending was a touch abrupt. I would have loved a bit of internal conflict at the end. But other than that, 10/10

      September 1, 2017 at 11:09 pm #42569
      EpicAddie2
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        @josiahdeboer Thanks! The ending was a bit abrupt, I guess. I might continue it, but I really need to start working on my 2nd draft again. I haven’t worked on it in a couple months.

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