Breathing hope… the puns are going to be too much fun

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  • August 11, 2017 at 2:18 pm #39908
    Anonymous
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      @hope…I think @dragon-snapper’s right. The first sounds best. A little less dramatic.

      August 14, 2017 at 12:42 pm #40423
      Emma Flournoy
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        @Hope Of those I like the first best. I think any version does sound sort of over-dramatic/slightly cheesy, since you asked. *brutally honest grimace* But of those three choices I think the first is best.

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