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    valtmy
    @valtmy
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      Hey!

      So I have finally completed the first three chapters of my WIP, Queen of Drama, which has turned into this strange political satire/romance novel parody thing, and I’m looking for beta readers.

      Apart from suggestions to improve my writing, since this is a comedy, I will need my betas to let me know what specific lines and things they found amusing. This is to make sure what is supposed to be funny is, well, funny. ๐Ÿ˜€

      If any of you are interested to help, you can request for access hereย after signing in with Google. The document is blank for now because I’m still tidying things up but I’ll upload the chapters ASAP and let you guys know when it is ready.

      Just tagging a few of those whom I know are still roaming the ruins of KP:


      @seekjustice
      @rochellaine @alia @ariel-ashira @jenwriter17 @anyone-else

      #73702
      SeekJustice
      @seekjustice
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        @valtmy

        I’d be happy to take a look. I’m not sure if I can commit to reading the whole thing though. I’d be more than happy to have a look over the first few chapters though.

        INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.

        #73707
        Ariel Ashira
        @ariel-ashira
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          @valtmy I would love to read it!ย  Not sure if I will be much help, but I can tell you what I think anyway. ๐Ÿ™‚

          "In a mask, was he?"

          #73709
          valtmy
          @valtmy
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            @seekjusticeย @ariel-ashira

            OK thanks for agreeing to help!

            My first three chapters are now ready for your examination and dissection. You can send a request through the link I placed in my first post (Google sign-in is required) and I’ll grant you guys the access.

            #73724
            Jenna Terese
            @jenwriter17
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              @valtmy Oh my goodness I would LOVE to read this! It sounds really interesting. but I don’t think I’ll be able to read the whole thing, since I’m finishing a alpha reading job and I’m pretty busy too. But, if you want, I can read the first one or two chapters maybe. ๐Ÿ™‚

              I'm a Kapeefer 'TIL WE'RE OLD AND GREY!
              www.jennaterese.com

              #73727
              valtmy
              @valtmy
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                @jenwriter17

                Sure no problem. Just request for access ๐Ÿ™‚


                @seekjustice
                ย @ariel-ashira @anyone-who-is-lurking

                Would you mind letting me know what is the name you use for your Google accounts? Because I have granted one of you access but I can’t tell who.

                 

                #73728
                SeekJustice
                @seekjustice
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                  @valtmy

                  I haven’t requested access but by email is anordinarypen and my username is Chelsea R.H.

                  INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.

                  #73730
                  Ariel Ashira
                  @ariel-ashira
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                    @valtmy I will be under the name Esther W or imexinart.

                    "In a mask, was he?"

                    #73739
                    Rochellaine
                    @rochellaine
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                      @valtmy I’ve been waiting for this! ๐Ÿ˜€ย  I requested access.ย  I might be slow in getting back to you if you post any more chapters, because I think I’m going to be taking a hiatus soon, but I hope I get a chance to at least read these chapters before that happens. ๐Ÿ˜‰

                      "Sylvester - Sylvester!"

                      #73805
                      valtmy
                      @valtmy
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                        @rochellaine

                        It’ll be a while before I can post any more chapters because they are still not quite there yet. ๐Ÿ˜‚. How long is your hiatus going to be?

                        By the way, do feel free to leave your comments in the doc. Same goes forย @seekjustice and @ariel-ashira since I’ve given you all access ๐Ÿ™‚

                         

                        #73874
                        Rochellaine
                        @rochellaine
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                          @valtmy Well, I have finals in about three weeks, so I’m going to do some intense studying preparing for that.ย  I’ll try to be on here once in a while but I’m not sure.

                          I started reading your chapters but haven’t had a chance to finish them or comment yet.ย  I guess you’ll see when I do, anyway. ๐Ÿ™‚ย  I am liking it so far.

                          "Sylvester - Sylvester!"

                          #73984
                          Sink
                          @sarah-anson
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                            @valtmy

                            Hello, dear old KP friends! I’ve missed you. Even though most of you are probably over at ST as well. Still. All our writing jokes and our beautiful anthem….

                            Anyhow, I’d love to read some. My Google account is under Sarah Irene, btw. Just so you don’t see some random person requesting access and have no idea who said random person is. XD

                            *vader vibes*

                            #74707
                            valtmy
                            @valtmy
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                              @seekjusticeย @ariel-ashiraย @jenwriter17 @rochellaineย @sarah-anson

                              Hey guys. Thanks for the comments so far. ๐Ÿ˜› I have finished chapters 4 to 6 so I’m putting them up for review. Access can be requested for here. I know some of you won’t be able to commit to reading everything. That’s perfectly fine (no stress here). I’ll be happy if you just shared with me your thoughts on what you have managed to read. ๐Ÿ˜€

                              @anyone-else

                              I am on the lookout for more betas so if any of you are interested to help, feel free to request for access through the links. But do tell me in this thread so that I know who you are ๐Ÿ™‚

                              #74708
                              Jenna Terese
                              @jenwriter17
                                • Rank: Chosen One
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                                @valtmy ah I REALLY wish I could read your book, but sadly I’m super-duper busy right now with multiple things + beta reading for someone else as well. So sorry ๐Ÿ™ Keep up the good work though!

                                Tagging some more people for you just in case they didn’t see this @alia @kaya-young @skredder @dekreel @dragon-snapper

                                I'm a Kapeefer 'TIL WE'RE OLD AND GREY!
                                www.jennaterese.com

                                #74726
                                Kaya Young
                                @kaya-young
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                                  @valtmyย  I’d love to read it!


                                  @jenwriter17
                                  ย  Thanks for tagging me. ๐Ÿ™‚

                                  The Kingdom has been torn asunder...
                                  http://www.encircledbygrace.com/

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