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February 2, 2021 at 9:06 pm #91384Anonymous
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Hello!
So I just finished the third-draft version of The Apostle’s Sister chapter 1. (Yes, I’m being a productive procrastinator and focusing on making the first chapter “perfect” before I move on to second-drafting everything else. XD) It has already gone through two rounds of beta reading, and I’ve taken it as far as I can with those suggestions.
So to make this short (because I can be longwinded, sorry!), if you’d like to beta read Chapter 1, let me know. I would appreciate it!
Just a warning though: I made the customs of the time period very vivid, and there is some graphic content. I tried not to make it overly so, since this book is meant for teens. But I would say that it most likely wouldn’t be appropriate for anyone under 14.
Thank you!!
February 2, 2021 at 9:25 pm #91386Anonymous- Rank: Eccentric Mentor
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@joy-caroline ME ME ME ME ME ME ME PICK ME ME ME ME PLEASE ME ME ME!
Ahem. I would love to beta read Chapter Uno of TAS. No issues with content, of course. I appreciate the opportunity.
*quietly chanting the background “Me me me me me me me…”
February 2, 2021 at 9:35 pm #91388@joy-caroline
Ooooh, did somebody say they totally needed someone to read through their first chapter? COUNT ME IN! I’d be more than happy to take a looksie at it, if you’d like! I think this book sounds very interesting, so I’m on board 🙂
*also chanting in the background*
February 2, 2021 at 9:37 pm #91389Anonymous- Rank: Eccentric Mentor
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@gracie-j
Great, thank you! Email me at jc@joycarolineauthor.com and I will get the first chapter right to you. Much appreciated!!
February 2, 2021 at 9:39 pm #91390Anonymous- Rank: Eccentric Mentor
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Yay! Sounds awesome. Thank you so much for volunteering!
Just email me at jc@joycarolineauthor.com and I will send the chapter to you.
February 3, 2021 at 2:19 pm #91407Anonymous- Rank: Eccentric Mentor
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I just realized you gave your email in the WIP Chat, so I’ll send the chapter there. That way you don’t have to worry about emailing me.
Thanks for beta reading! I really appreciate it!
February 3, 2021 at 2:30 pm #91409@joy-caroline
Oh, great! I tried emailing yesterday but I suppose it never went through… I don’t send very many emails, so I probably didn’t do something right lol. I’ll be happy to check out your first chapter though!
February 3, 2021 at 2:34 pm #91410Anonymous- Rank: Eccentric Mentor
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That’s ok, haha. Sometimes it doesn’t work for no reason… idk. But I just sent the chapter to your inbox! Hope you enjoy it, and thanks again!
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