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@seekjustice I need to give it some thought, and then I will get back to you.
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@seekjustice I am still not able to view the story. I sent you a request for access. My email begins violinistforlife just so you know
@Emily, @dragon-snapper @that_writer_girl_99 @Shannon . try this one? it might work.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1m4ByW8oXVRAPeb_Xykz0CyuJ805spV8epzmVyARyTkY/edit?usp=sharingINFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.
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@seekjustice now it is working! Thanks!
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Hey @seekjustice, I made a few comments, but I don’t really have much to say. You are a great writer my friend!
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What an amazing story! I bet you will win that competition @seekjustice. When is it?
My goodness. I wasn’t expecting to be so moved by your story @seekjustice, it’s very good!
There’s a couple of tiny edits I’d like to suggest, but the document is currently set in “view only”–if you change it so that I can comment, I’ll be able to leave those suggestions on the doc and you can decide for yourself if you want to keep them.
It’s very good!
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@that_writer_girl_99 You might be able to send her an email requesting access. That’s what I had to do.
Aha. Good point @shannon
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@Shannon, thank you! it didn’t give this story a whole lot of thought when I was writing it, it just came out and I really, really liked it.
@Emily, the competition deadline is the 31st August. And thank you, 😀
@that_writer_girl_99 and thank you! I wasn’t expecting to be so moved by writing it either!INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.
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Happy to do it @seekjustice!
@seekjustice, If you’re still in need of readers, then I would love to
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Kapeefer til we're old and grey@alia, certainly! The link is further up on the page and should still be working. You can either comment on the piece or you can make some comments here, I don’t mind.
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