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January 19, 2023 at 6:29 pm #129457
I’m good with either! Probably if I had to choose it would be Feather. I haven’t heard much about her. But I’m good with either one!
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January 19, 2023 at 7:04 pm #129467@lightoverdarkness6 Feather it is then! Sadly, I have to get off now, but I’ll write the first part tomorrow!
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January 20, 2023 at 5:28 pm #129550@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76 @felicity @mineralizedwritings @esther-c @sarafini @lightoverdarkness6
Backstory of Feather Greystone
(This’ll start from when she and her sisters are sort of young, sometime during their training. They don’t have names yet and are called by numbers, but I will use the names instead because it’s easier for me.)
The hallways are stark white, with windows to the cloning facilities in the atrium. CF-9694–young Feather–watches as a batch of new tanks are unloaded to their proper spots.
“What’re you doing?” Her sister CF-1018, soon to be known as Liberty, walks up next to her. “Watching the cloners do their thing?”
“Yeah.” Feather doesn’t take her eyes off of it all. “It’s so strange, how they do it.”
“It kind of is.” Liberty admits. “There’s a squad in training right now, and Watcher told me he wanted us all to be there.”
“Sure.” Feather follows her sister to the training arena, where five male clones are currently battling through a simulation. The rest of her squad are there also, as is their trainer, an ARC trooper called Watcher.
“See that?” He pointed to the floor down below. “Don’t do that.”
Feather notices that the squad has left one of their soldiers behind, sprawled next to one of the barriers. She gasps. “He must be hurt!”
“Exactly. Never leave a man—or woman in your case, I suppose—behind, especially not if they’re injured.” Watcher tells them.
Sure enough, even though they make to the end, the squad fails the simulation and is reprimanded for abandoning one of their own. Feather watches as they leave, making a mental note to visit the medical center later and talk to the clone who’d been shot.
“Don’t worry, I’d never leave you girls behind!” shouts CF-9140 (a.k.a. “Star”), jokingly slapping her larger sister CF-2248 (“Bullet”) on the back as CF-8134 (“Rivet”) reviews the notes she’d taken.
At this point, I ran out of ideas, so we’ll just call this a break. I decided to introduce all of the major characters in Feather’s life at this point (herself, all four of her sisters, and her something-of-a-mentor) in this one scene.
What do you all think?
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January 22, 2023 at 11:36 am #129633Aw, young Feather!! That sounds good!! Unfortunately, I haven’t watched much Star Wars, so I don’t really know who they all are, but I like it! *Goes to research about Star Wars*
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January 22, 2023 at 12:40 pm #129638Sorry, y’all, but I don’t think I’ll be able to keep up with this RP as well as the Character Castle and the author one about to begin. Sry I wasn’t able to really do anything. Hope you all have fun! 😄
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
January 23, 2023 at 3:17 pm #129765@esther-c No problem!
@lightoverdarkness6 Cool–I’ll just warn you about one thing. Feather, her sisters, and Watcher are my own characters; you’re not going to find them in the Star Wars continuum anywhere else but my brain.Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
January 23, 2023 at 6:35 pm #129792Haha, yeah, I figured that out when I searched “Feather and Crosshair,” and magnificent Google brought up stickers and tattoos of a rifle scope sight, lol XDXD.
That’s so cool that you came up with them!! This whole time I thought that they were Star Wars characters XD.
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January 24, 2023 at 4:18 pm #129875@lightoverdarkness6 HA HA HA I’m soooooo sorry about that, I should’ve warned everybody. (goes to be a bit mortified somewhere)
Crosshair is an official canon Star Wars character, alongside his brothers. Go ahead and look up “Clone Force 99” if you want to learn more about them. It’s Feather, Watcher, and the rest that aren’t canon (but if you want to learn about what Watcher’s like, look up the Arc Troopers from the Clone Wars.)
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
January 24, 2023 at 4:28 pm #129877I had a couple links ready, but maybe KP doesn’t allow that…?
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January 24, 2023 at 7:54 pm #129922Anonymous- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Sorry to jump in on your convo but lots of people have linked stuff (that aren’t KP links) so I think you’re good. 😉
January 25, 2023 at 10:45 am #129967@keilah-h
Sorry I’ve not had time make my characters react, but I am enjoying reading Feather’s backstory“Nothing says autumn like slurpin’ apples.” -my uncle
January 25, 2023 at 12:25 pm #129978HA HA HA I’m soooooo sorry about that, I should’ve warned everybody. (goes to be a bit mortified somewhere)
No it’s fine!! Haha, it’s totally fine. Actually, I’m embarrassed at how long it took me to figure out that she was your character XD…now you see where my charrie Matthew get’s his awkwardness 😂😅🤭😭 (No don’t be mortified! It’s funny😂😅)
Also I’ll try to RP as my characters reacting this afternoon. 🙂
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January 25, 2023 at 5:15 pm #130050@lightoverdarkness6 Ok then!
BTW here’s the links I was talking about (I think I’ll have to put them on separate posts):
https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Advanced_Recon_Commando
That’s what Watcher is.
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January 25, 2023 at 5:15 pm #130051https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Clone_Force_99
Crosshair’s squadron.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
January 25, 2023 at 5:23 pm #130055https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/CT-9904
The character himself. Note that his appearance here most closely resembles him under the Republic.
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