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April 28, 2023 at 9:31 pm #141736
So like many of you, I cried many tears over the death and the loss of many Avengers. So in this Fanfic, I’m writing about what would happen if they didn’t die and where the Avengers are now. It’s more about the Avengers when they are off duty but there will be some action too. So you guys can read the first chapter and tell me if it’s even worth continuing. (there are a few extra characters and some I made.) Also, I haven’t seen the really recent Marvel movies so some characters might not be the same.
Also sorry about my terrible grammar lol.
Chapter 1
Clint was halfway through his tour of the new Avenger Headquarters with Kate. She had asked a ton of questions and always had something to say. Clint was reminded how much he didn’t like young people except his children.
“It looks the same as the old one,” Kate said walking through the main area.
“You weren’t here for the old one.”
“Yeah but it’s what I imagined, and I did see photos. You guys aren’t very discrete, you know.”
“Discrete is overrated!” Both Clint and Kate turned to see Bucky and Sam playing chess.
“Oh Kate, whatever you do, stay away from these guys.” Clint gestured to Bucky and Sam.
“Checkmate!” Bucky declared.
“You cheated!” Sam cried.
The boys started to squabble and insult one another. When Steve interrupted them both.
“What are you guys doing?!”
“Playing with a cheater that’s what.”
Steve gave them a stare that immediately made them get up. Steve stopped Bucky right before he left.
“Hey, uh what piece did you take?”
“Do I look like I would cheat?!” Steve raised an eyebrow.
“Alright, I took his queen.”
Steve rolled his eyes and gave a chuckle.
Kate looked over at Clint.
“So who’s going to make a new suit for me?” Kate gestured to the worn-out suit she was wearing.
Clint looked around intel he finally spotted her.
“Gwen will.”
Kate almost had a heart attack from the pop-up of a young adult girl.
“Oh hey, you must be Gwen.”
“Yeah I am, It’s nice to meet you.”
“Gwen I working under Stark, like an apprentice.”
“So your like are tech guy… I mean girl?”
“Uh no,” Gwen said with a stern voice. “I’m Spider-Women, I just happen to be good with computers.”
“So you’re like the Girl version of Spider-Man? I’m the girl version of Hawkeye.”
“No, you’re not,” Clint said in a hesitant voice
“Mmm… yes I am.”
Clint gave a skeptical look. “No, you’re really not.”
Gwen grew bored of the debate and slipped away to her lab.
Clint and Kate finally agreed that she would be the new Hawkeye when Clint retired or died whichever one came first.
When they reached the training room Kate watched a younger girl fight Bucky.
“Who is that?”
“Falon, she’s been trained to fight by Nat and Steve taught her how to use his shield and other weapons.”
“Ooh, is she the girl version of Captain America?!”
Clint looked at Falon she had just brought Bucky to the ground. He obviously wasn’t trying his best but still, she was impressive. “She’s something alright.”
When Kate and Clint finally finished their tour Kate turned to look at Clint.
“So where will you be?”
“At home with my family, raising my kids, But I’ll visit from time to time.”
“And Tony?”
“Also at home raising his daughter and taking care of his pregnant wife.”
“Pepper is pregnant!?”
“Due in two months.”
Kate stared at Clint.
“What?!”
Kate raised her eyebrow.
“Oh, It’s a boy.”
“Should I said them a gift or a card?”
“Why on earth would you do that?! You don’t even know him.”
“But I will soon.”
Clint rolled his eyes.
(and I love Kate she’s my favorite)
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-ThorneApril 30, 2023 at 6:21 pm #141800Alright I forgot to mention some things
1. I know this is not the most creative idea lol but usually my fanfics are more about adding onto the original story than coming up with a new one
2. try your best not to figure out how most of the events in the recent shows could have happened if the Avengers didn’t die lol (your mind will short-circuit lol)
3. Now that Steve isn’t with Peggy yay (no offense to Peggy lovers) who should Nat be with Nat&Bucky, Nat&Bruce, or Nat&Steve
4. SPOILER FOR SPIDER-MAN NO WAY HOME do you guys want me to have everyone forget who Peter Parker is? Either way, I have a story so you guys pick
5. Have any of you seen the end of Wanda’s show I have no idea where she would fit into all of this, but should Vision be dead?
Alright that’s all the questions and statements sorry for it being so long
P.S. usually my chapters are shorter and I do try to edit but sometimes I miss something lol
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-ThorneMay 1, 2023 at 10:58 am #141821I loved reading this! I haven’t seen Kate in anything but I liked the way you wrote her relationship with Clint. And Falon and Gwen are such a fun addition! I def think you should continue this. 😉
and to answer some of your questions… since there’s no Peggy, I would vote for Steve&Nat. But Bruce&Nat are cute as well. 😁
For Peter Parker… I DON’T KNOW! My first response would be ‘no way’ cuz that was so sad, but then thinking about it more… it might be a good story. Idk. 😂
I have not seen WandaVision (I really want to tho) but I know in the new Dr. Strange movie… SPOILER she dies. But I also know in that movie she kinda turns evil, which I don’t like. So my vote would be write her pre-WandaVision, maybe even pre-Vision’s death?
Anywayssss, there are all of my thoughts!
I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child
May 1, 2023 at 1:49 pm #141826I loved reading this! I haven’t seen Kate in anything but I liked the way you wrote her relationship with Clint. And Falon and Gwen are such a fun addition! I def think you should continue this. 😉
Thanks (Kate is amazing in Hawkeye it’s like my favorite Marvel movie/show)
and to answer some of your questions… since there’s no Peggy, I would vote for Steve&Nat. But Bruce&Nat are cute as well. 😁
I know they both would be perfect but I’m leaning towards Steve&Nat uhh but then I want Bruce&Nat I can’t pick (Maybe I could do a love triangle)
For Peter Parker… I DON’T KNOW! My first response would be ‘no way’ cuz that was so sad, but then thinking about it more… it might be a good story. Idk. 😂
I think I will do Peter Parker so that everyone remembers him because I want to see him with Morgan (I can already imagine all the sweet scenes)
I have not seen WandaVision (I really want to tho) but I know in the new Dr. Strange movie… SPOILER she dies. But I also know in that movie she kinda turns evil, which I don’t like. So my vote would be write her pre-WandaVision, maybe even pre-Vision’s death?
Yeah I think I’ll do where Vision doesn’t die because technically he’s Avenger and I said the Avenger didn’t die in this FanFic
Thanks for the input it’s always helpful
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-ThorneMay 1, 2023 at 3:12 pm #141834Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@smiley loved reading that!!! I totally vote for you to continue it!!! 😀
Sam & Bucky…those two…😂
I’d prob vote for Steve&Nat, although…Bruce&Nat is cute too, and I’ve rarely ever seen Bucky&Nat 😏XD But probably Steve&Nat (i’m probably going to do a Steve&Nat ship in a new fic XD)
I’d prob vote for everyone to know about Peter, bc it’d be kinda interesting 😁
Vision should be alive!!!! I haven’t watched WandaVision, nor do I really want to, lol, but I’d love for Vision to be around!!
those are my thoughts!!! Pretty much just agreed with @euodia-vision, lol 😂
May 1, 2023 at 3:16 pm #141836@freedomwriter76
thanks for the input lol
I’m sooo torn between Nat&Steve or Nat&Bruce (I have this idea of Steve&Nat dancing lol but what about Bruce) Maybe I should have someone for Bruce so I don’t feel bad lol
and yess Vision is one of my favorites (A little unethical) but still amazing
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-ThorneMay 1, 2023 at 9:55 pm #141906so here’s the second chapter it’s focused on Falon who’s a very damaged character. (also just a warning I did a punching bag scene which has been done way too much but it works so well lol) Also, this chapter is pretty short.
Chapter 2
Falon slid her legs under Sam making him fall to the ground, and then out of the corner of her eye, she saw Bucky coming for her, she quickly tossed Cap’s shield at him knocking him to the ground. Then she pointed her wristbands, which Natasha had given her, at them. She would never actually shoot them but it was simple procedure.
“Alright, I give up,” Sam said breathing hard.
“Me too,” Bucky got up and shook hands with Falon. “Good fight.”
Both Bucky and Sam looked up at Steve who was holding in a laugh.
“Impressive, really impressive,” Steve said sarcastically clapping his hands. “You couldn’t beat a fifteen-year-old girl.”
“We weren’t trying are hardest, and she isn’t just any fifteen-year-old girl.”
By now Falon had made her way to the hallway that overlooked the training room and where Steve was standing.
“Still you should’ve beat her,” Steve said with a smirk
“I’m going to go train in the exercise room,” Falon said about to leave, but Steve grabbed her arm.
“It’s ok to relax and to have fun you know.”
Falon looked at him as a few, small, almost invisible tears ran down her face.
“You and I both know that I lost that chance…when the serum got put in my body,” Falon said in a shaky voice. She twisted her arm out of his loose grip and walked off.
Sam and Bucky came up behind Steve. “That girl works too hard.” Bucky watched as she walked away.
“I know.” Steve let out a sigh.
Falon punched the bag repeatedly and every thought from her past made her punch harder. She wasn’t supposed to survive the procedure not at her age, but she did, she was a survivor. She had learned to survive and how to keep surviving. To survive meant to not trust or get attached, it meant never quitting or taking a break. It meant being… Lonely. Falon punched the bag as hard as she could causing a rip in the bag, but it injured her hand more. She shook it in pain trying to ignore it. But after a long period of trying to ignore it, she gave up and left to put something on it
Steve walked out into the main room, he had just finished training with Bucky and Sam. He spotted Falon putting a bandage on her hand in the kitchen.
“What happened?” Steve asked entering the kitchen.
“Minor wound.” Falon shrugged.
“Is it minor or just what you tell yourself? I know what it feels like to have the world on your shoulders.”
“It’s not the whole world it’s just me.”
“That doesn’t sound very Avenger-like.”
“Well I’m not one yet and intel I am one I only look after myself.”
“I don’t believe that instead, I think you’re scared of failure, and if you fail as Avenger most likely others will die.”
Falon looked at him and shrugged “If that’s what you want to believe then fine. But do you know what it’s like when every day of your childhood people are sticking painful needles in your body, knowing that no one cares if you survive or not, and all your life being nothing more than a guinea pig?! So can you blame me for not trusting anyone?!”
Falon left the room throwing away the bandage wrapper on the way out.
What was he supposed to do about her?! She seemed so much like him but was so scared to admit that. So scared to get hurt or to fail and hurt someone else.
So here it is tell me what you think. I still have to go into Gwen’s whole backstory lol
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-ThorneMay 2, 2023 at 12:43 pm #141931Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@smiley love it!!! curious to see the rest of her backstory and Gwen’s, too!!! 😁
can’t wait for more chapters!!! ❤️
May 2, 2023 at 12:46 pm #141933@freedomwriter76
It’s funny that you say that because I just finished the third chapter (I was in a really Writer’s mood today)
And we get to see Nat&Steve yayyyy!!
Chapter 3
“Natasha,” Steve said as she entered the training room.
“Up for a fight?” Natasha asked with a clever smile.
“I am if you are.”
“Good,” Natasha charged at Steve. He dodged and from there it became a fight of quick moves neither one laying a finger on the other one.
“I’m worried about Falon. She reminds me of me, someone who feels like her only purpose is to be a weapon.” Natasha said making a quick kick at Steve which he managed to dodge.
“I’m worried about her too. She seems to have a lot of problems and a lot of trauma.” Steve tried to take the legs out from under Natasha but failed.
“I don’t want to work her too hard. When people do that to you it makes you feel like an object instead of a person.” Natasha leaned into Steve.
“What happened in Russia?” Steve grabbed onto Natasha.
“Well, first I was taught ballet and then how to kill people. I had surgery that made me unable to have children and I was sent on missions to hunt down and kill people. So how do you think Russia was?” Steve and Natasha start swaying back and forth.
Natasha looked up at Steve. “Do you realize that we’re dancing and not fighting?”
“Funny I always imagined my first dance with music.”
“I don’t dance very often, I had trauma with the whole ballet thing.” Natasha leaned in to kiss Steve. “How long are we going to keep us a secret?”
“Last time I checked there are no rules against it.”
“And what rules are those?”
“The ones me and Tony never got around to writing.”
“That doesn’t sound like you.”
“Well we were going to do it but then Ultron happened and then Bucky and uh then Thanos.”
“I see well maybe you and Tony should get around to writing those.”
Steve started to get nervous. “Me and Tony haven’t talked in a while and we haven’t really talked about the whole civil war thing either.”
“Don’t you think it’s time to hash that out?”
“Maybe but I’m not so sure.” Steve turned to see Natasha. “Natasha, I want to tell the others about us, but I don’t want to have another argument with Tony, and break up the Avengers again.”
Interrupting the conversation Vision came walking in.
“I’m sorry… I didn’t mean to interrupt.” Vision disappeared through the walls. Vision would have never guessed that those two would be together.
“First rule, no making human-like robots,” Steve said sarcastically.
Natasha laughed, the only people who could ever make her laugh were Clint and Steve.
“What are we going to do about Falon?” Natasha had Steve’s arms wrapped around her.
“I don’t know,” It pained Steve to see a girl destroying herself, but Natasha had done the same thing. People make others into weapons and expect them to be happy.
“I love you, Steve.”
“I love you too.” Steve had been chasing Peggy for so long that he had overlooked Natasha, but now having her in his arms he didn’t have a single regret.
They danced a little bit longer intel Natasha made a quick move breaking up their dancing and bringing Steve to the ground. “Beat you,” she said in a clever tone. She started to walk away but turned back and gave a smile to Steve.
Natasha made her way to Gwen’s lab. When she arrived she looked around the room, Stark had definitely built it.
“Hey,” Gwen said putting some kind of chemical on a belt-buckle-looking thing.
“Hey,” Natasha looked at Gwen, she was a smart and kind girl, but just like everyone else she had a dark shadow from her past. “What are you working on?”
Gwen gave a clever smile and turned behind her. “How do the suits work!?”
Natasha watched as out of nowhere Scott and Hope appeared.
“Perfect thanks,” Hope said taking off her helmet.
Gwen got down to screw the belt-buckle-thing on Scott’s suit.
“Tony was supposed to do this but he had to take Pepper to a doctor’s appointment. So I stepped in.”
“Nice,” Natasha said. “It’s nice to see you guys. Where’s Cassie?”
“Out in the Kitchen.”
“How’s that going, missing five years I mean?”
“I feel like she’s not my daughter anymore.”
“Someday she will just give it time.”
“Thanks,” Scott looked at Gwen. “So are these suits ready to go?”
“Yeah, they are.”
“Great!” Scott held out his hand for a high-five. Gwen looked at his hand and then turned away.
“You’re supposed to hit it.”
“I know, but I don’t celebrate doing my job.”
Scott stood awkwardly not knowing what to do next.
Hope finally broke up the silence “Me and Scott are going to go test these suits out in the training room. Thanks again.” Hope gave Gwen a thankful smile.
Gwen gave her a smile as she walked out.
“What’s wrong?” Natasha asked taking a step closer to her.
“It’s easier not to make friends because if something happens then… you know?”
“Yeah I do,” Natasha left the room, she knew that Gwn needed time to herself. How could so many broken people be in one building?
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-ThorneMay 2, 2023 at 12:57 pm #141939Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@smiley awwwwwwwww 😭❤️
i love that!!! ❤️❤️❤️ especially the fact that their training turned into dancing…😂😍
May 2, 2023 at 12:58 pm #141941@freedomwriter76
I know it’s so sweet lol they are perfect lol
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-ThorneMay 2, 2023 at 1:03 pm #141944Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@smiley ahh, yessss. (i’m still a fan of Steve&Peggy, but Steve&Nat is wonderful too XD)
May 2, 2023 at 1:09 pm #141948@freedomwriter76
(I never really liked Peggy but I don’t blame lol)
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-ThorneMay 2, 2023 at 2:44 pm #141959@freedomwriter76 @euodia-vision
So I just finished making this board for Steve, Nat, and Falon
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-ThorneMay 2, 2023 at 2:45 pm #141961Also in case you haven’t figured this out Falon is my baby she’s just amazing
she’s basically the mix of Steve&Nat
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