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January 11, 2023 at 2:49 pm #128811
A rustling wind, a shuddering chill, a woodpeckers knock on your windowsill…
The golden brown fields in the sun and the rain, like deer running past is the weather today…
A clear autumn sky full of dazzling stars, with seasons like this aren’t we glad that they’re ours.
January 12, 2023 at 5:05 pm #128958@charityanne
Love it!I wrote a poem about Autumn a little while back. Do you want to read it?
"All we have to decide is what to do with the time that is given to us." - Gandalf
January 12, 2023 at 5:30 pm #128961January 12, 2023 at 6:00 pm #128967Cool! It’s not my best but here you are. 🙂
Fall
Fall’s my favourite over all other seasons
And for that, there’s several simple reasons.
The air smells so cold and crisp.
The wind’s whispers drive leaves into drifts
I can wear cozy sweaters without getting hot
A book and mug of black tea just hit the spot.
With school back in session, there’s better routine.
Each dawn everything’s dusted with a frosty sheen.
Creature’s coats grow more glossy and thick
Fallen leaves create a flowing rainbow in the creek.
Its a time for all types of freshly baked goodies
With nights of games and nostalgic good movies.
Catching up with faraway friends on video chats
Sharing our struggles, old memories, and updates.
Harvesting heaps of various fruits and vegetables.
An abundance of colour adorns the kitchen table.
The comfort of feeling the wood furnace’s warmth
Whilst outside a deep chill creeps down into the earth.
"All we have to decide is what to do with the time that is given to us." - Gandalf
January 12, 2023 at 6:18 pm #128969January 12, 2023 at 6:47 pm #128979very nice!
there where a few places that didn’t quite rhyme quite right but overall I LOVE it!
January 12, 2023 at 6:51 pm #128983@orielle2023
Yes! I like woodpeckers (even though they can be very destructive) they are very pretty!
[I wrote this poem (in bed) at a family friends house and they had a lot of woodpeckers.]
January 12, 2023 at 8:02 pm #128986Yeah, it still needs some tweaking lol
Thank you.
"All we have to decide is what to do with the time that is given to us." - Gandalf
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